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BCBS January contest entry - Exoforce - Bionic Origins . This is my entry for January. I know it's kind of long, and I apologize. Couldn't find out how to make a flickr picture as a title pic, but oh well. . Takeshi- Hi, everyone. I'm Takeshi. Hikaru- And I'm Chr.. I mean Hikaru. We are part of an elite resistance force known as... Together- Exoforce! Takeshi- Our mission is to protect mankind from their greatest foes, the robots... of Sentai Mountain. Hikaru- Although they tend to stay inside the mountain and don't really go outside, we still think they could take over the world. Takeshi- Thats why we are here, to protect everybody, and... also to show off our brand new war machines!!! I am soo excited, aren't you Hikaru? Hikaru- Ecstatic... Takeshi- Don't you mean Ex-static? You’re such a sour puss, ya know? Hikaru- Shut up. Someone's coming... Devastator- Hi Guys! Hikaru- Hey, how did that thing get in here?! Devastator- Hi Guys! Takeshi- Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you that Ryo was over here earlier. He must have left the door open... Devastator- Hi Guys! Hikaru- Yeah, but how did he even find us? Devastator- Hi, Guys! Can I play with you guys?! I...like...play...guys...(accelerated and heavy breathing, then pausing)... Hi! Hikaru- Ok dude, that's really creepy. You’re going to have to leave. This is a top secret base. Takeshi- Hikaru! He's not doing anything! He's just slightly creepy, thats all. Hikaru- No Takeshi! Don't you remember what Sensei Keiken said? Sensei Keiken(in flashback)- Remember young warriors, you must always... Kill The Creepy Ones! Takeshi- Oh yeah! I remember! Ok, let’s get him! Devastator- You no wana play? In that case...(voice drops)... Prepare To Die!!! (small battle ensues) Takeshi- Raaawwwwrrrrr!!!!!! Devastator(running and screaming like a little girl)- I'll be back, you meanies!!! Hikaru- What was that? Takeshi- My ceremonial bear roar. It works every time. Hikaru- Well, he’ll probably be back with reenforcements, so we should probably suit up. Takeshi- Great idea! Now we can show everybody our new mechs! Yaaaaaayy!!! Hikaru- Oh, right… Takeshi- Well, as you can see, we look a little different than our normal human selves. This is because we are wearing Bio-suits. When the robots barricaded us in the Golden City, we began to experiment with new control systems. We came up with, or I should say, Ryo came up with a system that taps directly into the brain, so that we can directly control our machines as if they were extensions of our own bodies. Take it away, Hikaru. Hikaru- Oh, well, this is the Hunter Scout. After Sensei “accidentally” dropped a shipping container on the Stealth Hunter,I was forced to use a scout mech. Good thing I’m forcing Ryo to build me another one, or else I would probably be on a rampage right now. Anyway, at least it’s armored and has the latest in plasma weaponry, including my new plasma blade. Takeshi- Ok, Hikaru, we get it. Ok everybody, meet the new and improved Grand Titan, which I now call Blade Titan! I found that the old version was clunky and slow with the new bio-controls, so I decided to modify it for speed and agility. Hikaru- Takeshi… Takeshi- I also decided to change my gattling laser to a beam cannon. Hikaru- Takeshi… Takeshi- I also got a larger, more powerful claw blade, which I am most pr… Hikaru- Takeshi!!! Takeshi- WHAT??!!! Hikaru- He’s back… (sounds of engine roar, then slowly decreasing, while epic music plays in the background) Devastator- You say you no wana play…. Devastator- If no play…then we fight!!!! Me and Iron Vulture will DESTROY YOU!!!! Takeshi- Wow, this guy is serious. What now Hikaru? Hikaru- We can take him. We just need to work together… Takeshi- Eat claw robot scum! (he locks blades with Iron Vulture) Hikaru- Great…Way to go, Takeshi. (begins shooting with plasma rifle) (they battle fiercely) Takeshi- Hey Everybody! I forgot to show you one of the coolest parts of my titan! Hikaru- Takeshi! A little help here!(clashing metal and battle sounds) Takeshi- The panel of my cannon opens, and missiles come out! Isn't it great?!! Hikaru- Help Takeshi! I can't hold him off!!! Takeshi- All right, you little whiner! I'm coming!! Hikaru- You know what? Enough of this! (stabs into cockpit) Takeshi- Here, Hikaru, I'll hold 'im for you. Devastator- Hey, don't hurt me! I only wanted to play!! Hikaru- Play with this, you psychopath!! (stabs repeatedly) (very violent images-do not watch if you are under 13- it's not good for you) Hikaru- Well, that's done. Hey, Takeshi, let's go play a round of COD before lunch. Takeshi- But what about the mess we just made? Hikaru- Ehh, Ryo will clean it up. Don't worry. Takeshi- If you say so... (dramatic image foreshadowing the survival of the Devastator, and a picture of the cockpit) Fourth Wall Commentary- We I hope you all enjoyed the little skit. Took some time to get the pictures up, but they are good quality, so it was worth it. If anybody likes the design and wishes to learn how I made them, I could post some instructions, so let me know! These are truly unique, for I have searched in vain for bio-mechs. I wish everybody good luck in the contest, and may the best moc win.


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