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Balance of the Force Chapter 14: Attack on the Jedi Temple . Coruscant 2 days after the events of Chapter 13. Oblivious to the return of Darth Vulnero the Jedi attempt to maintain a sense of normalcy in the face of the coming darkness.... . (The Jedi Temple, Coruscant the training room of Vince Yond'Ull) Yoda- Good, good. Let the force flow. Concentrate, clear your mind, you must. Vince- I'm trying...er...doing master. (Suddenly Vince completely breaks his concentration and the disk drops to the floor, he grabs his head and writhes in pain) Bartolo- Master Yoda- What's wrong with the- Yoda- Sense it too I do. The dark side. (Vince stops but is still visibly shaken) Bartolo- Padawan what's the matter, what just happened. Vince- It was...terrifying master...like a cold darkness...and it was coming right for me. Bartolo- I must inform security, I don't like the looks of this at all. Yoda- Tell the council I must, a grave new threat has come to the Republic. (Korriban The recently-vacated Tomb of Darth Vulnero) Kasamir- My lord, you summoned me? Vulnero- Kasamir, tell me do you know the story of Darth Vulnero, my story? Kasamir- Indeed, you were the most formidable Dark Jedi ever to live and single-handedly conquered the Republic in less than a year. Vulnero- And, I was destroyed by a little Jedi whelp! A boy named Yond'Ull! And now his spawn plague me still! I sense that same presence that destroyed me! And I will destroy that boy, and then...nothing will stop me. (The Jedi Temple Security Room) Bartolo- Chief! Chief- Desmond- Security Chief Desmond Ortu at your service, I assume this is about the disturbance. Bartolo- Yes, how- Desmond- I am a Jedi you will remember, and I must assure you that the Temple is secure as ever! Nothing's going to- (He stops as an alarm sounds) Bartolo- I hope this is a drill... Desmond- We never hold drills, Duke, somehow something has invaded my Temple! Come on! The intruder's in the dormitories, we can cut him off there! (Dormitory Halls) Desmond- Captain what in the name of the Force is going on here? Captain- Sir, we have an unidentified force user in the Temple, several Jedi have moved to stop him. Bartolo- How did a Dark Jedi get in here? (Before he can respond a Mon Calamari Jedi soars back into the hallway) Desmond- What in the- (Darth Vulnero follows dueling a Jedi) (He force pushes the Jedi into the wall, knocking him unconscious as he deflects a Temple Guard's blast) Vulnero- I don't have time for you Jedi weaklings! Desmond- Back off Captain we'll handle this. (Vulnero wastes no time attacking Desmond) Vulnero- You wield a strange weapon Jedi, perhaps you will be more sporting than the rest! Desmond- I was just thinking the same thing! (Vulnero parries Desmond's strike as Bartolo charges) (But Vulnero blocks the attack) Bartolo- For a 1,00 year old Sith you aren't any better a duelist than the Sith today! Vulnero- There are more powerful things than dueling, Jedi! (Vulnero blasts the Jedi back) Vulnero- For I am not a simple force-wielder, I have conquered the Force itself! (Meanwhile in his dormitory Vince listens to the sound of battle growing steadily closer, suddenly the sound of a loud thunk of a body hitting the floor is heard) (His door hisses open as a Sith emerges) Vince- Who are you? Sith- Oh, no one important. (Suddenly Vince becomes disoriented and falls unconscious to the ground) (Vulnero arrives in the room minuets later only to find a broken window and a pile of glass on the floor) Vulnero- What?!! NO!! (Later in Duke Bartolo's office) Bartolo- He left just as suddenly as he came, a study of the archives indicates ancient Sith and Jedi often had the power to teleport themselves to areas of high force concentration. Desmond- There wasn't anything we could do to stop him, we lost over 20 Temple Guards and Jedi, not to mention automated defenses! Yoda- But a far greater loss has been inflicted, I fear. For the padawan Yond'Ull disappeared has he... Bartolo- Then that's it, no one can stop him now... Yoda- No, sense another I do...


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