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Prologue to Legend Of The Gems CYOA! . This is only the Prologue so no choices! . Bad guy 1: Hey look at this map gremlins! Bad guy 1: it shows the way to the two gems of power! Bad guy 2: when i smash?!! BG1: not now crankor! BG1:this map is important! we need to keep it secret and protected! Striden: we need that map! Daron:how will we get it?... Random bad guy:hey i heard talking... Hey theres somebody up there! Striden+Daron:(get pulled in by a strange force) AHHHHHHHHH! Striden: Get up and fight! Striden: (chops off a guys head) AHHHH... SHING! Striden: Daron watch o... (Badguy shoots Daron with crossbow bolt and skims sholder ) Daron: OW!! Striden: Daron! Daron: uhhhhnnn. (Bad guy sticks out weapon) (Striden trips and gets knocked out) (Striden wakes up) What?! Striden: Where am i? Striden: oh the piramid! (gets up) Daron?? Striden: where is he? Striden:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! DUN DUN DUHHHHH!!!! Striden: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Stirden: must get in...night time... Striden: finally!(climbs in)

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