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ZMF-D4 Shogun Zaku and ZMF-D3 Karas Zaku (General Goto and Commander Sakura use exclusive mobile suits) . Hi people. This MOC features two major figures of the United Pirate Clans and their exclusive Mobile Suits. . Past:The General survived the previous war and earned the title of Ace. After the war, he was promoted and transfered to a military training facility where he had to train new recruits. Later on he was put in charge of the facility, it was this time around he met his best student and future second in command, Sakura. She was a war orphan and was saved by Goto who than raised her as a daughter. She became quite good at marksmanship and quick manuvers with a Mobile Suit. Some people from HQ however didn't like how a "simple" pilot was given the task to command a training facility, thus they framed him in order to remove him from his position. He was accused of treachery and murder and he was sent to execution. Before his execution however, Sakura rescued her teacher with a stolen Mobile Suit and they fled from the colony. After 1 year of hiding, they ended up joining the remnant forces of the Empire that lost the war, after a few years of silence and peace, out of nowhere the Pirate Clan Union appeared and raided a whole colony and other military installations. The team that raided the installations and stole some prototype MSs was led by non other than Goto himself. Present: Now, General Goto is one of the 3 Great Shogun leaders, accompanied by his loyal and deadly second in command Sakura. He's seeking revenge and glory on the battlefields. Altough his on the side of the pirates, he never attacks civilian installations and colonies. He's respected by his men who would give their lives for their general. Also, he hates the pilot of the Sin Gundam, but symphatises with the pilot of the Valor Gundam. Now on to the Suits!! Front view: Karas Zaku (left) Shogun Zaku (right) Rear view Karas Zaku side view (right) side view (left) The Karas Zaku is the personal unit of Commander Sakura it carries an automatic beam cannon on its shoulder shield rear skirt detail and beam saber front skirt detail leg and feet detail long range beam rifle head detail backpack detail: This unit uses the same backpack that the Valor's Edge uses Commander Sakura herself Shogun Zaku, personal unit of General Goto side view (right) side view (left) rear view The General's unit sports heavy armor and a heavy beam assault rifle twin auto beam cannons "The Crimson Flag" skirt armor and "Force Katana" Heavy beam assault rifle leg and feet detail backpack detail General Goto as seen without his helmet Poses: Some of the elit forces also got these unit types but with weaker performance And the best pic for last! I really like this one. Whew...this took me some time to make and write! Thanks for reading and viewing! Tell me your toughts about this MOC and the "Story" I'm trying to make. PS: Goto was inspired by Anavel "The Nightmare of Solomon" Gato and Andrew Waltfeld. Sakura was inspired by Lunamaria Hawke and Marida Cruz. (Gundam fans will know who these characters are!)