Retribution . . Part 2 of "The Invasion"
The TFOLs thought that the fight was over, that the AFOLs had been wiped out and victory was theirs. This however, was not the case. Hidden in a secret bunker in the Cliffside overlooking the carnage, the survivors of the disaster plan their revenge…
Man standing at Window: “Mr. Pitter, I want a head count please. How many did we lose?”
Wes Pitter: “Accounted for so far, we have Crimso Giger, Garth Danielson, Dave Kaleta…”
Wes: “Dave Shaddix, Heath Flor…”
Wes: “Luke Chapman, Moodswim, Yuri Fassio…”
Wes: “Alan Crisp, Master Shifu Leo J., and myself.”
Man: “Is that all?”
Wes: “Well, we also found Kelso’s sheep.”
Man: “Not surprised. She’s survived worse. But please get her off the table, we don’t WANT to know where she’s been.”
Wes: “Of course.”
Shaddix: “So what are we going to do now?”
Yuri: “Those punks wiped out everything!”
Kaleta: “The devastation was total. We must have our revenge. What can we do?”
Man: “Don’t worry my friends. I…”
Phipson: “…have a plan.”
Luke: "Dear GOD he's hidious!"
Phipson: "Shut it Chapman!"
Later that week, in downtown Tfolston.
Shaddix: “So this is it?”
Shaddix: “THIS is your revenge plan? To give them a stripclub?”
Phipson: “Think about it. A TFOL is only a TFOL until what age?”
Phipson: “And the minimum age to get into a strip club is what?”
Phipson: “Exactly, at which point they become an AFOL and then they’re one of us. Revenge my friends, is a dish best served… patiently.”
Shaddix: “I gotta admit it Chris, this is one brilliant plan! Argh… Urk… my arm…”
Yuri: “What happened to Dave?”
Phipson: “Wow. I guess it really DID kill him to say something nice. Who knew?”
Phipson: “Alrighty then, let’s go inside shall we?”
Yuri: “Right behind you!”
Alan: “I hope they can break a hundred?”
Heath: “I hope I brought enough tape!”
Kaleta: "Hey, they have fleshies in here. Should we call Richard?"
The TFOLs could be seen pacing the street in front of the club every night for years to come. Peeking whenever the door was opened, hoping to catch just a glimpse of the wonders within. The AFOLs had their revenge though the use of patience and cunning. By biding their time, they were able to rebuild their ranks and again, rule supreme over MOCpages…
Fourth Wall Commentary: When I first did the “Invasion” moc, I had no intention of making a follow up to it. Then everyone started with the “can’t wait for the second one” kind of comments. I thought, OK, sure, I can do that, but I didn’t want it to be yet another full force invasion thing. I wanted to take it in a different direction. Then… this idea hit me. What’s the ONE thing that AFOLs have that TFOLs envy (and vice versa actually. Youth is wasted on the young)? Age. All the teens want to do is grow up and be adults. So how could I exploit this? Bam… there ya go. I actually want this to be a small learning lesson for you teens. Don’t be too quick to try to grow up. Enjoy your youth while you can. Once it’s over, it’s over. Ok, enough of my soap box. Hope you all enjoyed my little bit of poking fun here. Till next time true believers!