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Star Wars-JEDI HUNTER-Part 2 . Finally, the next part of my comic is done! This took me 3 weeks because I wanted to have more story, more action, more locations, and more effects! Hopefully, it paid off. Please rate and comment:) . It's been 2 years since Order 66. The new Empire has hired me, Moog Shim, to track down and destroy the last of the Jedi. Darth Vader personally asked me to find and kill his former master, Obi-Wan Kenobi. The trail has led me to the remote ice planet of Hoth where I've found Jedi Bek Hoganoo, one of the last to see Kenobi before he went into exile. I've defeated and cornered him, about to learn Obi-Wan's location. Bek: "Wait! Y-you used to be a Jedi?! Moog: "That's right, young one." Bek: "What happened to you?!" 2 years ago. I was sent on a mission to Technus Primus, a planet comprised of living machines. For obvious reasons, the CIS wanted to invade and conquer this world. I was sent with my master Sudo Korma and a squad of clone troopers. Next thing I know, the clone commander gets a holo-message from Palpatine and the clones start firing at us! The clones literally blasted me to pieces, leaving me for dead! Sudo fought them off and escaped in our shuttle. He didn't even bother to see if I survived. The coward! It was then that I grew to hate the Empire and, even moreso, the Jedi! Some of the techno-organisms of the planet found what was left of me. They revived me and built me a new body. If it hadn't been for those machines, I would have died! But that was then and this is now! Bek Hoganoo has something I need. Moog: "Now, Jedi, you will tell me where I can find Kenobi!" Bek: "I won't tell you anything!" Moog: "No matter. Your thoughts have already betrayed you! Tatooine! He's on Tatooine!" Moog: "Thank you, Hoganoo! You've served your purpose. Say hello to the Force for me!" Bek: "No! I won't let you get to Obi-Wan! I'll get to him and warn him you're coming!" Moog: "Wha-?!" Moog: "You fool! Where do you think you're going?!" He takes his ship and heads towards Tatooine. But I don't give up that easily! I board my ship "the Mad Gundark"... ...and quickly catch up to him. It's only a matter of moments, Jedi! I have you now! Brave, but pointless, child! That was a lucky shot. And the last you'll ever make! Now it's off to Tatooine where I'll finally find Master Kenobi and where I'll finally KILL HIM! To Be Continued...


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