Ascension of Shadows: Part 1: A LEGO® creation by Michael H : MOCpages.com

Ascension of Shadows: Part 1

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Toa Darneris's creation

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(In the Torture Chamber- Toa Darneris is chained to a torture cage.)

Darneris: [Wakes up] Uhhh...where am I? Anyone?! Hello?!
(Darneris hears small footsteps)
Darneris: Who's there? show yourself!

Demon King Santorakh: I'm right here, Darneris, right here.
Darneris: Santorakh?! what are you making me do?!
(Demon King Santorakh jumps onto the cage)

Demon King Santorakh: Nothing much. How would you like to be part of my....experiment?
(Darneris spits in Santorakh's eye)
Demon King Santorakh: You little....Kezir! initiate Transformation Sequence!

(Kezir initiates sequence)

(Darneris writhes in pain, with heat waves emitting from his body)

Darneris: Argggghhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
Demon King Santorakh: Kezir! Level 2!!!
Kezir: Yes sir!
Darneris: Argggghhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

(The sequence stops. Darneris doubles-over in pain)

Darneris: Ughhhh....what's happening to me?

Darneris: My arms!

Darneris: My torso?! what's going on?!
Demon King Santorakh: You're becoming....a Demon!
Darneris: A Demon?! Stop it! PLEASE!!!
Kezir: You can't!! he he ha ha ha ha ha!

(Avatar Tiro and Toa Lehas break through the ceiling)

Avatar Tiro: Show's over, Demon!
Demon King Santorakh: The show has just begun! Kezir! ATTACK!

(Avatar Tiro throws Kezir onto the cage)

Kezir: Ugghhhh...
Avatar Tiro: Lehas! get Darneris and lets get out of here!

(Darneris climbs onto Lehas' back)

(Avatar Tiro, Lehas and Darneris leave)

Demon King Santorakh: He he... prepare for your doom, Tiro.

(In the Toa Federation Incubation Chambers)

Avatar Tiro: I don't know what to do, Dala. Should we neutralize the poison, or should we wait to see what happens?
Dala: Wait. That's the best idea.

(The Next Day- Darneris has fully changed into a Demon!)

Dala: Darneris?! wha...what happened to you?!

(Darneris roars. The shockwave throws Dala to the floor. He breaks out of the Chamber.)

Avatar Tiro: Dala! what happened?!
Dala: Darneris...he escaped!

Avatar Tiro: escaped?! with him gone...it could be the end of Karzha Magna if his bestial side takes over...
Dala: We must stop Darneris...no matter what!

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Duncan Life

February 5, 2009

I can't believe how awesome this is

I made it

Michael Harding

February 4, 2009

Quoting Matt D. Excellent! I love the storyline. Post the next part! One of your pictures isn't loading though...

I know about the picture, it is meant to be Tiro kneeling down to help Dala. The next part will be possibly at the weekend, or the week starting Feb 13th to Feb 23rd. I have that time off. Actually, make it 4 to 6 weeks, I broke my right arm!

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Matt D.

February 3, 2009

Excellent! I love the storyline. Post the next part! One of your pictures isn't loading though...

I like it

Gringat The Airlord

February 3, 2009

Cool story! Hey, wanna join the Bioncile bard Hall? It's a group for Bionicle writers just like yourself! Already got quite a few members.