it looks like a recon soldier

This is an exellent mecha! I'm not such a big fan of use of Bionicle, but you used it very nicely. Also the photography could use some work, but otherwise this very nice!

As I said before, I'm just taking your advice and scrapping the whole alliances/wars thing, I'm still going to keep the Demiurg Coalition as my MOCmilitary though.

You do not need to scrap the faction; well written backstory is a nice thing to have, as it lets you make a mediocre moc good via commentary.

very nice! I like the overall shape of it!

Thanks! Coming from someone who builds mechs and mech bays as huge and amazing as yours, that means a lot to a guy who has just entered into the wonderful world of mechdom!

I think this is really good. The way you made that "X" shape on the front of the chest is way cool!

Well, yes, I do love the Pohatu foot pieces. (ORIGINAL Bionicle for the win!!) Anyway, I've changed my mind, I think that I'll take Areetsa's advice and scratch the whole alliances/wars thing. I'll still have the Demiurg Coalition as my personal fictional MOC-military, but I think I'll just keep it to myself. Thanks for the offer, though.

For a first, it is amazing. You may want to discard the whole 'adversary to the une' thing however. 'Alliances' and 'wars' are very annoying. They are no longer in fashion.

don't you love the pohatu foot pieces, i do. and i hope John responds with a counter mech of his own! LETS THE BATTLE BEGIN. by the way if i don't get into the UNE, could i allign with you? my skills are noteworthy, and as a mercenary group, you wouldn't be sorry!