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Toa Juran: Chapter 1 - The Coming of Toa Hijuaro Special Effects
This is my first story. This is the special effect version. Please read, comment(good), and rate(good). Depending on which version is more popular no special effects or special effects that will decide which I will use for the rest of the stories.
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Hijuaro: Near the end of my shift as guard and no rahi I need something to do.



Hijuaro sees something move.
Hijuaro: What was that?!
He squints and sees a Bohrok-Kal attacking some peaceful rahi.
Hijuaro: Finally something to do.
He withdraws his sword and runs toward the Bohrok-Kal. Suddenly it turns and makes a weird noise. Just then two more Bohrok-Kal jump down out of the trees and block off Hijuaro's escape.
Hijuaro: Uh-oh I can't beat 3 Bohrok-Kal, and I can't go back to the village for help. Oh ya the cave that Kalion showed me the other day. I think he said it can block rahi from entering.
So Hijuaro runs toward the cave.



As soon as he starts running one of the Bohrok-Kal fires an energy beam at him. He is just barely able to block it.



Then to slow down the 3 Bohrok-Kal he cuts down some of the trees to block their way. Just before the tree falls one of the Bohrok-Kal blasts his leg but he continues running.



When he enters the cave he sits down against a rock.



As soon as his hand touched the rock it started glowing very brightly, then he started to glow brightly too.



When the glowing stopped he saw that he was more powerful and his weapons where stronger. He then went out of the cave and saw the Bohrok-Kal.
Hijuaro: Time to test out my new powers.
Bohrok-Kal: There he is get him.
All three Bohrok-Kal then blast him so he backs up into the cave but the beam wasn't stopped.



Hijuaro then raised his shield hoping to deflect at least part of the beam. Instead the shield absorbs the whole beam. He then notices the blue cylinders that grew out of his shield started glowing.
Hijuaro: Maybe I can fire the energy back at them. Oh well its worth a shot. Have a taste of this!



He then fires the energy out of his sword and fries one of the Bohrok-Kal.
Bohrok-Kal: The sword-man fried brother. Kill him!
The 2 Bohrok-Kal then run at Hijuaro.
Hijuaro: Strike one.
He easily side-steps the 2 Bohrok-Kal and then cuts the head off of one of them.
Hijuaro: Strike two.
He then notices the blades at the end of his shield.
Hijuaro: Hum I could use this as a buzz-saw.
He then jumps at the final Bohrok-Kal and slices off his head.
Hijuaro: Strike three you are out. I need to go talk to the Turaga about this.



He then runs back to the village. As soon as he enters the village the matoran move out of his way and look at him with awe.
Hijuaro: Weird? Why are they looking at me and acting like Iím a hero.
Turaga: The prophecy has been fulfilled. The statue is glowing and you match it.
Hijuaro then looked at the statue next to the Turaga and saw that is was him.
Hijuaro: What is the prophecy?
Turaga: That is a story for tomorrow. For now go sleep. You look like you need it.





(Back by the cave.)

???: Master he killed the special Bohrok-Kal.
Master: Yes he will a problem. Minon clean them up. We wouldnít want anyone to know what we did to them.
Minon: Yes master.
???: Should I kill him.
Master: No I will donít want to chance him being stronger than you and killing you.
???: Master why didnít you go and kill him instead of hiding and sending the special Bohrok-Kal.
Master: I did that for 2 reasons. The first is that he was a chosen one and if you kill a chosen matoran he will be reincarnated in one month as another chosen matoran. This will continue forever until the toa stone which is protected from those with dark energies like me is drained of its power by turning the chosen one into a toa. The second reason is that when the stone turns the chosen one into a toa. It releases enough light energy to kill anyone with dark energies that are within a 10 mile radius. That is why I disguised myself as a peacefull rahi and had the Bohrok-kal pretend to attack me knowing that he would save me then I ran as fast as I could to get out of the 10 mile radius.
???: Oh.
Master: Now lets le
Deep Booming Voice: Invoy why is my power still being restrained! I thought I told you to rid the island of its toa stones so I may leave my prison and take over the island!
(Master) Invoy: Iím sorry master Iím almost done just 4 more left.
Deep Booming Voice: Well hurry up!
Invoy: Now letís leave.

TO BE CONTINUED. DUNT DUNT DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN


All special effect done using paint I know how to use photo shop but my computer doesn't have it so I have to use paint.



Comments

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  February 2, 2009
Quoting Gringat The Airlord Good, but there are a couple of problems. 1: There are only 6 Bohrok-Kal, and they were all killed by the Toa Codrex. 2: Don't list whether or not he's powerful enough to defeat them. The story'd be a lot better if he actually DID attack the Bohrok, get hit, flee for his life, and THEN attack once he got the extra stuff. Just sayin'. You did ask for advice from me.
Thanks but the part about the bohrok-kal i will repeat what i said to someone that commented on the non-special effected one they are special bohrok-kal. read the part with invoy
  February 2, 2009
Good, but there are a couple of problems. 1: There are only 6 Bohrok-Kal, and they were all killed by the Toa Codrex. 2: Don't list whether or not he's powerful enough to defeat them. The story'd be a lot better if he actually DID attack the Bohrok, get hit, flee for his life, and THEN attack once he got the extra stuff. Just sayin'. You did ask for advice from me.
 
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