yeah its good but he is right you should have had them scouting or something. the are to obedient to add a little "comment" like that.(unless they are inexperienced like a shiny) they are completely loyal and dont have attachments but they do have a bond with their jedi general. do you have any droids? if so you could do a battle seen unless you do that in ep. 3. sorry for all the correction. :'( good job though!-rex
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od, can't wait to see more, but you know that clones are not attracted to females or males right... it was the un cloned stormtrooper recruits that did that kind of stuff, clone really didn't even "drink"
well i did not know that but thanks for telling me.