Droid 1: "Ohhh, why the hell did we get stationed here?!" Droid 2: "I think it was because you called General Grievous a glitbiting piece of junk." Droid 1: "O RLY?!"
The Crimson legion closes in on the checkpoint.
A grappling iron lands between the droids. Droid 1: "What the?"
Then the stealth team was upon them. Droid 2: "I surrender! And I think I just oiled myself."
Yu'ruok Kcarr: "I feel a disturbance."
Sher'roc: "No brother, you feel me."
Yu'ruok leaps at his brother with a mighty strike, but Sher'roc blocks high.
Now it's Sher'roc's turn to advance.
Only to be countered by a Force Push.
Yu'ruok sheds his armor
And makes a giant leap. In order to skewer his kin.
Sher'roc uses the force to pick up his saber and blocks the deadly blow.
The force of the impact sends Yu'ruok sprawling. Sher'roc lifts his lightsabers to deliver a death blow.
Yu'ruok deflects the blow with his saber
But Sher'roc, resourceful as he was, dropped a nearby Hailfire Tank wheel on his brother. Sher'roc: "I hope you will find your way to the light, brother."
Captain Doyle: "That was incredible." Corporal Refseh: "Truly a sight."
Let's go home.
T Fett: "You all finished up?" Sher'roc: "Yep." Fed: "Let's leave, time means credits."
An explosion wracks the ground as Refseh flies up in two pieces.
Droids crowd the ledge. Fed: "Looks like we have company." T Fett: "There's too many! Were done for!" Sher'roc: "No, I sense help is already here." Fed and T Fett in unison: "What?!"
Suddenly, the line of clankers is cut down by clones.
"Another one for the scrap pile."
T Fett: "It stinks that Refseh is dead, he was a great soldier." All in unison: "Ya..." Fed: "Anyway, thanks for the help Appo, and you too Pullox." Appo and Pullox: "Yessah, no problem!" Fed: "Alright, let's get back to Coruscant so we can have a relaxing massage."
nice comic,its realy detailed,check out my new battle of munnilinst moc
I like it
Elite Commander CC-7576
December 22, 2008
Judgeing: 19 of 20 for size (the detail is awesome, I think this is the place where the detail can count, exept of that the scale itself is good, but still it could be better.), 19 of 20 for story (no real reason for the seps to be there, still very cool), 29 of 30 for Lightsaber duel (the force pushes etc. are there, but could be worked out a little better), 20 of 20 for Clones v.s. Droids (Your Clones are awesome and when they´re fighting they´re even better, the whole fight was really good), 10 of 10 for guest (2 guests, good work.) Final points: 97 of 100.
I like it
Commander Raptor
December 22, 2008
very cool can you check mine out oh and i dont care a bout the rank thing
I like it
Commander Raptor
December 22, 2008
so i guess its all up to fed to decide now good luck :)
20 of 20 for size (so far only one to say actule(Not sure if I spelled that right) size and has a good lenght), 19 of 20 for story (nice ending.), for Lightsaber battle 30 of 30 (One of the best so far. Reminds me of feds.), Clones V.S. Droids 19 of 20 (Quite a bit.), guest star 10 of 10 (You have two.Thanks for having one as me.) overal: 98/100! Thats the best rating I've gave so far! Congrats! ~ECTF
With SSBB I don't have Wi-Fi, but I might get the Nintendo Wi-Fi USB adapter and we can have Brawls! What character do you use? I use Green Kirby or Ike.
Interesting stuff! nice comic and great build as well! keep on the great work >>> peace.. Fofo :)
I like it
Elite Commander CC-7576
December 17, 2008
Gute Arbeit. Die Landschaft ist echt super, allerdings lassen sich die vielen verschieden Klontruppen (phase 1, phase 2) als einen Fehler bezeichnen. Ich erzähle dir Genaueres beim Richten.
This is very nice, thank you for using backpacks on the droids! Thank you! Thank you!Thank you! More people need to do that! The plot is structured well, in my opinion. My one suggestive critisism is that the base(not the building, the ground) needs to be made of thick bricks, and a little added texture. I also agree with Sithassasin. Overall, this is a good comic. I noticed that on Fed's Clone Wars episode, you gave it a five and said that it was not very good. ( ? ) Could you check out my "Fox Pwnage" for me? Thanx - KNIGHT
