This is my entry for the second round of the AoT Tournament! It took so long, because the WHOLE story was delted by a password entering...grrrrrr! Enjoy it! It is long, but i think it is worth a look!
About this creation
Newt Rundor: What way of a mission is it? A fight? Master, please answer me!
Mi Laro: Don’t call me a master. And you must learn to wait, my padawan. Oh! Someone is calling me. Excuse.
Mace Windu: We found something about your padawan out, Mi Laro. He told us he is someone of the Techno Union, but not a worker there, or? Why we found some secret files about him? He was a worker there. And not a usual! He was a leader of a special group! He is a spy! Care about him. He must be under arrest!
Mi Laro: ……..ok, master.
Newt Rundor: What is the matter, my master…eee Mi Laro…??
Mi Laro: Why do you lie?
Newt Rundor: I don’t know what you mean?
Mi Laro: You are a spy!, aren’t you??
Newt Rundor: No! I swear! I lied, because I didn’t want to work for the Sith anymore!!
Mi Laro: Tell someone else lies!
Newt Rundor: No! Please! I don’t want to fight against you!!!
Mi Laro: Too late!
Newt: You must listen to me! I’m not a spy!
Mi Laro: ……………and I was trusting you!!!!
Clone: Good We finished our patrol walk.
Fox: Yes…I will look a last time for today through my binoculars. Maybe we overlooked something …………..what is that?
Fox: DROIDS!!! And Two Jedi! We Must Help Them!
Clone: I get messages! Overall on Coruscant are droids!
Fox: Get help! Ask somebody to help us to defend the Jedi!
Clone: Yes, sir!
Mi Laro: Droids! They come for you, or?
Newt: What? No!
Mi Laro: Of course! You gave the separatist secret information how they could invade Coruscant!
Newt: I can’t talk to you anymore, or? You’re naïve! Listen to me before you judge over me!
Fox: Here is help! I try to stop the invaders! A support team is coming, too!
Fox:????Why you fight against yourselves??
Fed: I’m here! I will support you, Fox!
Fox: Good, thank you, Fed!
Fed: Why they fight against…
Fox: …don’t ask. Is that very important, now?
Fed: I will contact other legions to order supporting! 7th Corps. Can you hear me??
Rex: Yes I can hear you, Fed! All right?
Fed: You know that we are attacked by droids, or?
Rex: eehm…yes! What is the problem? Oh. More victims! Excuse!
Rex: Eat that!
T-Fett: No. We can’t come yet! It Is a bad moment!
Miggy: Hurry up, Fett! We should support the legion near to the senate!
Fed: Nobody can come! Don’t wait for help!
Fox: Wah! My cover is going to explode!
Newt: Listen to me! Mi Laro!
Mi Laro: Betrayer!
Fed: Ok! Most droids are already defeated!
Mi Laro: This is your last chance! Give up!
Newt: No! I only will give up if you will listen to me!
Mi Laro: You disappoint me! I thought I learned you more!
Newt: My lightsaber!
Mi Laro: Give up!
Newt: no….I have my reasons!
[Laro pushes Newt with the Force]
Newt: Ah!............Good bye…my master…
[Flashes come out of Newt’s arm]
Newt: My hand! AAAh! Owww… good that I can arrange my hand…
Fed: I’m sorry for you, general…
Mi Laro: No…I should be sorry for me…
Mi Laro: Chancellor? We defeated the droids here.
Palpatine: Good job! Take Fox and come here! I’ll give you a mission…..on Sacoshi……
The 4 vignettes and the main building
The roof after the battle
Elite Marshal Miggy…..Decals by Miggy
Elite Commander Fed…..Decals by Miggy
Elite Commander CC-7576(Rex)…..Decals by me
Elite Commander T-Fett…..Decals by Miggy
The greatest thanks I will ever give goes to Miggy for the Decals! Thank you!
Elite Commander Fed: 101/100
Elite Commander T-Fett: 96/100
Elite Commander CC-7576: 96/100
All in al: 293/300
I like it
Elite Commander CC-7576
December 22, 2008
Judgeing: 19 of 20 for scale (impressive work! But the color at the main building is to colorful( yellow red, white red, white yellow)), 18 of 20 (Jedi would listen, they are no Clones so they don´t have to follow orders in that way), 29 of 30 for Lightsaber duel (good work, still I see some unnice details), 20 of 20 for Clones V.S. Droids (This was really a lot of Cklones V.S. Droids), 10 of 10 for guest ( 4 guests, very good). Final points: 96 of 100.
19 of 20 for size, 19 of 20 for story, for Lightsaber battle 29 of 30 (Good force. and it lasts for the entire thing!), Clones V.S. Droids I´m giving a 19 of 20 ( quite a battle.), guest star 10 of 10 (4 of them. thanks for adding me to it!) overal: 96! Great job! ~ECTF