The back- I expanded the wings
The cockpit with Elite Shimpmaster Miggy
Elite Shipmaster Miggy with Elite Marshal Commander Miggy- Yes, they're the same person!
Look, I know the cockpit is crappy, but if you put peices to the left and right side of Miggy, the windshield doesn't close. I know, Elite Shipmaster Miggy looks awful, but he is sort of cool in a strange way with his shipmaster shoulder things and open-face breathing helmet gear. As you can see, I added extra weapon-wing things in the middle of the ship and I extended the wings. I edited the cannon on the top and I also added that round windshield on the back, I don't know what it is supposed to be, but I like it! Er, yeah, please rate and comment!
Okay, well, go ahead, if you like. And oh, 'course I don't think the republic is mine! I aint stoppin' you from anything else now! -Dax (P.S. - When did I say "Elite Commander" wasn't the Trinity's? I just don't like how they throw a fit whenever someone uses the word "elite" to describe something. It pisses me off. Period.)
The "beyond similar" is because my page is called "Join the Republic!" and under your future building projects is "Join the Republic!". Sorta too close, from my view, I dunno about you. Again, it is not my position to stop you from anything, but still, ya know... Anyways, I guess you could, but just make a conscious effort to not be too similar.-Dax
Um, I read your comment, and then saw your future projects list, and, well, that's beyond similar. I know it's not my trademark, but I think that each builder is licensed to some of their own rights. Of course you wouldn't copy it, but, oh gee. I dunno... I'm the only person that I'm aware of the uses a system like that (legions upon rank). I would just appreciate it if you respected my rights, and came up with your own idea. I mean, you already have three alliances or something. Besides, Sean Kenney is reforming MOCpages for the change of the year, and he's including things like friend lists and stuff. Maybe you could just wait for 09... Thanks so much for understanding. -Dax
Far better than your previous version. I would suggest though working on the cannon and engines a little bit more. The one technic rod feels too weak, perhaps you could use 1x1 cylinders instead. As for the engines I don't know what to suggest on how to improve them but right now they also lack substance. Like I said though nice improvements over the original.
Wow! Great improvements! Seriously though, I don't see anything wrong with the cockpit. I actually think it looks pretty cool. I think Elite Shipmaster Miggy would look cooler if he had green (as opposed to sand green) legs, to better match the ship, and the rest of your army. Or maybe white. I also think you could give it some bigger wings. (the ship, not shipmaster Miggy!) Either than that, great job! Sweet cannons! And I like the way you used the plates and sloped bricks to kinda round the sharp angle where the wing meets the body. I also like the way you used a tiny turbo engine piece as a jet in the back. So as I've already said, great job Miggy, great job! ~ James ;D
actually fed isnt the eltie crime lord he is just a crime lord im still looking for someone to lead with me im thinking about my friend who lives by me but i dont know. anyway ill put the TPE on the page soon im busy right now with some school cr@p