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Okay Blade, here it is!
About this creation
Prepare to lose, Blade! (This is gonna be tough)

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Here we have the pure white land,
To the left you might see,
That is barren, empty, silent, and bland,
A man stands alone, and there he will be;



This half of the river is frozen over;
Rock as a shore, no joy to be found;
There are no roses, daisies, or clover,
No one can find a scent; not even a hound;



The only fun is a radioactive spider;
But there is no place to play,
Hide-and-seek is gone; there is no place to hide her;
Snow blankets the earth, and falls from the sky; no rain;


But then we turn our heads to the right;
Happiness reigns, wildlife is free;
The plants are growing with the sun shining bright,
O here we are, in this place, shouting with glee;


This side of the river is flowing fast,
A sandy beach covers the ground,
There might be fish; come on and cast!
This is the great place; the greatest place around.



Now where do you want to be?
I don't know about you, but the warmth is calling me!



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There it is; my opposite worlds MOC. (aka eastern and western Washington)




Wow Goldman, being an ambassador is hard work!
I have like nine of those faces so I might as well, right? =)





RULES:
You must be logged in for your vote to count
You must vote for both entries (JD Luse and Blade B)
You must leave a review. Smiley’s are nice but the scores are taken from the written review.
In your review (on both MOCs) give a score of 1 to 5 (5 being the best) for the quality of the build. Then give a score of 1 to 5 for the quality of the story that goes with the build.
Your scores will then be added up, tallied, and totaled.
Voting will close on Saturday, July 19th at midnight (2400) USA Central standard time and the winner will be declared! The first runner up! The loser will then be forced to build a MOC stating the superiority of the winner. That MOC should be posted by the following weekend…



Comments

 I like it 
  July 17, 2008
5/5 for the build and the story. Very nice MOC !!!
 I like it 
  July 14, 2008
Well, the build is good but not your best. I'll go four on the build. The poem was a creative touch, so I'll give a five for story. I gave the same votes to Blade, so in my book, you tied.:)
 I like it 
  July 13, 2008
it was a nice poem i vote for you ! good luck!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
5/5 for both story and build. i love the chilling suspense/poetry you put behind it. great work! (i couldn't decide whoses was best, lol)
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
The build is okay, but could use some work. 4/5 *The river doesn't have natural curves, doesn't look that good* The story gets a 5/5 b/c of good poetry and a good moral.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
5/5 for the build and the story JD,Nice Moc!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
you have my vote. The guy chilling in the jungly part is awesome :) 5/5 for the build, 5/5 for the story: nice poetry :P
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
My vote, build: 5/5, some nice effects and fairly clean. Story: 5/5. Overall very nice!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
OH JD! I want to tell you quickly, AND ALL YOU OTHER DUDES AND DUDESSES THAT I AM CHANGING THE END VOTING TO FRIDAY THE 18TH! GOT THAT? THAT IS ONE DAY EARLIER!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
Alright JD, nice volley! I think between the two, your build is a bit more complex than Blade's - 5. It's a real toss up for me regarding story, although I really like the poetry. I gave Blade a five on his, and I think you matched him there so again - 5. So it looks like I've given you one up, but it was a close match. Nice round for both of you...well done, guys!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
Nice Work. Build = 4.5/5 and the story is 5/5. The grass is greener on the other side. Anyways, you have my vote for the win. Well done.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
Great,i love it i give it a 5/5 for the building and a 4/5 for the story.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
ok guys i'll make it fast: build:4/5 - story:5/5
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
Well, your build isn't your best but it does beat Blades so we'll go 4. The story, I was very impressed. It's like visiting poetry corner while geeking out with LEGO. Full on 5 for that. In my opinion, you BOTH did very well over all but if I was the Single judge of this contest, I'd say that you won this round. But I'm not the only judge so we'll see what happens. Congratulations to BOTH of you. Good job guys. ~ Chris.
 I made it 
  July 12, 2008
So now both are up! Like I said before, this is going to be tough to win.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2008
Sweet, I bet I lose to this...I like the story...alot UM 5/5 for that, but the build...You put those trees on EVERY THING, don't you? I like the animals, and the sand but the green part is...green 3/5. Now back to the contest!
 
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