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MOCtag #8
Caution: Not as good or funny as the last seven...
About this creation
MOCtag #8: Why oh why did the chicken man cross the road?!



1. Underneath Shannonoia in a hidden tunnel...

...sat two rough looking men in sadness, their leader is dead; the beloved but hated Clucky is dead; the one who went swimming, hunting, and weightlifting with them is dead.



2. Their names are Goldman Young and Kieth Jones, who after Clucky's death fled to their former hideout with a great fear of the evil grill.


3. While they sat in silence, the future was in disorder and even the king was in it:

King: "What!?! The Chickenator was sent to KILL Rory?"
Chicken-man: "Cluck Cluck Begawk!!"
King: "I don't care if it was an accident you feather brained poultry, save him!"


4. But the Chickenator had already begun...

...he was here to help Goldman and Kieth as their new leader.




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More Pictures: Just a bunch of pictures combined to show you more of the MOCs and a MOC that didn't make the final cut. Make sure the look at 'em all.

















Apologies: Okay, so it's not that great, but it's my best shot for as many days as I built it in. I have to apologize for writing three sentences during the future scene, but hey, at least I didn't write a long comic strip like Kelso. (It's alright Mark, we still like you.)
Also please don't say anything about the chickens' combs being sideways...I've already killed myself for that. =)

Fourth wall commentary Phipson is right. It's very scary and very, very hard trying to keep up with all the other master builders. And to make it even more terrifying, I happened to realize that I'm the first creator under the age of eighteen to be tagged. Talk about pressure! I almost made a huge war at the death of Clucky, but then I made these two gangster type dudes, and thought, "Why not make a gang war?" But then the writer in me wanted to cap off the past episode, so I did so while introducing new characters and sealing the doom of Clucky. I thought it was kinda cruel killing the road workers in Shannonoia, but that town is getting to big anyway. Plus, if the Chickenator is against Rory then he's against everything else that's good, right?




The tension is building, the audience is rising, what will happen? The next person in control is our very own camp loving Tennessean: LegoLord 365


Here's MOCtag in all its glory, from the beginning.
MOCtag #1
MOCtag #2
MOCtag #3
MOCtag #4
MOCtag #5
MOCtag #6
MOCtag #7




Comments

 I like it 
  July 10, 2008
Sorry I'm reviewing this so late. LegoLord already posted the next one, but I had to come back here and say that I like your entry, especially the tunnel scene!
 I like it 
  July 9, 2008
might not be funny, but still incredible work! by the way can i tag you for the troll tag? thanx ~Edvin
 I like it 
  July 7, 2008
Yeah JD,sorry about the raod baseplate,I'm leaving today so I had to post MOCtag #9 soon.Thanks for pickin' me~LL
 I like it 
  July 6, 2008
"I'll be back...with roasted chicken on a stick!" I like that flaming grill tile! C ya~ElNickre
 I like it 
  July 6, 2008
Way to keep the ball rolling. Another fantastic entry in the Moctag series. Great Job.
 I like it 
  July 6, 2008
It's a darn good creation and you did yourself and moctag proud. In addition, I am 'green' with envy at your cypress tree collection - of which, I have none. Lee.
 I like it 
  July 6, 2008
So I go AWOL from MOCpages for a week and look what I miss. I like the quick turnaround, keeping the game going, but I do think another day or two to add a bit of polish to some scenes would have served you well. At any rate, way to hold your own playing with the big boys. Some random thoughts: Darn that Kelso and his more-than-four-lines bad example... How come this is the first I'm hearing of hidden tunnels in Shannonia? You'd think I'd know about them, having built the place... Giant evil flaming grill -- surreal... The chickenator joins forces with dead Clucky's henchmen to kill Rory and the king on the other hand wants to save Rory, what's so hard to follow? Come on people, keep up... I'm pretty sure Nadroj is under eighteen... I think you're rubbing those cypress trees in my face on purpose...
 I like it 
  July 4, 2008
i don't get the story.and i really don't get the grill thing!
 I like it 
  July 4, 2008
Very nice. I LOVE the grill *shudder*. Man, will Rory just DIE already! Come ON! Oh, well, we will have to see. Thanks for the post.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Very nice, very nice. I think the Chickenator is going to make an interesting character. Simple landscapes, to be sure, but they work well. I still have no idea what the flame-shooting grill is, but it looks good, so I guess it works? And I have a question about the whole MOCtag thing. How does one become eligible to be chosen?
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
The nice thing about being 14 is you'll grow out of it, not that getting older is that great. There's that whole responsibility thing and someone always expects you to get a job and all. It's been bummin' me out for years. I wish I had some LEGO when I was 14 but it wasn't something that we had as kids. I always seem to enjoy your stuff and this was fun. I like the throne room and the title pic. Both nice. garth
 I made it 
  July 3, 2008
Yeah Cody, like I said before, there are a bunch of 14 year olds on here. Including Robert Murphy. Nuff said.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
grea job,I love all the scenes you put together,and the avil gill part is cool,and all.hey did you know LL is like fourteen too?
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Lets see. The Intro Slide is awesome. Really like the shadows and artsy style. The chickenator and story are good as well. The MOC builds themselves could use a bit of touch-up, but they are definitely good enough to make this story work. Well played. Another nice addition to MOC tag.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
*Key "Sound of Music Soundtrack"* I am 14, going on 15 [this month]...leavin you [JD], -=LL=-, and Sho Fu-whatever in the dust...:P...definitely not the best MOCtag, but it's still really good. Following Kelso, Young, Goldman, and Ocean isn't easy, I know.
 I made it 
  July 3, 2008
Yup, I'm fourteen, as is a handful of MOCers around here...LL, you're up, can't wait to see what ya make!
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Uh... Cody, JD is fourteen too. As am I.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Ha,this following up stuff is gonna be tough,alrighty,I've got a plan,expect MocTag#9 soon~LL Oh yeah,nice story and build,and a nice additon.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
JD, you don't give yourself enough credit!! No doubt it's tough to do follow-ups of any kind. Not only do you have building standards you want to meet or exceed, but you've got a preconceived story that has to have some continuity with the last, AND you have to add your own twists in a way that's interesting, humorous, and open to additions for the next guy - yeah...no, pressure. You did beautifully!! Love the first MOC (simple and elegant), great presentation, the grill-tile from hell's hilarious, and you've set things up nicely for LL. Really well done, man!!!!
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Well done !!! Making a MOCtag must be a pain, because it's hard, but you've done it and it's COOL ! My favorite part is the evil grill. Congratulation !
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Mate WELL DONE! Terrific work with the builds, story and also your camera work and photos. The last shot of the Chickenator meeting the two villians is very dramatic. And the "evil grille"? Priceless! Don't worry about little things like the combs sideways; I didn't notice, I was too wrapped up in the story. Quality work man.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Congratulations! Nice way to keep the high standards of this little project. I'm lovin how the Chickenator, who I originally sent to protect Rory is now out to kill him. And nice work on the names of the henchmen! This is just a great addition all round! Can't wait to see where LL takes it from here. you did us all proud, take a bow. ~ Chris.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Well, this one's over can't wait for the next one.Although to be honest, I got a little mixed up there. Good day
 I like it 
  July 3, 2008
Nice job! The only thing that I would change would be to add a litle more detail to the tunnel, like maybe a couple rats and some toxic sludge.
 I like it 
  July 2, 2008
DANG JD, This totally rocks...I had no idea what you where up to, so this is a total surprise...JOB WELL DONE. It must have been hard competing with almost every MASTER MOCER out there...BUT IN MY OPINION YOU DID...WELL DONE MATE!
 I like it 
  July 2, 2008
Well well well, not bad for a fourteen year old. Nicely done here, I can't wait to see who Legolord picks... So nice job, Great considering the masters you had to compete with. Nice. Good. Awesome. Sweet. WHEN WILL I SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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