It's very good for a first attempt at this theme. [big bases] Keith Goldman's are better, but that's from experience and a ton of SNOT [tile] bricks. Overall, great job, and it could use more detailing. But the MOC is still is amazing, don't get me wrong.
yeah this is great? you've got a head in the right direction-the basics are down mastered, but as Kelso said, it lacks details and perhaps some good old SNOT. The main thing you need is greebling and fun little additions such as...vending machines or something like that? For the troops? I don't know...use your imagination ;D. Overall, nice job. I look forward to your next "Station"
Very nice!! I really like your over-all design, with the pyramidal structure on one side and the twin buildings opposite that. The waterway as a divider is a great touch and adds some nice color to the MOC. I think your color work is quite good, too. To take it a step further, I might suggest tiling the flat areas (if you've got the tiles), and adding a few more textural elements in the walls...or maybe a splash of greebling here or there. You're entering Keith Goldman's domain with the quality of the build and a few more details may get you across that line. Nevertheless, a GREAT build any way you look at it!!!