Well, this is my second comic. Hopefully you will be able to pick up on what's going on.
About this creation
So this is my story.
I guess it all started back when... back when... back when the dark forces of Baron Ulk attacked the city Rali. Rali was one of the last free cities of man. The Elves and Dwarves has already been defeated. It was just us left.
I dunno, maybe we could have won the battle. Maybe if some more gaurds had stayed to defend the city, we might of had a chance. We Blue Dragon forces had seen off a lot of attacks. Then when the Baron came, we all banded together. The Blue and Green Dragon forces, the Black Falcons, and a load more.
But the Baron's men powered through the Gaurds.
They fought well, but... Well, they didn't stand a chance.
Then came the Baron himself. It all went dark. At least, thats what i've been told. All he did was chuck a fireball at a Gaurd. But it was enough.
The last archer ran away.
So did the captain and the gunner. They stood a chance of escape.
But the archer didn't. Poor guy.
The Baron called it victory day. We called it death day.
Death at the hands of Baron Ulk.
2 Years Later
This is me. And now my story begins. My name is Jacen Claw.
Jacen: Arrgh! This sun! What am i doing here? (Smirks) Nothing at all!
Jacen: Man, it's so hot! Stupid crops. They always need to be cared for. It's not like they ever get to us anyway. Might as well just GIVE them to the Baron!
Jacen: What the?
Jacen: Holy smokes!
Jacen: Resistance fighters?
Resistance captain: Come on men! Let's take them down!
Jacen: Oh man, what am i doing?
Jacen: Hey, i helped you!
Stranger: I don't care. *Thud*
Glad to see someone likes my brick fiction. What you have here looks pretty good, I would like seeing it a bit bigger though. The only confusing element is the Gamorean and the fact Jacen Claw is also the name of one of your star pirates. Call me when part two is up and I'll call you when I get Erick three posted, which will be soon, Lord willing.