shattering the vistas of reality
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 In ambient wonder, I meander and wander
On a plane of glass spreading far and pass.
I know not where, what, or why,
But only I’m here, that or I’ve died.
 ‘Twas dreams, no, reality! So real it all seems,
Before me had unfurled our pure and pristine world.
But here I am, ignorant and blind,
Mired in solitude, my spirit confined.
 But wait, what’s this? Someone else, oh the bliss!
That I am not alone, a miracle has shone!
For all my journey has just come to an end,
There’s light before me, the world will amend!
 I approached the other as my hopes gather.
“Dear stranger most kind, would you chance be my friend?”
What sweet smile she had, suddenly turned so sour.
But what wrongs have I done at such early hour?
 Beneath my feet the grounds tremble and beat,
In a sudden flash, the world seemed to crash.
The glass surface shatters –revealing the abyss.
And into that darkness –death, I reminisce.
 Through the cosmic portal, the scourge thrust immortal
On that tentacle rack, and stretched torturously back,
The grotesque distortion of that female figure!
Helpless as I am, it pries me into the air
And stabs me in the back as I said my last prayer.
 And there I was slain, yet little I felt pain,
Only a numb cold feeling of the horror revealing.
I am still alive –a part of me died,
My wound has healed –a scar left inside.
 ‘Twas the agony of after, which I gravely consider
The most painful reminder of this death to disorder.
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March 10, 2011 |
Interesting, and very nicely done too. |
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July 30, 2010 |
...Umm,...interesting MOC... |
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October 25, 2009 |
brilliant creation man |
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March 13, 2009 |
I think the white guy symbolizes purity of not seeing evil, while the black guy symbolizes tainted minds. |
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November 18, 2008 |
erm o_o
well, i do like it.....but what sthat thing with the sword arm? eeh....nvm, that would spoil it.
well, good job! |
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August 7, 2008 |
gosh i must like you're MOCs =D |
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April 30, 2008 |
I love that creature...
I wish I knew where the pieces that connect its carms to the rest of its body came from!
I would make one of those things just for the fun of making crazy and bloody scenes with it....
I can only imagine it in real life...
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March 30, 2008 |
Dude,seriously sick and twisted......sweet.
Your poetry reminds me of my fav poet Edgar Allen Poe |
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November 11, 2007 |
Do you write these poems or do you read them (as your inspiration)? Either way, I think its all fantastic! |
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November 11, 2007 |
Excellent as usual. I think Im starting to understand these better :P |
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November 10, 2007 |
Symbolism clears my mind, especially when it rhymes. |
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November 9, 2007 |
Puerility and evil side by side. Very observant. |
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November 9, 2007 |
You scare me, I'm not joking.
This is great poetry, but so dark and evil, this is not funny. |
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