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Part II of my Lands of Mythron Story
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Marcus trudged through the woods, for ½ an hour after he’d landed on the beach… He started to tire out from lack of food and water. He must find food, or die.



Suddenly, a campfire blared out in the deepening dusk. Food! was his only thought. Marcus started to hobble towards it, as fast as I could.



But as a neared the fire, some 6th sense told him that he was being followed. Marcus began to think What if I’m—



Suddenly, the world was plunged into darkness, and everything went black.




* * *


When Marcus awoke, the first thing he realized was the cold blade of sword was just barely touching his neck. The second thing he realized was that there were three men standing around me, talking. The tallest one, and clearly their leader, was talking.
“Nice work knocking this, idiot out Rulf!”
“Sure thing boss.” One of them replied. The slight lisp in his voice gave away his buck-teeth.
“Wait.” Said a third voice, “this one looks rich… Do you think he’s from that ship you sabotaged, boss?”
“That ship is gone. Those blasted merchants are all dead. I’ve had a grudge against Lucius for years and years. I made sure I killed everyone on board.” He finished with a growl.
These are them! Marcus thought The Black Lotus, who Apollo warned us about! Hatred burned up inside him, once again. A new strength surged through his veins.



The Boss saw my movement and looked suddenly down at me. “Where’re you from, boy?!” he asked, gruffly. Marcus deiced it was better to stay silent than to answer and, in my anger, give away where he was from.



“Well then, boys, “ he said turning to the other two Black Lotus Operatives, “He won’t talk sooo…lets help him along.”



“Go grab a log, Merek!” The boss yelled



Merek started to walk over towards the fire…



As he neared the fire, a despite idea came to Marcus.



The Boss looked over at Marek, not looking at him. HeI put his plan into action at once.



Marcus’ foot lashed out and tripped their leader.



He stumbled and toppled into Merek, who was stooping next to the fire.



Marcus stood up, quickly, ready for anything, adrenaline coursed through his veins.



Rulf swung his sword at him. Marcus ducked and stood up again, facing him.



He leaped into the air, sending his legs into Rulf’s gut.



Rulf was sent, screaming into the fire.



Seconds after he’d landed his dropkick, the Boss dashed at Marcus, his sword ready for the killing blow.



Seeing no other weapon, Marcus dove for Rulf’s fallen sword



He grabbed the blade and turned over.



Marcus quickly parried his strike and bought by fist back



Then sent his fist into the boss’ face. Crunch!



He stumbled backwards, and fell.



Sensing movement in the tree above Marcus looked up, the third Black Lotus agent jumped from the tree!



He grabbed his tomahawk, in order to slow down this blow.


But the Ex-Black Lotus Operative leaped again, bearing down on Marcus.



As Merek fell on top of him, Marcus stabbed him in the gut. The man gasped as his comrade’s blade stabbed though him.



His body fell atop Rulf’s in the ashes of the fire. He was dead.



Seeing his dead or unconscious friends, the Boss dashed away. Marcus didn’t have the strength to chase him… I could catch him later. He thought.




Marcus stood up, looking around at the two operatives he’d taken out… he was exhausted… He slumped to the ground and picked up a turkey leg and started to munch on it. He felt better. Sleep started to creep upon his weary eyes….

Suddenly movement in the bushes woke him. The sun was starting to poke through the clouds, it was early morning. Marcus suddenly realized that he wasn’t safe here so he began to pack up. He striped the two dead operatives of their cloaks and weapons.



He’d eaten and geared up. I was ready. On to Pelmor I thought and with that I made for the road…



Hey!

Whsasup?

I’m pretty pleased with this build! Even though I H@TED building it, it turned out pretty well!! I like the trees and I also tried out a new idea with the foliage… What do you guys think?
Oh yea! The “Boss” got away, fyi AND he’s coming back to hunt down Marcus. His name is Favian, by the way… :D
When my last LOM intro got on the Explore Page, I was away… :\ I got back the LAST day it was on and got to see it in its place of glory. :P A huge thanks to all you guys that helped it get up there!! It’s my 2nd time up there and….yea. I’ll shut up now. Thanks, again for your support!

Part Three coming decently soon! Assuming school doesn’t hog up my entire schedule!

Thanks for checking out this build! Comments, likes, and critique are all welcome!
Soli Deo Gloria
-Graeme





Comments

 I like it 
  November 8, 2014
Very cool story! I like the foliage!
 I made it 
  August 27, 2014
Quoting The Dunedain98 Great work once again! I really like the foliage and fire! Nice story too! Though I wish there was an overall picture of the MOC...
Quoting Sean-Thomas Mahoney Nice Work! I can't really see the whole build. But it looks good from what I can see.
Sorry! I was super excited to start my SW build....(That is Helm's Deep size and will be posted soon!) I also h@ted the build at the time. :|
 I made it 
  August 27, 2014
Quoting Benjamin Olson Very impressive. I notice you changed the hair piece a little bit, but aside from that, all well and good!
Quoting Cameron Wilson Great story and awesme build. I was tense whilst reading it! You are a great writer and builder! When did he have time to style his hair!?
Oh yea... Uhhh he WAS going to fix it but... you know. SWAG always finds a way. :P
 I like it 
  August 27, 2014
This is amazing!
 I like it 
  August 27, 2014
You are very good at writing! And also like how you add your builds with the scenes! Can't wait for the next part!
 I like it 
  August 27, 2014
Great story and awesme build. I was tense whilst reading it! You are a great writer and builder! When did he have time to style his hair!?
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Very impressive. I notice you changed the hair piece a little bit, but aside from that, all well and good!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Outstanding! Your action is good (where did Marcus learn to fight like that!) but I agree with The Dunedain98 about the overall...
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Nice Work! I cant really see the whole build. But it looks good from what i can see.
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great story! Can't wait for more
 I made it 
  August 26, 2014
Quoting Asad . Nice build, but why are all your pictures sideways? It messes with my vision.
They are!? They look fine to me butttt that's just me. :P
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Nice build, but why are all your pictures sideways? It messes with my vision.
 I made it 
  August 26, 2014
Quoting Justin Hageman He heard a rustling in the bushes then he thought, "Oh no the seniors!" So he started to pack his things..... Good work Graeme! I like the movement of the figures! Good job as usual! See you at the airsoft party!
Lol thanks buddy! :P We were soooo close to being pranked. O_o Can't wait for the party!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
He heard a rustling in the bushes then he thought, "Oh no the seniors!" So he started to pack his things..... Good work Graeme! I like the movement of the figures! Good job as usual! See you at the airsoft party!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great work, Graeme! Can't wait for more!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great action shots! Very nice build!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Excellent build and fantastic story! Your character looks awesome with the cloak and bandana. Great job!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Nice! That guy is a good fighter! :D
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Terrific! Can't wait for the next part!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Awesome work! Great trees!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great work once again! I really like the foliage and fire! Nice story too! Though I wish there was an overall picture of the MOC...
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Amazing job Graeme! Love the black background! Nice job! Can't wait for Pt.3!!!!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great!I like that campfire!
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  August 26, 2014
Awsome moc!!!!:):)
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  August 26, 2014
Nice work! Looks good.
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  August 26, 2014
Great job! I love it! I can't wait for the next part! Again, Great job!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Awesome work! Great story and pictures!
 I like it 
  August 26, 2014
Great work, man!
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  August 26, 2014
Nice! Looking good ~Noel
 
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