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The Masked takes on the Black Lotus.
About this creation

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Just outside the main Black Lotus camp, a small escort of men guarded a tower.

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These men are worthless. I barely have to make an effort to get by them without them waking.


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The Masked scaled the tower with ease.

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He watched his target as he slept and wondered if he should kill him there, in his sleep. No. There is no respect in that.

"Rise, oh Black Lotus 'leader'."

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The man jumped up, startled.

"What are you doing here, Masked one?" he asked.

"I am here to kill you, isn't that much obvious?" The Masked said, intent.

"What for? Have we not given you what you have asked for? We have given you power, money, and soon we will have all of Mythron to share with you!"

"You have taken so much more from me. You have cheated my citizens, you have recruited them for your pathetic cause and sent them into battle, you have encroached on my lands,
and most importantly, you have murder many of my people. No one kills an Enalican in cold blood without paying."

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Suddenly, both men charged at each other, blades ready.

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The noise alarmed the soldiers below, and they quickly rushed to their leader's aid.

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"Not to worry, I have things under control," the leader said as the guard arrived, "Not much of a fighter, considering his status."

The soldier stared down at the body of The Masked. He was shocked. The Masked was dead? How? How could he be? It seemed impossible.

"Take care of the body. I have things to attend to."

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The Masked walked out of the building feeling happy. Someone had paid for the crimes of the Black Lotus. I suppose no one else will ever be certain whether or not he is actually still alive, seeing as no one has ever seen either one of our faces. The Masked chuckled. I'm sure they'll figure it out eventually.




Here are some pictures of the build. Sorry for the aweful quality, I took them with my phone (other camera was charging and I had to destroy the MOC ASAP. Also, I tried some new rock stuff. Thoughts?









Comments

 I made it 
  June 11, 2014
Quoting Freeling ++ YOU BETTER NOT HAVE KILLED ROHAN ROKATAI I NEEDED HIM FOR MY NEW SERIES
Well. You were gone for like a month. If Rohan is the guy who looks almost identical to him, then we may have a porblem.
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  June 11, 2014
YOU BETTER NOT HAVE KILLED ROHAN ROKATAI I NEEDED HIM FOR MY NEW SERIES
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  May 30, 2014
Great story! It is not that dark for me either.
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  May 30, 2014
Quoting The Object of Legend
Quoting Gilbert Despathens I couldn't see a thing, honestly, and I had my phone's brightness turned all the way up.
Got to agree with Gilbert. I had to turn off all other lights to see the pictures.
They're really not that dark on my computer, but I guess I should have made them brighter!
  May 30, 2014
Quoting Gilbert Despathens I couldn't see a thing, honestly, and I had my phone's brightness turned all the way up.
Got to agree with Gilbert. I had to turn off all other lights to see the pictures.
 I made it 
  May 29, 2014
Quoting Gilbert Despathens I couldn't see a thing, honestly, and I had my phone's brightness turned all the way up.
It's better on the computer, but point taken :P
  May 29, 2014
I couldn't see a thing, honestly, and I had my phone's brightness turned all the way up.
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  May 29, 2014
Quoting Thomas of Tortuga Nice job. The tents are a nice little technique, and the story is entertaining. I think the build could stand to be more concentrated, if you know what I mean. Putting the tents closer to the tower, and moving the rockwork so it's in the pictures, would make the camp seem more crowded and full.
Yeah, it was really rushed :P Thanks for the advice though!
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  May 29, 2014
Nice rockwork, and the tower is good also. But, as other people have mentioned, it was pretty hard to see what was going on in the pictures... still, nice work!
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  May 29, 2014
Nice story. The pictures are really hard to see, though. Maybe a black backround, as McKinney said. Cool tower.
 I like it 
  May 29, 2014
Nice job. The tents are a nice little technique, and the story is entertaining. I think the build could stand to be more concentrated, if you know what I mean. Putting the tents closer to the tower, and moving the rockwork so it's in the pictures, would make the camp seem more crowded and full.
 I made it 
  May 29, 2014
Quoting M2com McKinney I like the build! The camp site is very nice, the tents are my favorite. But, it would be nicer if the pics were brighter. I get the idea of making it like night time but perhaps darken the pics just a tad, not legitimately make them night time though. You could always just use a darker background and darken the pics ever so slightly if needed so that you maintain the night feeling but you can also see your hard work too! Keep building!
I plan to upload some pictures in a moment of the actual build
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  May 29, 2014
I like the build! The camp site is very nice, the tents are my favorite. But, it would be nicer if the pics were brighter. I get the idea of making it like night time but perhaps darken the pics just a tad, not legitimately make them night time though. You could always just use a darker background and darken the pics ever so slightly if needed so that you maintain the night feeling but you can also see your hard work too! Keep building!
 
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