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Jet, the Thorned Rose
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Aeonian Royalty
About this creation
Name: Jet
Element: Gravity and plantlife
Weapons: mini gun (Venus Magnum)
Mask: Kanohi Crast, mask of repulsion
Status: Currently deceased
Bio: Jet was once the princess of the Aeonian Empire. Her father was a survivor of the Hypernovae War, and established a new kingdom in its wake. Although Jet's family was rich, Jet herself tried to live simply, as she saw no reason to spoil herself. She would spend her days not relaxing and wasting her time, but learning about the needs of her subjects and doing what she could to help them. Because of this, everyone loved her. Despite not being vain, Jet was extremely beautiful, and it soon came time for a suitor to be found for her. However, no matter how handsome, rich, or strong her suitor was, she would turn them down immediately, as she loved none of them. One night, a mysterious assassin snuck into the castle and tried to assassinate Jet. However, the assassin was caught right before committing the deed. This horrendous act shook everyone, especially Jet, to the very core, and measures were taken to protect Jet. One such measure was hiring a personal bodyguard for Jet. She first met this bodyguard the day after the incident. Unlike most of the royal guards, who were much older, the young guard introduced himself as Vernicous "Dark" Aeon, his nickname stemming from his abnormally dark skin color. After a while, the two became the best of friends, as Jet saw in the young guard what she wanted to see most in any of her past suitors, a natural desire to help others and to do good. A few years later, once the incident had faded to a distant memory, the young Dark Aeon proposed to Jet, who accepted. A wedding was immediately scheduled by the Jet's father for two months later. Unfortunately, a week before the wedding, an Insane Aeonian who called himself "Zenith Shadow" rebelled against the Empire, starting the Shadow War. Both Dark Aeon and Jet enlisted in the Aeonian Army, the latter having some trouble entering due to her royalty, but getting in nonetheless. The two quickly proved their worth, Dark Aeon being nearly invincible in combat while Jet could figure out how to win in any scenario. Jet's father, who was leading the army at the time, quickly realized their potential, and promoted the two to general rank. They quickly began to oppose the Shadow army, and pretty soon, Aeonian victory seemed inevitable. One night, Dark Aeon and Jet were sent on a special mission to assassinate Zenith Shadow and end the war. Before the mission officially started, Dark Aeon was given the Kanohi Genesis, which was to be used as a last resort. The two infiltrated the Shadow fortress and made it to the throne room where, to their horror, they saw a massive sacrificial altar in the center. A massive blast of energy quickly disarmed the two warriors, and their bodies were pinned to the wall by an invisible force. Zenith Shadow soon entered, laughing, and revealed the reason that he started the war: he had discovered a device that could transform the soul energy of the deceased into pure demonic energy. Zenith Shadow aimed to use this energy in order to transform himself into a dark god, but needed the soul of royalty in order to do so. Zenith Shadow promptly took out a serrated sacrificial dagger and removed Jet's heart. A blast of shadow enveloped Zenith Shadow, mutating him into a being of pure darkness and chaos. In shock that his wife-to-be was killed so quickly, Dark Aeon activated the Kanohi Genesis, transforming himself into a light god and quickly attempted to obliterate Zenith Shadow. However, the flux of pure energy in such a small area caused time and space to break down, atomizing all of the planet. The two beings were cast in different directions, Dark Aeon landing on Spherus Magna and Zenith Shadow landing who-knows-where. The two now travel from planet to planet, searching for each other, Zenith Shadow wishing to destroy Dark Aeon and become a full god, while Dark Aeon wishes to re-channel Zenith Shadow's energy to revive his deceased wife-to-be.


Front


Back


Head


Not a position that you would want to be in


Armed and wary


James Bond pose


Jet: Bye!

Notes:
Well, I can now say that Dark Aeon has a girlfriend. Or had, at least. No, I do not personally have a girlfriend (yet), and I hope to at least enjoy bachelorhood. Anyways, this is actually my first Fe-moc! I personally think that this turned out quite well for a first. The Gresh blades on her back are supposed to be wings, although they have no actual storyline importance. Also, the name of the gun is a reference to a gun in the PC version of Terraria. Comments and criticisms are appreciated.



Comments

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  May 13, 2014
Quoting Stormjay Rider Eh... I'll have to be honest with you... this is one of the worse attempts at a Fe-MOC. She's skinny to the point that she looks unnatural -- she has to be bulky enough that the transition into the shoulders isn't so abrupt. Also, the breasts are too concentrated on the midline of her torso -- I would make them a bit farther spread out, or get rid of them entirely, as they don't really work. The limbs are a bit better, but I would advocate making them custom, if you can do that after fixing the torso.
Hey, it's a start. Of course, this is my first fe-moc, so no one can expect a masterpiece. But I appreciate the crit, will use it for guidelines for a future revamp.
  May 12, 2014
Eh... I'll have to be honest with you... this is one of the worse attempts at a Fe-MOC. She's skinny to the point that she looks unnatural -- she has to be bulky enough that the transition into the shoulders isn't so abrupt. Also, the breasts are too concentrated on the midline of her torso -- I would make them a bit farther spread out, or get rid of them entirely, as they don't really work. The limbs are a bit better, but I would advocate making them custom, if you can do that after fixing the torso.
 
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