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The Saturin Project Introdoction
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The Saturin Project
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In the year 3016 the planet earth found other life in the galaxy. But at first nether thought each other were friendly. That began a war! A war that Lasted Two Thousand years. Many battles we're fought But no progress was made Finaly in the year 5064 The war ended. And the U.P.O ( Universal Peace Origanization ). The U.P.O destoyed all weapons of destruction made during the war and stored the data in twenty five microchips and put them in the most high seceroty voults in the universe. The U.D ( Universe defence )was also created to make sure that no wars like this one ever happened again. Then there was Almost complete peace, But that is about to change!



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  July 2, 2014
You know this theme is pretty neat and cool looking forward in it :D
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  July 2, 2014
Quoting JWG 258 To make a story of this magnitude you are going to need to develop the characters more. You might need to make up an entire extraterrestrial race of beings with their own culture, morals, laws, religion, physical appearance, family structure, and the rest of it. You could do a story without all that, but it would end up like a 1960s flying saucer movie. That group of people on your title photo need to be developed as individuals. The broad storyline of a major galactic war is cool, but people need to be put in it. All the great sci-fi stories are about individuals interacting with each other. I have started to read some sci-fi stories that are about machines or about broad conflicts, but I put them down. nobody wants to read that some numbered military unit defeated some other group. Its like reading from a grade school history textbook. Keep things on the individual level.
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 I like it 
  July 2, 2014
To make a story of this magnitude you are going to need to develop the characters more. You might need to make up an entire extraterrestrial race of beings with their own culture, morals, laws, religion, physical appearance, family structure, and the rest of it. You could do a story without all that, but it would end up like a 1960s flying saucer movie. That group of people on your title photo need to be developed as individuals. The broad storyline of a major galactic war is cool, but people need to be put in it. All the great sci-fi stories are about individuals interacting with each other. I have started to read some sci-fi stories that are about machines or about broad conflicts, but I put them down. nobody wants to read that some numbered military unit defeated some other group. Its like reading from a grade school history textbook. Keep things on the individual level.
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  July 2, 2014
Grammar aside, this sounds pretty neat.
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  May 1, 2014
Hmm, not a bad idea. But don't you mean two thousand years? And the grammar could use lots of work, but other than that this seems like it'll be interesting!
 
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