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Toa Chains Version 8
Toa Chains returns, and is better than EVER!
About this creation
Name: Krayan of Po-Quaza
Species: Matoran
Weapons: Large battle axe, Turrets and dual pistols (Pistols not pictured on this page, sorry!)
Occupation: Toa, Mechanic.
Story: Krayan lived a normal life, Until one day, a "Follower" came into his home and fought against a toa. The follower won the fight and before the toa died, he gave Krayan a toa stone. After Krayan became a Toa, he was falsely accused of killing the toa. Krayan was banished to the pit. Soon after, Krayan (Now known as Chains) escaped the pit with the help of another toa. When he escaped, Mata Nui cleared Chains' name and Chains became an official Toa. More about this can be read on the creation "My Story Overview".
Theme:
^^^I LOVE THIS GAME!^^^ (Lets see if anyone knows what I'm talking about :P)(ALSO wait until the end of the song, that's the best part ;))


Chains returns, I love this version.


He also has a little turret :3






He also has his axe which can be held on his back (Although to put it in his back I used an illegal technique >:))








His axe on its own.




Wolverine claws are still here :D


Bye!

*Fourth Wall*
And that was Chains v8! This is my first time using photoshop for a thumbnail (if you exclude the teaser for this moc) Since I took the pictures I made a couple of improvements, I changed the armour thing on his chest from black to grey and i also made some pistols! Oh and one more thing, I have some bad news, I've decided to cancel my HF comic because I didn't really like it...at all. Anyway I hope you liked, Goodbye!

Constructive criticism is ALWAYS appreciated!



Comments

 I like it 
  April 3, 2014
While I do like this creation, it's time for me to get critical (horrible pun, yes). First off, the arms seem a bit too short, but do what you want with that. Second, since he is your self-MOC, I think that he should have opposable fingers, as that is almost standard for all self-MOCs. Finally, (while this has nothing to do with the actual MOC) I think that the lighting could use little work. I recommend using a lamp or something to help focus more light at the MOC. I hope that you take this under consideration. Anyway, MOC don't mock.
 I made it 
  February 19, 2014
Quoting Wertman 8 Pretty nice man, awesome updates. I like the change to the story (or if you haven't updated it, nice story, I only just noticed it), but yeah. Everything is great, though maybe a greater thickness in the arms would've been nice. Great job!
Thanks! I see what you mean about the arms, thanks for the help! Also I'm thinking of making Raxonax! When I make him is it ok if I put him in my comic?
 I like it 
  February 19, 2014
Pretty nice man, awesome updates. I like the change to the story (or if you haven't updated it, nice story, I only just noticed it), but yeah. Everything is great, though maybe a greater thickness in the arms would've been nice. Great job!
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting Kraata Face I like that torso, but yeah it's pretty cluttered
Thanks!
 I like it 
  February 18, 2014
I like that torso, but yeah it's pretty cluttered
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting Legobob 29 Very nice! Some more brown could work though, but it's understandable if you don't have much of it. :)
I see what you mean. Its not as much that I don't have a lot of brown, it's that i just don't have a lot of useful parts in brown. Thanks for the message!
 I like it 
  February 18, 2014
Very nice! Some more brown could work though, but it's understandable if you don't have much of it. :)
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting Stormjay Rider The armor seems too cluttered to me.
Thanks for the constructive criticism
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting Jackal :] Awesome, awesome, awesome, you looking good buddy!
Thanks!
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting G J Nice job!
Thanks!
  February 18, 2014
The armor seems too cluttered to me.
 I like it 
  February 18, 2014
Awesome, awesome, awesome, you looking good buddy!
 I like it 
  February 18, 2014
Hey dude, check this out. .http://mocpages.com/moc.php/381518
 I like it 
  February 18, 2014
Nice job!
 I made it 
  February 18, 2014
Quoting Shockster Studios great job. chains looks epic!!!!
Thanks Shockster!
  February 18, 2014
great job. chains looks epic!!!!
 
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