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An LOM Freebuild
About this creation
So this was my tourney entry, now it's just a freebuild.

It was by coincidence that the master and apprentice were reunited. In fact, the apprentice wasn't even aware of the reunion. As it happened, the boy had been trained for years by The Masked (or at least the character representing him in the tourney). After the boy had turned 18, they had parted ways. Now, 2 years later, they found themselves together again. The apprentice was stopping 6 armed soldiers from passing on the road. It was by sheer coincidence that the master was waiting just off the path to ambush the soldiers.




"Stop!" the apprentice shouted, though it sounded more like a plea.



The soldiers stopped, but only because the young man was in the way.



"Out of our way, boy," the soldier in the front said.



"You don't want trouble."



The Masked (or his representative :P) waited. He wondered if his apprentice was prepared for this challenge. He had always taught him to use his wits.



"You're right, sir, we want no trouble. And neither do you! We're here to warn you about the ambush ahead! The Rainosians, they're waiting at the village for you, they'll kill you!"



The master raised an eyebrow. It was possible the soldiers would believe him, but they would question his intentions. Yet the master waited, wanting to see how his apprentice would handle the situation.



"Why would you tell us this?" the soldier asked, "you're lying!"



"No!" the apprentice said quickly, "no, I promise! If you don't believe me, I can prove it!"

The soldier narrowed his eyes. "Prove it then."

"Look, you know the two men that saved you and your men in the first battle you faced when you arrived hear? Or the second battle when a man saved your life from that orc?" the apprentice paused, "that was me."



The soldier paused for a moment. "It is you. I saw your eyes, and no one else knew of those men. What must we do?"



The master realized suddenly the brilliance of the plan. His apprentice had been helping them a little at a time for the past few weeks to give them a reason to trust them. Now, he could say whatever he wanted. One other thing that the master knew was that there were no Rainosians waiting at the town. In fact, all the warriors were gone from the village. His apprentice had used his wits to save a village. This man was truly worthy of being a knight.




Alright. So. Interesting story. Especially since I had about... 25 minutes (or so?) to think of it.

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Comments

 I like it 
  July 3, 2014
Great job, nice story line too! I really like the grass.
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  January 17, 2014
cool little story part, I like the scene s lighting.
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  January 11, 2014
I read the description, but the photos on Flickr were different/less numerous.
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  January 11, 2014
Quoting Mr. Cab Nice story... wait, this doesn't count for the tourney? I'm pretty sure it would have come far...
It's an old build. Thanks though :)
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Nice story... wait, this doesn't count for the tourney? I'm pretty sure it would have come far...
 I made it 
  January 10, 2014
Quoting Andrew the Jedi Ninja Too bad it's DQed... Nice build though!
Thanks
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  January 10, 2014
Too bad it's DQed... Nice build though!
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  January 10, 2014
Quoting Gilbert Despathens Sorry, an old build gets an automatic 0. If you think you have the time, though, I'll feign blindness and let you slip something quick in.
I don't have time. Thanks for telling me.
  January 10, 2014
Caleb?
  January 10, 2014
Sorry, an old build gets an automatic 0. If you think you have the time, though, I'll feign blindness and let you slip something quick in.
 I made it 
  January 10, 2014
Quoting Marlf ! Great MOC and story Caleb! And just so you know your Tourney link just brings it back to the Moc - not the homepage. :-)
Oh, thanks Malf! That could have been bad
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  January 10, 2014
Quoting Thomas of Tortuga Pretty nice scene! Are the photographs old, too?
Does no one actually read the end of a MOC?
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Pretty nice scene! Are the photographs old, too?
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  January 10, 2014
Great MOC and story Caleb! And just so you know your Tourney link just brings it back to the Moc - not the homepage. :-)
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Great build, Caleb! Nice work on the foliage and the path, and very good writing. Good luck!
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  January 10, 2014
SO MUCH GRASS!!!!
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  January 10, 2014
Wow, nice build Caleb! Good luck!
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  January 10, 2014
Great job Caleb!
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Fantastic work! Good luck!
 I made it 
  January 10, 2014
Quoting ~ Brick @Caleb And that kids, is why you ALWAYS read the description.
Hahaha, yes indeed :)
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Nice entry! I like the rockwork and grass. :)
  January 10, 2014
@Caleb And that kids, is why you ALWAYS read the description.
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  January 10, 2014
Quoting ~ Brick Nice work...but I could have sworn I saw this already? It almost looks like this build: http://www.flickr.com/photos/101364785@N07/10555883176/ Are you reusing the picturesD: ~Brick
If you would have read the end of the MOC, you would have already known that.
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Nice story, as usual. ;D The landscape looks good for the mostpart, but the ditch is a little too plain. :P Good work overall!
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  January 10, 2014
Sweet! Nice story!
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  January 10, 2014
Nice work...but I could have sworn I saw this already? It almost looks like this build: http://www.flickr.com/photos/101364785@N07/10555883176/ Are you reusing the picturesD: ~Brick
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Looks good Caleb.
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  January 10, 2014
Nice entry.
 
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