Nice. Just some tips though. A) for blood, I would recommend drawing that in on a photo editing programme. I know that you're not the only person who uses red pieces as blood, but it really doesn't look like blood, even with the suspension of disbelief factor. B) I'd wait until day and film this in normal light, without flash, because it can really make a scene look messy when the flash is the only thing in terms of lighting there. Still, the story was interesting, can't wait for Ep.3!