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LOM tourny Intro: Old friends and new challenges
My intro for teh tourny!! (Its totaly better than your intro)
About this creation
Here is the Link to the Tourney.
And my bracket is Foot Combat.
A week or so ago I found a place that I decided was fit to build my cabin. After a day I realized I had not the suplies or skills to provide food for myself, so, I decided to take the risk and headed for a town where I could buy supplies. As I drew near to the town, I realized how easily my noble's clothing would stand out. I realized I would have to steal some clothes if I was going to get in. There was a house not far out of my way with a full clothes-line, so I headed that way. The house was empty and no smoke came from the chimny, despite the snow now covering the ground. I hurried over to the clothes-line and grabbed a gray cloak, which I quickly dawned, and headed back toward the town. "Well," I said,"that wanted poster suddenly isn't to far off."
As usual, I was very nervous as I approached the gate. I observed the man ahead of me so that I could get an idea of what to say. "Name?" Asked the guard. "Joseph doultly." the man replied. "Next!" Wow, I thought, this is easier than I thought. "Name?" the guard asked in his very droning voice. "Codsby," I said " Sutton Codsby." The guard looked at me and I knew he had seen through my less than clever disguise. "Next!" Apparently I had thought to highly of the man, I thought as a wandered through town, I thought for sure the Nerogians would be looking for me. But I had more important matters, for I had also aquired a message. I often wondered how I even got the letter. I had laid down in the woods to sleep, and the next morning it was next to me.

It read: Meet an old friend for a new challange. It also contained a small map of this town, with an allyway marked in red. "Ah, hear it is." I had walked up to two very unsignificant stone buildings with an even more insignificant ally in between.

As I turned into the ally I was very suprised to see a hooded figure at the other end. Though facing away from me, I could see he wore all black, and I was afraid he was from the murderous Black Lotus.


In a very deep, almost un-natural voice the figure spoke. "I knew you would come. Well, it's not like you had any other option, outlaw you now are." I was very confused, because it was obvious this man new who I was and who I had become.


I drew my knife and , hoping I sounded brave, said " I'm not afraid of you, or your cult, you Black Lotus!" The figure still did not turn," Black Lotus, HA! I would not accociate myself with those rats if you paid me. No, you have no reason to be afraid," The man's voice was getting higher, and sounded far less menacing, " my old friend."






The man cast off his black cloak and it finnaly struck me who it was. "William? Why it is you!" "Aye," William said "tis me." I felt slightly angry at my friend for playing the trick on me, though William was a person you just couldn't stay mad at, even if you tried. "Why you....you, well, I dare not even say what you are." "But anyway," I said,"dosn to business, why did you bring me here?" "Well," William answered," The annual tournament is coming up, and I thought you might like to come along with the Crimson Knights." "Well," I said" I've got nothing better to do, OK!"



And so me and William headed off for Red Sand, and then on to the tournament


Forth wall: (whats fourth wall mean anyway?) On the knife part, I accidentally deleted the knife pic becuase I'm on a tablet, I'll fix it sometime.(Me and the uploader don't work well together) Anyway, hope y'all like!

God bless,
Jonah
(P.S. My brother got a technic crane for his B-day and it attacked our heros on the way to Red Sand)



Comments

 I like it 
  December 19, 2013
It's all good! Neat way to bring your character into The Tourney!
 I made it 
  December 18, 2013
Quoting David FNJ I see you are in the guild Crimson Knights, but I don't see your desired bracket name or the link to The Tourney homepage - please add those, thanks!
Oh, I thought I just had to post a comment on the bracket page...But it's here now! I hope that I still technically met the deadline!
  December 17, 2013
I see you are in the guild Crimson Knights, but I don't see your desired bracket name or the link to The Tourney homepage - please add those, thanks!
 I like it 
  December 17, 2013
Excellent intro, comrade! I'm glad to see it! :)
 I like it 
  December 9, 2013
Nice. The photo of William casting off his cloak is a great one. As is the crane pic.
 I like it 
  December 8, 2013
Very good! Fourth Wall is the wall that separates the actor(in this case, the builder and his creation) from the audience. As in, if an actor went like "What do you think we should do?" to the audience, he would be breaking the fourth wall.
  December 8, 2013
Looks great, and that happens to everyone.My computer hates me.
 
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