Quoting Tirrell Brown
The exterior is lacking but the interior is well thought out. My suggestion is the use of curves and angles to flesh it out.
Thank you very much for your input! if you check my 1st year MOCiversary MOC http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/401532 it states that this is my very first MOCpages build and that I've inproved very much. So this has been demolished for about a year meaning I can't improve it but thanks anyway!
Since I am looking at this for the third time now, I have some more tips. First off, the whole thing looks a little boxy. There are many builders who make that attribute look really good, but it is hard to do, and harder to appreciate. With some more complex shapes, you will get more views. ;) Also, the red windshields as thrusters are a good idea, but the bulge doesn't really look that well. If you make them flat, or build up a ring of "solid material" around them, then it would look better, in my opinion.
I hope this helps. ;)
I like this color scheme.
The white shouts Futuron, the Blue screams Ice Planet 2002, and the oldGray yells Classic Space.
Anyway, the interior is very nicely done, the bridge especially.
There are obviously lots of things going on inside, as there are many computer terminals and storage facilities inside the bridge.
The exterior could use some more detailing, as the top and rear sections have many exposed studs that could serve as real estate for many things.
Landing pad for the top, maybe?
Overall a very nice ship.
My first one wasn't nearly as good as this!
-Commander Cold, Commenter of MOCs
So, looking at this again, I have some more tips: Try making the blue and the white less random, more in stripes and such. It also looks very boxy right now, so maybe a more curved or sloped shape would contribute to the look... ;) I started out this way too, so I can say that you are on the right track...
Thanks all of you and I hope y'all are going to join the group starship builders especially you
Stephan N. but because I really don't have the time to invite all of you guys so here's the link:http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/23426
Please join thanks.
Cool... I suggest you go smaller though. At this big of a ship, you spend too many parts on the size to be able to make it detailed, as I know from experience. Try going smaller, you'll see, you will be more able to add details and such. Also, If you use tiles and curvy pieces, it will look a lot more sleek, but that is up to you.
You've got a nice general shape and the color selection is good for the most part, but it seems too blocky to me. For a futuristic vehicle, I expect to see a more streamlined, curved shape, which is missing from this MOC. Also The black elements sticking out of the front seem out of place there.
Well, this is big. I think that the colors are a bit messy, but it is cool how the top comes off. Also, The blockiness of it kinda ruins it for me. I don't have much too stand on, as spaceships are my weakness, but it looks as if your collection was streached a bit building this.