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A build for the Lands of Mythron's Regional Challenge.
About this creation
I know, I'm probably not going to win this Challenge, because if I even wanted to win, I wouldn't have built this simple port.. I needed to get things done. You'll see what they are in future builds.

*The pictures have the whole story typed onto them. Do you like this way of story-telling? Or should I go back to the way I used to do it?* *I need your opinion*


















































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Yes. I know the Troll looks almost like a Robot.


That's pretty much all. Comments appreciated.

-Edit- Yes, I know, the buildings stink, and the Troll stinks. But right now, I don't care in the least bit. I was in a rush to finish this. It had been sitting on my desk for weeks and I just wanted to get it over with.



Comments

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  February 7, 2014
HAHA! HYSTERICAL! LOVE THE EDITING!
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  January 8, 2014
I love the variety of minifigs, awesome!
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  January 4, 2014
Builds aren't so great. But it's hilarious. xD
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  December 22, 2013
Awesome! The troll is great!
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  December 21, 2013
Very nice work Freeling! The water looks great, as well as all the other buildings :-D
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  December 20, 2013
I love that troll!
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  December 16, 2013
Ah, I forgot about the small hardsuit designs. Pretty nice job on the troll, but he seems a bit fat. (Also, your stories keep getting better and better...)
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  December 16, 2013
Look at my character now Freeling... You might like him better!!!
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  December 5, 2013
Excellent job! Hilarious too!
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  December 4, 2013
Dat LOL face tho. Well done!
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  December 1, 2013
Cool story!...lol troll face...I like Mythron being not so comic-like.
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  November 29, 2013
In my opinion, the editing was not bad. Most of it. The reading was defently good since it was on the pics. But when your character ddid the facepalm, it was pretty obvious, and it wasn't reallyneeded. But the buildings were actually pretty good compared to mine, but they could have been better coming from you. But, you were rushed, and I can relate. Overall, I say this was a cool build, and the small things were not enough to stop me from giving you 5/5! Nice build! -WolfCorr
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  November 29, 2013
This is great! I liked it a tad more when it wasn't as comical.
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  November 28, 2013
I really like the text in the pictures... it saves time while uploading, I'm guessing? I might try that myself... I wouldn't have done the speech bubbles though... but that's just my taste. Cool story, and also cool build!
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  November 28, 2013
Sexy! I love the building, and the ridiculous editing xD
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  November 26, 2013
Photo editing? Bad. Troll faces? Terrible. Actual troll? Not bad. Overall, I think the scene had some of your better buildings, but I wasn't fond of the presentation.
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  November 26, 2013
I know you were rushed on the buildings, but the editing on the pictures was way overdone. Type underneath the pictures, not on, and rely on your photography to tell the story.
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  November 26, 2013
That was wasome! I love how you did piachers!
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  November 26, 2013
Nice! I think the effects are cool!
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  November 26, 2013
Awesome! I like the build, but of course I have some constructive criticism: I think the sewage holes below in the water would have looked better with a black background behind them, so it doesn't look like they just stop right there. It IS a port, so maybe a small boat docked up would have added to the MOC a bit more. I personally didn't like the comic format, or the storyline (Mostly because there really wasn't much of one). I always look forward to your builds because of how great the writing is, and how serious they usually are, which added to the character of the build so much more. This story was all over the place, and I it was a rushed build, so I won't go any further. ;) Great job though, and I hope you manage to get the time you claim to desperately need for your next build!
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  November 26, 2013
"Look at all that money!!" Ahaha, the face had me chuckling. Well done on an excellent build!
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  November 26, 2013
Awesome stuff!
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  November 26, 2013
The black lotus is expensive. And banned in almost every format. I guess if you are so determined on playing vintage without proxies...
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  November 26, 2013
the script and humor are the best part, the port is nicely done, the 'balloons' are not too distracting, but, I prefer to see all the scene, aside from the blood, there might be too much 'drawing' although it was funny now, on the long run, it brings the quality down, the troll, well, you said it, I like your stories, hopefully you ll have more time next episode.
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  November 26, 2013
I'd say it works! You could use it to look professional or funny! I quite like it. Cool MOC :D
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  November 26, 2013
I actually love the comic strip layout of the story, especially with that LOL face. Nice work!
  November 26, 2013
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH..... nice build freeling... HOHOHOHAHAHA... WAIT!! YOUR JOINING THE BLACK LOTUS!!!!
  November 26, 2013
Normally, I'd say great work! But I however, dislike this comic strip sorta story telling. I prefer the older kind, when there was actually some depth...but again it's your stuff so. Also, not to be super mean...but I KNOW you can do better than this! I found the entire build a bit simplistic for you. For the first time on anyone of your MOCs, I'm giving you a 2/5. ~Brick
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  November 26, 2013
Haha! Funny stuff :D The roof of that building looks pretty cool.
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  November 26, 2013
Looks grate!
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  November 26, 2013
Quoting Halhi 141 Story is good, but I'm not as impressed by the builds...The buildings look very messy and the troll is too blocky...
I know this. I was in a rush. And personally I dont really care right now.
  November 26, 2013
Story is good, but I'm not as impressed by the builds...The buildings look very messy and the troll is too blocky...
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  November 26, 2013
Ha, ha, love how you edited the faces. XD. Nice story, I like it this way. Too bad your underwear is scratchy. :O.
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  November 26, 2013
HAHAHAHAHA. This is great, man.
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  November 26, 2013
Haha! Great stuff here! I'm guessing the "My cabbages!" was an Avatar: The Last Airbender pun? XD Wonderful RC entry!
 
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