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The Brother of Destruction
About this creation
Welcome to my latest creation: X!

I'm not all that proud of this creation, like last time. However, I do like it better than last time.

I have a story for him this time.

And, according to Zach, the story is in the viewpoint of Ciaros. Beware, it's a bit disturbed. VERY disturbed.


Few know anything of the entity titled: "X." Those who do know little.

And that entity makes sure it stays that way.

Anyone who spreads talk of the mysterious being - many who even dare speak his name - doesn't live for much longer. He is properly titled the "Brother of Destruction."

I know some about this "X." I'm going to tell you here what I know. I know what's coming. And when he destroys me...all the suffering of this burden will end...




He's coming. I know he is. His anger is shaking my world. I dared to speak his name. I promised to tell you what I know.

A vow I cannot break. He will only kill me anyway. I might as well tell you what I can. When I can. While I can. While I'm still alive.

X was always a creature of horror. Raised by his father and mother until they were killed, then brought into the hands of a monster. He lived with a brother, a brother who lived a hint of goodwill in his heart.

A brother he hated.

So, the entity, "X," warned his guardian that his bother may be plotting to destroy him. The guardian abandoned X's brother. A being known as Deaskuth.

X was trained and raised by a vile warrior that called him his nephew.

I know that X has no hope of turning from the vile warrior and his guardian. Deaskuth is our only hope.

But I fear he is slipping from us. Drawing back to his brother. It's only a matter of time before we discover what he will do...




He's coming. He's very near. I can hear the buzzing of his anger. I can feel his rage.

But I will not stop. For the sake of exposing this monster.

X wanted to have answers. As vicious as he was, he was curious. He wanted to know what had happened to his mother and father. Who they were.

So he stopped at nothing to recover what had happened. He tortured others at random to see if they had information for him. If they didn't - they were killed. Brutally.

He didn't become informed. What he did become was a vile, evil beast. And that is what he is today.

*BRRZZP* *Static*

He'0045s coming for me. 0093I ca56n tell th167at he is angry. *Crackle* I'm b56657001eing jammed. I2567 can fee89l his po*muttering indistinguishable sounds*

I'm as good as883928 dea777710 *Crackle*d...




Pain. Pain beyond pain. My soul is being reaped. I cannot see what they do not wish for me to see. Flashes of red dance in my limited vision. Oh, please, make it stop! I never expected this.

I thought it would be quick.

I was mortally wrong.

End it all. Kill me now! Death is nothing to this! Heat is searing me, yet I still am soaked in ice cold sweat.

"He" is brutally tearing me apart. X has come to rip me. To tear me. Agony is reaping me. My soul is fading. Pain. Please. I beg you. Give me death. Death is near, but not near enough. I am burning. Invisible, burning metal rods are searing me. I can fell nothing but agony. I am in the grasp of X.

Vision is gone. I can see nothing.

And suddenly, it all stops. I feel wonderful. I feel a peculiar sensation, as if I'm floating.

And I know now, It is all over...


Hope you liked it. Hope it didn't freak you out...


Anyway, yeah. This is Deaskuth's brother, the second son of the Makuta and the Toa.

He is...the Entity of Destruction.


Full.

Legs.

Body / arms.

While the arms are rather floppy and fragile, the legs are incrediblely sturdy and flexible.

Bob Hero: I have returned to finish destroying the Bionicle race and theme!

*RRRRIIIPP*

X: Now to hang this on my wall.

*Crunch*

Deaskuth: My turn in the spotlight, older bro.

Yes, this is a WIP for Deskuth V5. :D

The lower leg.

Gold bless!
~Sarge



Comments

 I like it 
  November 25, 2013
Gold bless, Andrew. Gold... bless... xD
 I like it 
  November 22, 2013
Very interesting torso frame, I bet it could be used to portray a ton of different characters.
  November 18, 2013
@Garrett: There are no visuals, so it's less exciting.
  November 18, 2013
@Chro Color scheme is my fault. :P
  November 18, 2013
@Chro: Oh sure, I get KlLLED in it and it's bland -_-
  November 18, 2013
Gold bless you too. Bland backstory. Sort of bland MOC, too- more color! That said, your designs are improving, it seems, which is good.
A. Sargent
 I like it 
The Texan Bionicle Builder
  November 16, 2013
Love it looks great!
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider @Zach, Andrew: New story sent to your message walls.
Sick. Thanks.
  November 16, 2013
@Zach, Andrew: New story sent to your message walls.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Flamelord Kai Awesome version of X! I really the all black of this moc. Like X said, this is one of the closest versions to the original moc itself. Great job! :D
Thanks!
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Awesome version of X! I really the all black of this moc. Like X said, this is one of the closest versions to the original moc itself. Great job! :D
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting The Texan Bionicle Builder Love it looks great!
Thank you!
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Alex Rode Wow, intense. Great work!
Thanks!
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting X ~ @Garrett And you thought. I was done with Ciaros... >:D
You'll never be done with him...
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Wow, intense. Great work!
  November 16, 2013
@Garrett And you thought. I was done with Ciaros... >:D
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Ethan . Nice work Andrew.
Thanks, Ethan!
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting sam the first mahbe...
Well, this one in particular, at least...
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Commander Spencer, Ultimate Bionicle Fan
Quoting Stormjay Rider You missed mine, didn't you.
You're right, I did, sorry. :P I guess it's because you used the Mata Nui MoL and not the Toa Ignika MoL that caused me to forget.
Yeah, that was what I suspected had happened.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Alien Entity Wouldn't want to meet this guy in a dark alleyway. 0_0
:P
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider You missed mine, didn't you.
You're right, I did, sorry. :P I guess it's because you used the Mata Nui MoL and not the Toa Ignika MoL that caused me to forget.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Halhi 141 Pretty nice, although I think it's too rough and gappy in some places. Deaskuth is looking good so far...
Thanks. Yeah, that is true...
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting A M Interesting! The silver head on the black body looks a little strange in my opinion, but those legs are looking great! Nice story, too.
Thanks. Well, the original was like that, so I did it too.
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Nice work Andrew.
  November 16, 2013
mahbe...
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider "Ciaros' Viewpoint"? Come on, you know that I'm the one controlling everything behind the scenes... :P
XD Thanks for the comment.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting sam the first those legs look incredibly technical! creative MOC, i love your little stories!
Thanks! My DISTURBED little stories. XD
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting X ~ Nice! I really like how you kept him all black. In some pictures though the head looks awkward and the torso does too. :/ But aside those issues...by far the closest Moc to the real X. :) Deaskuth's knee is freaking me out... :P
Thanks. Is that due to the fact that it's a Rahkshi head?
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. Ummm... Yes? :P
Blame Zach. that was his idea.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Commander Spencer, Ultimate Bionicle Fan Finally! The first X MOC I've seen (besides the original) to have the Mask of Life!
Thanks. But Reaper's and Stormjay's did too, I think...
  November 16, 2013
Ummm... Yes? :P
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider Also, Andrew and Zach: I'm revising the combined story of Deaskuth and X, and tying it in with Jethryn's story. Because I can. Should get it up in your message walls tonight.
Can't wait. I'll be back to check.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider @Spencer: You missed mine, didn't you.
Yes, yes he did. But he may have been referring to the Toa Ignika Mask of Life.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting X ~ @StormJay Yay! :P
Mah feelins exactlah.
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting X ~ @Garrett >:D
:P
 I made it 
  November 16, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. 0.o
Is that face due to that fact that Zach wanted the story to be in your viewpoint? :P
  November 16, 2013
@Garrett >:D
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
0.o
  November 16, 2013
@StormJay Yay! :P
  November 16, 2013
@Spencer: You missed mine, didn't you.
  November 16, 2013
Also, Andrew and Zach: I'm revising the combined story of Deaskuth and X, and tying it in with Jethryn's story. Because I can. Should get it up in your message walls tonight.
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Finally! The first X MOC I've seen (besides the original) to have the Mask of Life!
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Nice! I really like how you kept him all black. In some pictures though the head looks awkward and the torso does too. :/ But aside those issues...by far the closest Moc to the real X. :) Deaskuth's knee is freaking me out... :P
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
those legs look incredibly technical! creative MOC, i love your little stories!
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
"Ciaros' Viewpoint"? Come on, you know that I'm the one controlling everything behind the scenes... :P
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Interesting! The silver head on the black body looks a little strange in my opinion, but those legs are looking great! Nice story, too.
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Pretty nice, although I think it's too rough and gappy in some places. Deaskuth is looking good so far...
 I like it 
  November 16, 2013
Wouldn't want to meet this guy in a dark alleyway. 0_0
 
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