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BBRC r3 entry: Patrick smajdor vs Toa Taile; tobduk
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Credit to my friend Allan for some of the pieces including the mask, if it weren't for him I would have been at a standstill without any pieces (proper or not) to build an identifiable revamp. So this is tobduk titan from visorak, archon of wrath.
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  November 24, 2013
Quoting Clever Crowe You started a good taper with those lateralus bits, but unfortunately, they end abruptly. Waist articulation issue?- Yuri'd be proud, but if you sacc'ed Closure on behalf of retaining movement, Id've stuck with Closure. ~Cheers, Tyler
Thank you Crowe! To tell the truth though, there was a lot of compromise when it came to building this entry. I'd've gone with closure but I needed to make sure it was better than the original, unfortunately I appearently failed.
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  November 23, 2013
You started a good taper with those lateralus bits, but unfortunately, they end abruptly. Waist articulation issue?- Yuri'd be proud, but if you sacc'ed Closure on behalf of retaining movement, Id've stuck with Closure. ~Cheers, Tyler
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  November 16, 2013
Quoting cyberfrank 2010 seems poseable, but, a little thin for my taste, I like them more bulky.
He would be more bulky but he's a revamp of moc that became canon. Thanks for the like. :)
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  November 16, 2013
seems poseable, but, a little thin for my taste, I like them more bulky.
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  November 10, 2013
Quoting Halhi 141 Resemblance to the original is pretty poor (you could have at least used a black/gunmetal mask) and the build itself is pretty simple and too thin. 4 points.
i didnt have any.
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  November 10, 2013
Quoting [ Chro ] Six points. Nice effort, Taylor. :)
thank you. :)
  November 10, 2013
Six points. Nice effort, Taylor. :)
  November 10, 2013
Resemblance to the original is pretty poor (you could have at least used a black/gunmetal mask) and the build itself is pretty simple and too thin. 4 points.
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  November 10, 2013
This is fairly good, but thin around the middle, and lacking armour I would have like to see. 6/10
  November 9, 2013
It looks enough like the original, but not much improvement either. 5 from me.
  November 8, 2013
Very lean and not very well armoured. I was expecting something more imposing for an OOMN member but sadly that is not what happened. The waist is where you really need to put work on. Scraping a 4 just for the build and I personally can't see much relation to the original.
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  November 8, 2013
Hey, not to be a bother, Taile, but could you please add this to the group? Thanks.
 I made it 
  November 7, 2013
Thank you, I will try harder.
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  November 7, 2013
Pretty nice. Bit skinny, in my opinion, but worthy of a 6. GL with the other judges.
  November 7, 2013
Looks quite good, but I can't pick out much detail due to lighting - would you be able to get a brighter shot?
  November 7, 2013
Eh, I guess the mask looks alright, considering you were low on parts or whatever it was... I'll score this later once Pat posts his. (Also, Tobduk isn't a Toa.)
 
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