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Lizrak, The Assassin...
My first female character :D
About this creation
Name: Lizrak
Species: Unknown
Occupation: Assassin
Likes: Rahi, Money, Getting the Job done.
Dislikes: Distractions, Swords or any other weapon other than a gun.
Alias: The Dark Assassin, A crack shot, Liz.
Story: Not much is known about Lizrak. All that is known about her past is that since she was a small girl, she was trained to kill by her family. She is an excellent shot and is very unlikely to miss a shot. She is known to side with both Good and Evil but more evil as they pay her to do work. She is very mysterious. She seems to have a relationship with Maku but no one knows about it but them.


Cool pose!


Another Cool pose


Back


Side


High-heels!


Also the mata foot is hair. (please tell me if that works as hair!)


Her gun!


You don't want to be in HER way when she's aiming that gun!


Cooler pose.


Final pose.


Bye!

*Fourth Wall*
Well that was my first female bionicle. If you want me to make more, please comment! Also please leave sugeestions for my next MOCs down below cause I'd like to know your ideas for what I should make! Alright so thanks for reading this page and goodbye! :D

Next: The Fight for Quaza Magna! Episode 1!




Comments

 I like it 
  November 7, 2013
Seems pretty cool. A revamp using advice would be good. I agree with Wertman on everything, and don't worry, I have a serious lack of parts and no Bricklink either! I work with what I've got. If you do revamp her, add some breasts. It may seem weird, but it emphasises the female part a lot more. But pretty cool nontheless! :)
 I made it 
  November 5, 2013
Quoting Wertman 8 Some nice concepts here, but there's a few stuff I'd like to nitpick. My first and biggest gripe is the torso. I know what you're trying to do, but I think it leaves too much exposed. Adding extra armour to the sides and below it would probably look nice, but in all honesty I'm not incredibly fond of it in general. The hair kinda looks nice from the front, but I'd probably change that out, seeming as it relies too heavily on a imaginative perspective. Finally, a little thing with me is just the red axels and balljoints look a bit wierd to me, but I won't push that one because that may be due to a lack of parts or whatever, which shouldn't affect the MOC. Still, a nice starting point, keep up the good work!
Thanks! :D will take your ideas into consideration next time! (also yes, the red axel and ball joint thing is due to a lack of parts. :S better get on bricklink!)
 I like it 
  November 5, 2013
Some nice concepts here, but there's a few stuff I'd like to nitpick. My first and biggest gripe is the torso. I know what you're trying to do, but I think it leaves too much exposed. Adding extra armour to the sides and below it would probably look nice, but in all honesty I'm not incredibly fond of it in general. The hair kinda looks nice from the front, but I'd probably change that out, seeming as it relies too heavily on a imaginative perspective. Finally, a little thing with me is just the red axels and balljoints look a bit wierd to me, but I won't push that one because that may be due to a lack of parts or whatever, which shouldn't affect the MOC. Still, a nice starting point, keep up the good work!
 I made it 
  November 4, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider If the addition of the Piraka leg on her torso is intended to represent breasts, then I would advocate making it a bit wider. Also, it might be nice to attach Hero Factory armor or hand/sockets to the free ball-joints, or possibly wings connected to the sockets on her shoulder armor.
Thanks for the Constructive Critizism! Apreciate it :D also no the piraka leg was not supposed to represent breasts. Thanks agains :D
  November 4, 2013
If the addition of the Piraka leg on her torso is intended to represent breasts, then I would advocate making it a bit wider. Also, it might be nice to attach Hero Factory armor or hand/sockets to the free ball-joints, or possibly wings connected to the sockets on her shoulder armor.
 
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