Heeyyyy you posted before me :P
I think that Deaskuth is gonna have to be my entry, I am going to visit my grandparents on Sunday, so I won't have my peices or my camera and internet :P Good job though ^-^
Pretty good. Some parts like the lower legs seem a bit too messy and rough, and I dislike the gaps in the lower arms, but overall it's pretty good. I think it needs more dark colors though, perhaps add some dark red (instead of trans red) and less silver. I also think it looks a bit too similar to Deaskuth, but I guess that's the problem with making two MOCs with similar color schemes and features.
Great job! Like him a lot. The blue pegs I don't like, but you can't help that, those mata feet, one thing I don't like about them. Its where the ankle is ( or the socket ), all you need to do is add a ballpoint in there to each of them. I'll give you an 8 for a good entry for the first round, looking forward to your other entries!