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Ying Zi- The Shadow Striker
For Cevka's 1st Annual Bio-Mocer Contest.
About this creation
(Sorry for some bad quality pics.)

Whoo! My first contest! I'm quite excited actually. The topic was to make a Toa or Matoran with unusual elements like Light, Shadow, Plantlife, Plasma etc. So, since I have a lot of black and sliver pieces, I decided to make a Toa of shadow. This is Ying Zi, which means "shadow" in chinese. He is a toa of shadow who is merciless against his foes and fights for justice.

I'm quite satisfied with this guy, espacially those legs design. I know the torso looks a lot similar to Dark Kai's one but I made this torso from scartch. He uses two maces known as the "Yin Yang Maces", attached with a chain. Much like G1 Megatron :P Well, I hope this guy is good enough to let me pass round 1. As for the other participants, good luck to you guys too!

Link to the contest:click here








































Smacking the hell out of Locan.


Comaprison with an Inika build.


I told you he's merciless.


That must have hurt...


See ya'all!




Comments

 I made it 
  October 25, 2013
Quoting Indy * i am quite boned :P Nice designs here, and great motifs all the way through the build!
Thx Indy! :)
 I like it 
  October 25, 2013
i am quite boned :P Nice designs here, and great motifs all the way through the build!
  October 20, 2013
@Chro: :P @X: Neh, I never said anything about ME being as good as him. Plus I don't wanna shame the great :P
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Oh yeah moc-off!!!!! :DDDD
  October 20, 2013
..... Do I sense moc off? :P
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. (@Chro: Bigger they are, harder they fall :P)
You can try, kid, you can try.
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Reaper the Ultimate . As has been pointed out, the back armouring is a little cheap, but I quite like this MOC. Proportions are good, nice overall look and feel, good entry. Quite like this one. Here, this arbitrary 8 should help you along.
Thx Reap! :D
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting X ~ Ahem... I'm Here TO JUDGE! The is stunning! Firstly the legs are quite good. I really like the the use of the piston in there. Though in some ways I feel the silver takes over the leg. The upper legs are decent but they are a little bit gappy from the Inika armor to the the thigh. The torso is amazing. I really like that you double layered the Hordika chestplate on top of the Nuparu Inika chestplate, and I really like how you kept the frame of the torso(Technic Liftarms) hidden a bit. I also really love that the torso is full! Oh and 1 other thing...you need to spread the red out. The arms are pretty nice and I do like the way they look. And in some ways with that mask it look likes an overpowered Dystrax.XD But nice job and that mace.....that's nice. Anyway here is your score... 8!
Thx a bunch X! :D
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
As has been pointed out, the back armouring is a little cheap, but I quite like this MOC. Proportions are good, nice overall look and feel, good entry. Quite like this one. Here, this arbitrary 8 should help you along.
  October 20, 2013
@Patryk: Oh, OK, I can sorta agree with that.
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
Ahem... I'm Here TO JUDGE! The is stunning! Firstly the legs are quite good. I really like the the use of the piston in there. Though in some ways I feel the silver takes over the leg. The upper legs are decent but they are a little bit gappy from the Inika armor to the the thigh. The torso is amazing. I really like that you double layered the Hordika chestplate on top of the Nuparu Inika chestplate, and I really like how you kept the frame of the torso(Technic Liftarms) hidden a bit. I also really love that the torso is full! Oh and 1 other thing...you need to spread the red out. The arms are pretty nice and I do like the way they look. And in some ways with that mask it look likes an overpowered Dystrax.XD But nice job and that mace.....that's nice. Anyway here is your score... 8!
  October 20, 2013
@Garret, im talking about protruding parts and gaps between body and armor.
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Toa Infernum Wow! That looks epic! :)
Thx dude! :D
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
Wow! That looks epic! :)
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. Quite awesome. I have to agree with Mr.Chro down there, I like your style, and you definitely are improving. Keep on at this increment, and you will pass Chro in talent! ;) (@Chro: Bigger they are, harder they fall :P)
Thx for the encouragement! :D
  October 20, 2013
Also, @Patryk: Wut?! Those Hordika chestplates are AWESOME! I use em whenever I want a chain mail/knightly look ;)
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
Quite awesome. I have to agree with Mr.Chro down there, I like your style, and you definitely are improving. Keep on at this increment, and you will pass Chro in talent! ;) (@Chro: Bigger they are, harder they fall :P)
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Patryk Smajdor Hmm feet design..Anyway armor on back looks like a shortcut, its just one big plate covering his body. Limb proportions also look strange for me, are these arms longer than his legs? Torso seem a bit elongated and armoring on it and arms look a bit messy. 7 from me. GL!
Thx Patryk! Yea, I kinda got that foot design inspiration from some of your mocs :) Oh, the arms are shorter than his legs actually. I think they look long due to the black spikes on the fingers. Thx for all the advice! I will work harder! >:)
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
Hmm feet design..Anyway armor on back looks like a shortcut, its just one big plate covering his body. Limb proportions also look strange for me, are these arms longer than his legs? Torso seem a bit elongated and armoring on it and arms look a bit messy. 7 from me. GL!
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting [ Chro ] By far the best MOC of yours that I've seen. You're improving pretty rapidly. :D
Thx man! :)
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
By far the best MOC of yours that I've seen. You're improving pretty rapidly. :D
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Cevka . Very nice! You did a great job on this guy, I like him, you payed attention to every detail on him, some Mocers don't do that. A great moc, so I'm giving you a...9
Thx a ton Cevka! :D
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
Very nice! You did a great job on this guy, I like him, you payed attention to every detail on him, some Mocers don't do that. A great moc, so I'm giving you a...9
 
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