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the adventure begins!
About this creation
Coming back from the lands of Sulfarh at the end of the world,
weary of battle, Gorken and his band finds his sister bruised
from abuse by the captain of the patrol from Mythron...

Since they have been away for a very long time,
they find that things have turned for the worst in their natal country...

They now have to rely on the informations of a mysterious stranger,
who knows the land and it s intricacies...

Seemingly guided by a strong sense of justice, he divulged at the risk
of his own security, the names of those responsible for this outrage!
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Brohm;
You did well to inform us stranger!
now, will you follow your heart and bring justice to the land once more?

STRANGER;
I am needed elsewhere!
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Mattel;
It seems everybody is scared of this patrol!
we have better be prepared for their arrival, this 'beastman' seems pretty nasty!
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Gorken;
Leave him to me, these are my concerns!
make sure to stay hidden from their view, it will give us the element of surprise!
you will know when to act!
4





.......AND THE NEXT MORNING...........
PUBLIC ANNOUNCER;
OYE, OYE,
Prepare your taxes for the patrol!
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MIELA;
Oh, please my brother!
do not put yourself in harms way, forget about this incident, I will move my kiosk
in another village, we lost Borgus already, you are all that is left of our family,
I cannot bear to loose you too!
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Gorken;
Borgus was a weakling just as you are!
it is no surprise to me that he has disappeared, all the reason more to redeem our
family name, father s soul must be tormented from the shame!
the Brahkaas s honor will shine once more!!!
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The villagers assemble for the taxes in great haste....
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and the patrol finally arrives....
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CAPTAIN S SOLDIER;
HEY! YOU! you are not from Enalica!
I have never seen you before!
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CAPTAIN;
Who is this man that stands defiant in my path?
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Gorken;
I am known as the black fury!!!
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CAPTAIN;
INSOLENT SWINE!!!
FORWARD GUARDS, ATTACK!!!
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GUARDS;
HHHHAAAAAAAAA!!!!
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..........
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.........
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.........
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.........
18





GORKEN;
Assaulting defenseless women seems to be all these men where good for...
I doubt the rest of you are even able to feed my horse!
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CAPTAIN ENRAGED;
ARCHERS!
SILENCE THIS ARROGANT SAVAGE!!!
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ARCHERS;
ARRRGH! HEEUUUU!
21





Mattel;
You will have to give yourself more trouble if you want to take this man down!
22





CAPTAIN;
WHAT? ANOTHER ONE????
23





BROHM;
You are in more trouble than you can ever realize you coward!
24





GORKEN;
STAY OUT OF THIS!!!
YOU HAVE INTERVENED ENOUGH AS IT IS!!!
25





CAPTAIN;
You certainly earned your knickname well stranger!
but, I am certain that even you cannot handle the wrath of the beastman!
unleash the monster, handler!
26





GORKEN;
I intent on handling it more than well,
as I will roast it for a feast tonight, I am sure it is tasteful and...CHEWIE!!!
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and the beastman attacked with rage!
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BEASTMAN;
RRRAAAAARRRGHHHH!!!
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CAPTAIN;
HA, HA, HA, NOT SO TENDER, IS IT?
30





GORKEN;
Once you get to learn it s moves...
it is pretty harmless!
31





GORKEN;
I think it is as tired as me to hear you speak!
it is time to put it to sleep!
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LIGHT KNIGHT;
CAPTAIN! MAKE YOUR ESCAPE!
if I survive, I will join you later at our hideout!!!
33





CAPTAIN;
Thank you Kragar!
your name will always be revered!
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GORKEN;
I will get you soon enough you coward!
35





LIGHT KNIGHT;
If I kill you, I will have all the women of Mythron!
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GORKEN;
Get down from your high horse and stop dreaming!
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GORKEN;
This sword is way too heavy for a 'gentleman' like you!
38





GORKEN;
NOW! is this throat worth anything to me?
or should I cut it?
39





LIGHT KNIGHT;
I might as well tell you everything you fool, as you are all finished,
now that our captain has reached our hideout!
you can never deal with what he has for the likes of you!!!
40




CONTINUES IN EP#3!


CREATOR S LOG;
the blood concept was inspired by Freeling.
note that there are only 2 characters fighting now,
as I don t have enough points for more, and I made
the story fitting this.






Comments

 I made it 
  October 29, 2013
Quoting Halhi 141 thank you very much Halhi! I ll look at your page!
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  October 29, 2013
Quoting Sven Jagdmann thanks Sven!
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  October 28, 2013
Nice layout! The architecture on the buildings is great.
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  October 26, 2013
Absolute fantastic scene, fights and details Frank! Great work my friend :)
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  October 26, 2013
Quoting David the Fire Ninja Jedi you got it David!
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  October 26, 2013
Quoting Freeling . Ha! We're both on most discussed. I was on most popular... But it went off.
you make great stories, you deserve it!
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  October 26, 2013
Nice story and great action! You were asking about information that I might have for me appearing in one of your MOCs? We can talk more in the Crossovers thread in LOM. :D
  October 24, 2013
Ha! We're both on most discussed. I was on most popular... But it went off.
 I made it 
  October 22, 2013
Quoting Carlo Brunelli I to bought the Head of your banker so now I can build him
lol, what a great idea Carlo!!!
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  October 22, 2013
Fantastic!I'm bought some pieces on BrickLink for my house and I hope to recive them soon!but my work is always long... I to bought the Head of your banker so now I can build him
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  October 20, 2013
Quoting Freeling .
Thanks man! ----- Sav vy?
thanks Freeling! I know it s confusing when you read my comments, here s why...I m about recycling ecolo, better managing the ressources, in my groups, I erase past comments to save space on the pages, this is my way of saving-managing space better, people complain about the pages s performance, but, keep 'garbage' in memory, I m not, I like the pages fast, so, I erase, and manage the space the most efficiently possible, I m sorry and understand, it s not as bad when I m available to answer right away, but, when I go to work, sort a scene, and lots of people comment, the responses are far from the corresponding comment, I m real happy about the recent pages s performance, and d like to keep it that way without Sean to have to invest more...
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Ron L. Mitchell thank you very much Ron! I m sure you ll enjoy my ML serie for the same reasons!
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  October 20, 2013
Quoting El Barto ! thanks El barto! I wanted to add to the scheme and trend, a different angle, 'braveheart' is one of my best movie ever, injustice is one of my themes, you can bet you ll see some disturbing scenarios, lol, I mix it with humor to keep it light, but, it makes for reflection.
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  October 20, 2013
Quoting Parrington Levens thanks Parr! I try my best, I know I did good when I like to read them again, it improved a lot by scripting on paper all the scenarios like a cartoon, sadly my building techniques are still not as I d like, but, at least, they re cool to read.
 I made it 
  October 20, 2013
Quoting Nick Barrett thank you very much Nick! I took great effort in the fight stances, and the script took me a few hours to write, but, I m happy with the results!
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  October 20, 2013
Quoting Freeling .
Thanks man! ----- Sav vy?
I understand, but, it s my way to save 'the pages' space, sorry!
 I like it 
  October 20, 2013
You staged the fight scenes splendidly! Hear, hear!
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  October 20, 2013
Awesome battle scenes, Frank! Good to see the tax collectors get it!
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  October 20, 2013
dude you are a prodigous story teller here on MP
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  October 20, 2013
CHEWBACCA! Awesome storytelling, brilliantly staged fight scenes and nicely built. Great stuff!
cyberfrank 2010
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Dr. Monster
  October 19, 2013
Great episode! Gorken had quite a collection of body parts around by the end of it! It's nice to see Chewie finally found some modesty and put a pair of pants on.
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  October 19, 2013
Nice MOC! Cool building. Very cool buildings. Anyways, here's a tip on replying to comments... You seem to always write in the reply boxes, you're supposed to write outside of them. Such as, when you click reply, you'll see something like this..
Quoting What's his face Your LOM stories are my favorites. They're hilarious. (You don't comment in here, this is where the comment of the person who commented goes.)
(You comment right here, outside of the box.) I'll show you what it looks like below when you do it right. -----
Quoting Stormjay Rider Your LOM stories are my favorites. They're hilarious.
Thanks man! ----- Sav vy?
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Mark McPeek thanks Mark!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Michael K. thanks Michael!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Caleb of Enalica thanks Cal! it s a patrol from Mythron, they are being bold, and make their law on other lands, good thing the Vanguards where there, lol.
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting --R.K. Blast-- thanks Blast!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Topsy Creatori (StoveTopCreator!) thanks Topsy! it s great you say that! it means my style is stabilizing.
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Dr. Monster lol, thanks Doc!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Nick White thanks Nick! of course!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting Jared . Le puavre Blanc-Chevalier...
thanks Jared! pauvre-poor, blanc-white, light-lumiere, pale, in this case, pale, he ll survive for the next episode, don t worry, lol.
 I made it 
  October 19, 2013
Quoting clayton Marchetti thanks Clayton! yeah, the pants part was funny, the arrows and head-blood are inspired from Freeling!
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  October 19, 2013
Quoting matt rowntRee thanks Matt! lol, of course you might know, I used him thinking of your jokes! I have nt played a video game for a long time now, it took me a fair amount of time to write the script, 2-3 hrs.
 I made it 
  October 19, 2013
Quoting David Alexander Smith thanks David! yeah, lol, and he acts like one too.
 I like it 
  October 19, 2013
Fantastic work!!
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  October 19, 2013
Great work! Only one problem, why are the guards in blue? That is Mythron's colors. This wouldn't make sense unless they were in Mythron!
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  October 19, 2013
Great houses!
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  October 19, 2013
Not bad at all! Good work on the set and story. --Blast--
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  October 19, 2013
As always your story progresses natuarally with the scenes and keeps one interested. And of course, it would not be a story from you without some clever humor! Oh, and I knew right away this was yours from the thumb pic... it had that 'frankish' look about it! :)
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  October 19, 2013
Wow! allot of people died! Nice story! BTW, I have A.I.L.C. episode 5 season 2 up! so you can read it if you want!
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  October 19, 2013
Le puavre Blanc-Chevalier...
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  October 19, 2013
Awesome episode Frank ! I love the reference to Chewie and it was funny because the beast man was wearing pants . I loved the arrows especially the one in the guys head cool! I also like the effect of cutting that guys head off! Can't wait for the next episode!
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  October 19, 2013
CHEWY!!!!! Great stuff here Cyberfrank! The action was wonderful and well paced. Best of all was the writing, fantastically hilarious. Love the personality you developed in each of the characters so quickly. And, of course, what can be said about Chewy? Even though his arms were ripped from his body (perfectly fitting if you've played the video game), I can see him returning here and there just to bring a proud tear to my eye. Well done! A splendid way to start the day. ;)
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  October 19, 2013
I ham known as the black fury - great line :)
 
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