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Lumi: Toa of Ice, Toa of Peace
Toa Lumi, my entry to the Bionicle MOCing Challenge!
About this creation


Name: Lumi
Species: Matoran/Toa/Turaga
Occupation: Former Acolyte, wandering Toa, secluded Turaga
Element: Ice
Kanohi: Hau, noble Hau











After migrating to Spherus Magna, Lumi the Acolyte became a Toa. Based on his love for peace, he was given a simple shield for a tool.



He went on to wander the planet, searching for true peace, but defeating evil when necessary.



At the end of his journey, he sacrificed his power and became a Turaga. He eventually became the leader of a small village.







4th wall and stuff:

I know that my attempts at story content are sad, but I'm in a rush to get this up. When I heard the announcement of the theme for the contest, I went and looked for a suitable Matoran. I didn't want to do anyone that had already gotten a Toa form, and MNOG II gave me a wealth of Matoran to pick from, so I chose Lumi. Hope you like it!




Comments

 I like it 
  October 28, 2013
i must admit it odd to see a moc with that McDonald matoron chest part the only problem with the toa form is the hands on the shoulders, i think it would be so much better if you remover those parts entirely for the future, i think you have a promising future with bionicle moc, my only thing i must tell u is to not add armor that can takes away from the moc, if it looks good with out armor, by all means,leave it that way
 I made it 
  October 5, 2013
Thanks, all, for your kind words. :-)
  October 2, 2013
Sorry if my scores are a bit late, but I was a bit busy with the few first days of uni. Anyway, your MOC's are quite good actually; however, I feel Toa Lumi could have used some more white on his shoulders. Scores: Q/C/A:10/3/4. Total:17/25. Best of luck!
  September 30, 2013
Nice builds. The Toa's torso armor looks quite good. Scores: Quality: 9 Creativity: 3 Adherence: 5 Total: 17/25
 I like it 
  September 30, 2013
Pretty cool, mate. Scores: Quality: 9 Creativity: 3 Adherence: 4 Overall: 16/25.
 I like it 
  September 29, 2013
Excellent design. I love your choice of a more obscure and set-less matoran. Your entree is incredibly unique in construction and its adherence is definitely the best thus far. Although I prefer to give the toa and turaga forms masks different from the matoran form (much like actual sets), your use of the grey Noble Hau definitely adds to the aesthetic appeal. Builds like these really make me wish I was a judge; keep up the excellent work!
 
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