Toa Lumi, my entry to the Bionicle MOCing Challenge!
About this creation
Occupation: Former Acolyte, wandering Toa, secluded Turaga
Kanohi: Hau, noble Hau
After migrating to Spherus Magna, Lumi the Acolyte became a Toa. Based on his love for peace, he was given a simple shield for a tool.
He went on to wander the planet, searching for true peace, but defeating evil when necessary.
At the end of his journey, he sacrificed his power and became a Turaga. He eventually became the leader of a small village.
4th wall and stuff:
I know that my attempts at story content are sad, but I'm in a rush to get this up. When I heard the announcement of the theme for the contest, I went and looked for a suitable Matoran. I didn't want to do anyone that had already gotten a Toa form, and MNOG II gave me a wealth of Matoran to pick from, so I chose Lumi. Hope you like it!
i must admit it odd to see a moc with that McDonald matoron chest part the only problem with the toa form is the hands on the shoulders, i think it would be so much better if you remover those parts entirely
for the future, i think you have a promising future with bionicle moc, my only thing i must tell u is to not add armor that can takes away from the moc, if it looks good with out armor, by all means,leave it that way
Sorry if my scores are a bit late, but I was a bit busy with the few first days of uni. Anyway, your MOC's are quite good actually; however, I feel Toa Lumi could have used some more white on his shoulders. Scores: Q/C/A:10/3/4. Total:17/25. Best of luck!
Excellent design. I love your choice of a more obscure and set-less matoran. Your entree is incredibly unique in construction and its adherence is definitely the best thus far. Although I prefer to give the toa and turaga forms masks different from the matoran form (much like actual sets), your use of the grey Noble Hau definitely adds to the aesthetic appeal. Builds like these really make me wish I was a judge; keep up the excellent work!