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LOM: Chasing the Thief
This is a crossover between Freeling and I. Enjoy!
About this creation
You may want to read this first, it will help make this story make a lot more sense: Freeling's Awesome MOC



George: How are you guys doing?



Guard 1: Hey George, we're doing great!



Guard 2: What are you doing here on this fine morning?



George: Just going for my daily walk! I better be off, see you around!



Guards: See ya! Bye!



George: It sure is a great day out.



Man, that guy sure looks suspicious. But it's probably nothing.



George turned the corner.



George: Well, hello there!

Maiden: Hi!



George: Dang, that was one smoking hot maiden!



George looks back at her.



*High-pitched girly scream*

George: Oh no, the smoking hot maiden!!!



George: I'm coming!!!



George: What?!? What's wrong?!?



George looks at what the maiden saw, horrified.



George: I was only gone for, like, five seconds!!! What happened?!?



Guard 1: Why?!? Why would you stab him?!? You know we aren't aloud to do that!!! Do you know how much bad rep we are going to get for this?!?

Guard 2: What was I supposed to do?!? Let him hit me?




George: What happened?!?



Guard 2: I, I don't know. This bum just attacked us out of nowhere! I guess my reflexes kicked in, and I stabbed him.



Guard 1: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.



George: Wait a minute.



George: That guy is gone! AND the grappling hook! AND THE SMOKING HOT MAIDEN!



George looks up and sees a chain being pulled into the top tower.



George: Get your captain! Call the guard! The castle is being robbed!






Guards: We got you now, robber! Nowhere to run!



Guards: Wait a second here...

George: What? I saw a chain being pulled up here! There was a guy up here, I'm sure of it!



Captain Macintosh: Yeah, sure.

George: No, seriously!

Captain Macintosh: Everything seems to look normal and intact to me.

George: But...




… : What is going on here?!?! This room is supposed to be secret for a reason! No one should be up here!!!



Everyone: Your Majesty!

George: Your Majesty, I saw someone up here! I think it was a thief!

Captain Macintosh: Yeah, he “thinks”...



High King: Watch out, I need check something.



The High King opens the chest, to reveal nothing inside.

High King: Just as I had feared. Out thief has stolen a Soul Diamond. It is not a real diamond, only a diamond shaped case containing a soul trapped inside. It was a gift from Rainos back in the day.

George: Who gives a soul as a gift?!?

High King: Rainos does...



High King: Looks like our little outlaw has escaped from the window.



George: I'll get him!



George: Aim for the bushes!



George: YOLO!!!



High King: Wow. That man is a real hero. I believe he will do great things in the future, even though he is only a Level 1 Citizen Noob. He will be great, maybe even like George Marshalllll himself.

*Thud.



George: Ooooohhh. That one hurt.



George: Gotta get up and get that diamond!



FOR MYTHRON!!!




After tracking the thief for a while, George comes across a pretty little area within the forest.



George: What a beautiful site!



George: Better get going, don't wanna lose this guy.






George is oblivious to the fact that the robber himself was expertly hiding behind the tree. Clever!



George: Ahhh!

George tried to dodge the knife, but the man was to quick and swift.



With extreme accuracy, the man stabbed George right between a gap in George's armor.



George: AAARRRGGGHHH!!!



George, still in shock from the pain, only had a glance of his assailant, looking back at him.



The man turned around, and ran away.



George: Umm, OW!!!!



George: Hey look, he dropped the diamond! That's convenient!



-- BONUS PICS! --









Prototype bush. How's it look?







Thanks Freeling! Finally this is out, we have been working on this for about three weeks! Not the building part, that was like just the last two days. But the planning, THAT was the hard part! :P But it was fun, thanks!



I hope you enjoyed it, don't forget to COMMENT and RATE below!



Comments

 I like it 
  November 27, 2013
Awesome!
 I like it 
  September 29, 2013
Nice!
 I like it 
  September 20, 2013
Wonderful job! I was cracking up the whole time!
 I like it 
  September 16, 2013
beautiful scenes, quite funny, especially the fall of the hero, lol, great fig design, the treasure looked fab!
 I like it 
  September 9, 2013
Nice cross-over! Perhaps.. one day.. you will be like the great George Marshalllll!!!
 I like it 
  September 3, 2013
Nice collaboration! And MOC too!
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Awesome! The Builds are great!
  August 30, 2013
Great! Your dialogue is starting to sound like Spider-Man now...or Deadpool;) Anyways, cool build! To bad you just got stabbed, Too bad your dying and you can't save your district commander fro outlaws! TOO BAD YOU WERE STABBED *Evil face* -Brick Boy
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Awesome little collaboration between you two. Great stories, and nice touches of humour. Great job!
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Great job! They look pretty similar...
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  August 30, 2013
Ha, ha! The best part is when the king says "he's a real hero" and then half a send later he's in pancake pose. XD
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Love it! The scenery is amazing, especially the waterfall and foliage. Though green looks a bit strange for the color of the pond. I love the dialogue, "YOLO!" Haha, 5/5!!
 I made it 
  August 30, 2013
Quoting Gilbert Despathens THAT was a very well-coordinated build. I've never seen two MOCS that so perfectly tell two parts of the same story uploaded within such a short time of each other. By the way, I love the "Marshalllll" reference and the lines: "What? Who gives a soul as a present?" "Rainos does" ...not the least because I have had a secret plot to make use of something that almost exactly resembles a soul diamond for my character's story since late spring. WHERE DID YOU GET THE IDEA?
Actually, it was Freeling's idea.
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
THAT was a very well-coordinated build. I've never seen two MOCS that so perfectly tell two parts of the same story uploaded within such a short time of each other. By the way, I love the "Marshalllll" reference and the lines: "What? Who gives a soul as a present?" "Rainos does" ...not the least because I have had a secret plot to make use of something that almost exactly resembles a soul diamond for my character's story since late spring. WHERE DID YOU GET THE IDEA?
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Well done. I like the mixed in humor :)
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Nice story! I hope he finds his true love again!
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Hilarious referencing George Marshallll and your position when you hit the ground. XD Looks a lot like freeling's. Looks really good. Your guy isn't the sharpest tool in the shed, is he. And where were all your companions during this? Then maybe you would not have been stabbed. Great Job!
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
LOL. Awesome story, and great mocs you guys. :D
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Nice! While freelings MOC was more serious, yours was hilarious! Love the contrast there!
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Excellent work man! The two stories were awesome together!
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Love it! Great to see humor in MOCs.
 
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