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Jethryn, the Crusader
Possibly my SelfMOC. If not, then an experiment gone bad.
About this creation

Name: Jethryn
Species: Unique type of intelligent Rahi
Location: Unknown
Lifespan: 24000 years BGC – unknown
Alignment: Lawful Good
Occupation: Member of Order of Mata Nui
Element: Fire
Kanohi: None worn normally, though he can still access their powers.

Jethryn is a mysterious figure. According to the Makuta, he has the fusion of three Rahi into one.
From their account, he began has three entities: a humanoid Rahi, a spider-Like Rahi, and another experiment where they tried to extract intelligence from a Matoran’s mind. By accident – or perhaps by Mata Nui’s will – the vats containing the growing Rahi spilled out their contents together, resulting in a new being with the main body of a humanoid, with the spider-like elements on his back and head, and – most frightening of all – intelligence.
The entity came to the conclusion that the Makuta had taken him prisoner, and he began to fight them, first with his bare hands, then with the Brotherhood’s weapons. He eventually made his escape, attempting to find his home, which he had none.
He eventually came upon a person in mourning. When he asked what had happened, she replied that she was a Toa, and that her partner had been killed in battle. The entity decided to help her fight again, and the two succeeded in winning the battle. When asked his name, and told that he had none, the Toa decided to name him after her fallen partner – Jethryn.


Jethryn: Okay, that’s a good bit of backstory for now.
Me: You’re sure you don’t want me to continue telling them your story?
Jethryn: Not at the moment. For now, I just want them to see good-looking me.
Me: All right.














That's it for now. Comments, Critiques, and especially suggestions for improvement are appreciated.



Comments

 I made it 
  June 13, 2014
Quoting Defiant Banana Colorful, but a bit of an awkward build.The legs don't look good compared to the body, which doesn't seem fleshed out enough. Keep working, it has potential.
I did keep working -- the 2nd version is here: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/377686
  June 13, 2014
Colorful, but a bit of an awkward build.The legs don't look good compared to the body, which doesn't seem fleshed out enough. Keep working, it has potential.
 I like it 
  September 26, 2013
this Jethryn is truly awesome, your creations are so good and certaily they deserve much more attention. Cheers!
 I like it 
  September 22, 2013
this is amazing!
 I like it 
  September 22, 2013
It almost looks on fire! Awesome :D
 I like it 
  August 30, 2013
Dem shoulders man. Cool bionicle.
  August 26, 2013
i think that the torso is a bit big.
 I like it 
  August 26, 2013
Pretty nice work, though he needs some brushing up. I'd like to see him a LOT more bulk, even if it means making him smaller. His torso is a bit wide as well, but I really do like his custom head, it fits very well.
 I like it 
  August 25, 2013
Nice, but the torso looks a little too wide. Other than that, it's a great MOC!
 I made it 
  August 24, 2013
Quoting Elvish Brick Great work Stormy! (Can I call you Stormy?)
I prefer to be called Jay, or Storm. Or Stormjay. Or That Guy who is about to Kill you.
 I like it 
  August 24, 2013
Great work Stormy! (Can I call you Stormy?)
 I like it 
  August 22, 2013
Nice! I would recommend adding fighting poses to see how he would react in battle
 I made it 
  August 21, 2013
Quoting X ~ Nice Self-Moc?Is it your Self-Moc? Well I'm personally not a fan of the legs.There is a bit too much gap in the upper legs.And while the lower legs have armor that looks nice, I can't bring myself to like them. The torso is really nice, and that makes me feel that the legs should be a bit more bigger to fit with the size of the torso(Chest).Unless the chest was one part of a fusion from a gorillaish type rahi. The arms are okay, but yet again the lower arms, I feel should be a bit more armored.The upper arms are armored good. The head fits the story....I like it,the spikes on the sides look very cool.Almost like spider fangs. Honestly I feel he is a great moc, but as a self-moc a personally feel he should be the best you put on the table. And one question, didn't you say your SM would be blue?
I'm not sure if he's going to be my selfMOC yet. My first attempt at making one had some blue in it.
 I like it 
  August 21, 2013
Nice Self-Moc?Is it your Self-Moc? Well I'm personally not a fan of the legs.There is a bit too much gap in the upper legs.And while the lower legs have armor that looks nice, I can't bring myself to like them. The torso is really nice, and that makes me feel that the legs should be a bit more bigger to fit with the size of the torso(Chest).Unless the chest was one part of a fusion from a gorillaish type rahi. The arms are okay, but yet again the lower arms, I feel should be a bit more armored.The upper arms are armored good. The head fits the story....I like it,the spikes on the sides look very cool.Almost like spider fangs. Honestly I feel he is a great moc, but as a self-moc a personally feel he should be the best you put on the table. And one question, didn't you say your SM would be blue?
 
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