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The Lost Saga Chapter 2 Rising Star
Onboard the Republic Star orbiting Coruscant Jedi Master Stark receives word of General Grievous's death. The crew rejoices, the war is coming to a close...
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Stark: Froze...it has been a long time.

Froze: Indeed. Can't remember the last time I had a break like this.



Stark: You know, I have been thinking about retiring recently.

Froze: Likewise sir, Nabooo seems like a nice place-

(Froze communicator begins to beep) Excuse me.



~~The time has come, execute Order 66~

Froze: Yes, my lord.



Froze: General, we have to leave now!

Stark: Froze what is wrong?



Froze: No time to explain-



A Lieutenant is blocking the exit with a detachment of clones.



Lieutenant: Commander I order you to hand the traitor over! You are directly disobeying orders!

Froze: What else is new?



Froze blast the two clone troopers.



Stark removes the Lieutenant's hand.



Stark: We have to warn the Jedi temple!



Froze: No you have to. I'll hold them off General.

Stark: Froze..



Froze: Go!

Froze holds the line, buying Master Stark enough time to escape.



A new detachment of clones arrive.



Froze is hit in the chest.



Froze: Brother! (cough) How could you betray him?



Captain Blaze: Patch him up, we will need to question him. Send him to the Slab.



Admiral: Congradulations, Commander...Now you can take your brothers place. The new Empire will need Stark alive, find him.



Commander Blaze: Yes ma'am.



Stark recieves the Jedi Temple distress signal, He prepares for a fight.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------Author's Notes

So I lied and released episode 2 early, hope you guys don't mind. This episode introduces the characters that will become a staple for the series so pay attention to them. I was wondering if you guys would like me to post biographies on each character with some backstory, but it will contain no spoilers. Whatcha think?




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 I like it 
  November 29, 2013
Sweet! The series is so hooking! And what a coincidence-I'm watching Revenge of the Sith right now!
 I like it 
  August 23, 2013
Amazing!
Master Stark
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Admiral Varkov
  August 10, 2013
Excellent effects! Great job!
 I made it 
  August 10, 2013
Quoting Admiral Varkov Excellent effects! Great job!
Thanks!
 I made it 
  August 9, 2013
Quoting El Barto ! Pretty cool, Dude! Especially the effects! If you want to do some back stories, you might want to think about working them into your plot line. Flashbacks, that kind of thing can be useful. But they can make episodes longer, for sure. It's also good to have opening and/or closing pics of the setting. Like the ship they're on, in orbit or whatever. It also gives you a chance to review what's going on, or what's coming up next. In my series, I use those setting pics as buffers when jumping from scene to scene, helping the viewer to follow along. "Meanwhile, back on the Republic Star..." That kind of thing. Sorry for the long comment, hopefully something useful for you in there!
I really like that idea of having the ships orbiting, for the next episodes I will plan on having those. Thanks for the advice! It totally helped.
 I like it 
  August 8, 2013
Pretty cool, Dude! Especially the effects! If you want to do some back stories, you might want to think about working them into your plot line. Flashbacks, that kind of thing can be useful. But they can make episodes longer, for sure. It's also good to have opening and/or closing pics of the setting. Like the ship they're on, in orbit or whatever. It also gives you a chance to review what's going on, or what's coming up next. In my series, I use those setting pics as buffers when jumping from scene to scene, helping the viewer to follow along. "Meanwhile, back on the Republic Star..." That kind of thing. Sorry for the long comment, hopefully something useful for you in there!
 I made it 
  August 7, 2013
Quoting Tony Lin The effects are even better than the first one! Great job!
You think so? Thanks!
 I made it 
  August 7, 2013
Quoting Jensen Anderson I don't think Bios are necessary but you can if you want to. Your pictures are incredibly clear! What type of camera do you have? Nice effects aginan :)
Thanks! I Use a fujifilm finepix s20000hd
 I like it 
  August 7, 2013
The effects are even better than the first one! Great job!
 I like it 
  August 7, 2013
I don't think Bios are necessary but you can if you want to. Your pictures are incredibly clear! What type of camera do you have? Nice effects aginan :)
 
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