It was the mask really; in a lot of standard Inika builds, and in quite a few sets, there was not that much difference between a Toa and a non-Toa apart from the masks, so that's why I assumed him to not be a Toa. But I guess I have to use my brains a little in that he is a MOC :P
Quoting L.A. Miranda
Fighting in a REAL swamp? I would never do that (who knows what lies there that could damage the parts), but I really like that idea. <3
It's not really a swamp, just an abandoned small lagoon at my friend's house, so don't worry, all the parts remain undamaged :)
Quoting Wertman 8
Interesting stuff, but Weren't the undead Toa before they became undead? The red one didn't look much like a Toa...
Like Chro already said, I don't get your point. The red one was the most standart-build of the three...
Quoting [ Chro ] AND Andrew Mayfield
Thanks for the kind words Andrew! And now on the the self-MoC thing: When i made the sign-up with way too many characters I offered you an appearance in my story. That didn't make your self-MoCs protagonists or even important characters, they (and since they're somehow connected to their creator, you) are just a part of the world I created. It may seem like they die easily, but the story I do is mainly about my characters, not "yours". Just consider your self-MoCs as extras :)
Nice, the first big action chapter in the story :D It didn't seem as plot driven as other parts, but it still kept me wanting more, good job with that. I'd ask if Andron is gone for good, but I'm assuming he is, he didn't seem to be a very important character XD Anyway, great job, I can't wait for the next chapter!