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Sorry about the grainy photos. :/
About this creation
The Lands of Mythron.
Faction: Outlaws.
Monthly Universal Challenge: Truce, and Justice.

"I've made my way to the mountains South-West of Meids, that meddlesome fool of a Soldier following me the whole way. He's wearing out, and I've reached the cave that will take me to Rainos. The one thing my fellow Outlaw failed to mention was that there's a fortress on the entrance!"




"I think I've lost him"




"No telling what may lie in these caves... I have to be cautious, or I could find myself i-"






Captain of the Guard: You won't get away!




"Will he ever give up?!?!"




"They might as well put a stair case leading up the side of the wall..."





"He'll never see me once I'm up top."

Captain of the Guard: I'll get you yet!




"Ooof!"




"Idiot."





Captain of the Guard: Come out of there, you coward!




"He'll be looking in there for a while."




*Captain of the Guard runs out of the cave, as though the devil himself is chasing him* "What in Mythron?!?!"





Captain of the Guard: Coward! Call off your pets and face me yourself!




CotG: Argh!




CotG: Call them off!




CotG: Cowaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrd!




"Poor Fool. At least now I know what to expect down there."




"I.....I can't.....Hold!"





"Ahh!"




*The ground crunches as Drazard falls on the scorpions*




"Rwaaaar!!"




*Cutting through more scorpions*




"Get..."




"...OFF!"




*Drazard watches as the last scorpion scurries back to where it came from* "Good Riddance."




"Who are these?!?"



*Shield and sword clang together*




*Drazard hits the leading Orcs sword, catching him off balance and making him stumble off to the side*





"Die, devilish orcs!"





*He hits the next Orc on the shield, making it hit the pillar and roll to the side, unconscious*




"Come and get me..."




"Grraaw!"




"YOU! WILL!"




"DIIEE!!"




"You again..."




"AAaaarrrr!!"





Both: Ooof!




Drazard: This day, I end your violent grip over this fortress."




Drazard: And may all know, that it was I, Drazard, who put an end to your ruthless soul!




"Raawwww!"




"I claim this sword, so that all who see it may know that my tale of this day is true.




*The unconscious orc gets up, dazed by recent events*




Orc: Have mercy!!




Drazard: You. You're different. You can- You can talk!




Drazard: What is your name?
Orc: I, I don't have one. Are you going to kill me, as you did my brothers?
Drazard: No. For, they were no more your brothers than I am your mother. From this day, you shall be called Ivo (Ee-Vo) Firethorn.





Drazard: See him?
Ivo: Blind if I didn't.
Drazard: Take his things. Appearance is part of your person, your identity.




*I watch as he dons his new garb*




Drazard: From this day forth, you are no longer in unison with the orcs, though your knowledge of their language will be useful in the future. Before we go any further, I must ask you. Do you swear to never betray me? Never to turn on me, or lose trust in me?
Ivo: I swear!
Drazard: Good, but know this, if you break your word, I will kill you like a bird devours a worm.
Ivo: I understand.



Drazard: Now come, we've a long way to go, and there's no telling who will have got to those stones before us.
Ivo: Stones?
Drazard: It is a long story. We can discuss it along the way.




"He took one last look at his dead 'family', and I don't blame him. Having those who you loved slaughtered isn't a small piece of meat to swallow, and it sure hurts on the way down." Drazard: Come along Ivo, I don't know these caves nearly as well as you do!

Bonus Pictures. :)

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Just for you, Beardless Dwarf!

Thanks For Looking! Hope You Enjoyed!
Soli Deo Gloria!





Comments

  September 21, 2013
I must admit, I was rooting for the Captain of the Guard to come out on top. *Sigh...
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  August 26, 2013
Sweet action! Cant believe I haven't seen this.
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  August 6, 2013
Quoting Alphonsus Liguori Nice job on the rockwork and the melding of a fortress with the cave!
Thanks!
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  August 6, 2013
Nice job on the rockwork and the melding of a fortress with the cave!
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  July 31, 2013
Quoting George Marshall If I'm correct, I have gone from 4, to 1, to 3, to 2. Hmm. That's definitely not the right order. Anyways, I have finished the 4 chapters of your story, and I can' wait for more! I really need to get cracking on my LOM creations, but how am I supposed to build anything in the shadow of these beauties!
Bahaha, you've got something wrong. :P Thanks! Get going. :P
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  July 30, 2013
If I'm correct, I have gone from 4, to 1, to 3, to 2. Hmm. That's definitely not the right order. Anyways, I have finished the 4 chapters of your story, and I can' wait for more! I really need to get cracking on my LOM creations, but how am I supposed to build anything in the shadow of these beauties!
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  July 23, 2013
SO MUCH BLOOOOOD!!!!! lol this is a great build man keep going strong
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  July 18, 2013
Great work! I like the detailing on the cave and tower.
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  July 14, 2013
Quoting Ru Corder Good job! You've done well crafting your own story and fantasy world.
Thank you Ru!
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  July 14, 2013
Quoting Kiwi Brix Wow, nice work, model and storyline. I am new to LOM and I am currently(at this very moment) working on my character intro
Thanks!
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  July 14, 2013
Good job! You've done well crafting your own story and fantasy world.
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  July 13, 2013
Wow, nice work, model and storyline. I am new to LOM and I am currently(at this very moment) working on my character intro
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  July 12, 2013
Thanks!
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  July 11, 2013
Wow, great job on getting on the Explore page! That should give LoM a bit of publicity! I might have not commented on this yet but if I did, still, great designing!
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  July 11, 2013
Very nice work--I agree with Ian when I say that those dark gray masonry bricks, coupled with the tiles, gives a very nice texture. Great!
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  July 11, 2013
Nice! Those trees..... They're so simple, yet so brilliant! And (obviously) the storyline is very well thought out, great job with everything!
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  July 10, 2013
it was stupid a attempt to see if anyone would call me out glad the first to comment called me out instead of the 54. what i got coming is pretty cool.
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  July 10, 2013
Quoting Ben Olsond (Commander Ben) Hey i deleted that moc i do not know what i was thinking
Alrighty, I was just curious. :)
  July 10, 2013
Hey i deleted that moc i do not know what i was thinking
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  July 10, 2013
Quoting Justin M Whoa...Great job David! :) The story was excellent. Where in the world did you get so many scorpions?
Thanks Justin! I recently bought 50 off of Ebay for 13 bucks. :D
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  July 10, 2013
Quoting Chris . Wow great build as well as figs!
Thanks Chris!
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  July 10, 2013
Whoa...Great job David! :) The story was excellent. Where in the world did you get so many scorpions?
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  July 10, 2013
Wow great build as well as figs!
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  July 10, 2013
Thanks Guys! Andrew - They are from the hedghog haven (Or whatever the world it's called) Friends animal packet. It has some really neat parts, which is why I got it. (those stnp1d packets take up the Series minifigs in Walmarts space. :C )
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  July 9, 2013
The Photography and build is frikkin' tight. It gives the MOC a sense of motion... Sort of..
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  July 9, 2013
Nice work! I like the cave and details! How did you get small red foliage? I only know about the ones in Mirkwood Spiders.
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  July 9, 2013
cool oh and look at this its something you be interested into http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=22319&topicid=90245
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  July 9, 2013
Dunno. He's really just a friend. But in a while he'll take to the seas.
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  July 9, 2013
Really nice build. I wonder how the Orc will play into your story.
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  July 9, 2013
Quoting Ian Spacek Wow, some excellent building here David (and nice mini-figs)! I like the blend of masonry, tiles, and angled plates with the given color scheme. Well done my friend! :)
Thanks Ian!
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  July 9, 2013
Quoting Brick Boy This was an outstanding build and story! I love everything from the scorpions, to the Orc turning his loyalty! -Brick Boy
Thanks! Yep, it can get pretty lonely when your on the run alone...
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  July 9, 2013
Wow, some excellent building here David (and nice mini-figs)! I like the blend of masonry, tiles, and angled plates with the given color scheme. Well done my friend! :)
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  July 9, 2013
This was an outstanding build and story! I love everything from the scorpions, to the Orc turning his loyalty! -Brick Boy
David  .
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Bluethorns55- The Lego Builder
  July 8, 2013
Very nice build! I love the story as well!
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Bluethorns55- The Lego Builder Very nice build! I love the story as well!
Thanks!
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Evan 'Beardless Dwarf' Botkin (Birthday July 8th!) Oh good, playability; I was worried you'd forgotten again :P Nice job on this. I like how the pictures make it look bigger than it really is.
Is this even a compliment? Ah my, well, I'll just say that it is about as big as the pics make it seem. Full shot tend to make it look... Small ... Anywho, Thanks!
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Mister Lego ~ Nice work David! I particularly like those big stone pillars and the interior of the cave.
Thanks Mr.Lego!
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  July 8, 2013
Oh good, playability; I was worried you'd forgotten again :P Nice job on this. I like how the pictures make it look bigger than it really is.
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  July 8, 2013
Nice work David! I particularly like those big stone pillars and the interior of the cave.
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting ~ Caleb ~ Very well done David! The transition from the fortress into the rock is very smoothly done! Although, I don't think there was enough blood... XD
Heehee, twas all I had. XD Thanks man!
  July 8, 2013
Ah, okay! I wasn't quite sure :)
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  July 8, 2013
Very well done David! The transition from the fortress into the rock is very smoothly done! Although, I don't think there was enough blood... XD
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting David the Fire Ninja Jedi Yay! It's (finally) done! I kept coming back to see if all of the text was done, and now it is! Such an awesome build! I like how the fortress is imbedded in the rocks, nice little trees :D Maybe the fallen orcs aren't his family, they tricked him into believing they liked him? Awesome MOC!
That's what I said in the story. (more or less) But he was the only one with real feelings. Thanks!
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  July 8, 2013
Yay! It's (finally) done! I kept coming back to see if all of the text was done, and now it is! Such an awesome build! I like how the fortress is imbedded in the rocks, nice little trees :D Maybe the fallen orcs aren't his family, they tricked him into believing they liked him? Awesome MOC!
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Gilbert Despathens This is one of the best builds in the Lands of Mythron! The photography in the story section shows the best parts of the MOC and keeps the build wonderfully action-packed. My favorite part is the SNOT rock-work inside the tunnel, but I think you made the right choice by not featuring the cannon in the main series of pictures. A word of warning- there are about to be a lot of barbarians coming through the other way, so watch out!
What? I'm one of the few who know about this cave. It's all but non-existent to the rest of the world!
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  July 8, 2013
This is one of the best builds in the Lands of Mythron! The photography in the story section shows the best parts of the MOC and keeps the build wonderfully action-packed. My favorite part is the SNOT rock-work inside the tunnel, but I think you made the right choice by not featuring the cannon in the main series of pictures. A word of warning- there are about to be a lot of barbarians coming through the other way, so watch out!
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Night Reaper Awesome! He's pretty beast in fights, eh? I see he's gained a friend! Will there be a story?
Yup! I'm writing it now. Course he is, he's a cyclops! :D
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Toa Infernum Nice work David! Love the combo of olive and dark red leaves! Nice masonry work on the column things. Can't wait to read the story! :)
Thanks Man! Yeah, stick around! :D
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  July 8, 2013
Quoting Nick white awesome!!! I like the story!
Thanks! There is still more! :D
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  July 8, 2013
Awesome! He's pretty beast in fights, eh? I see he's gained a friend! Will there be a story?
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  July 8, 2013
awesome!!! I like the story!
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  July 8, 2013
Nice work David! Love the combo of olive and dark red leaves! Nice masonry work on the column things. Can't wait to read the story! :)
 
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