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Jelao,the ninja Toa of metals
My rushed(but hopefully still good)Entry to the 2013 Bio-cup.
About this creation
bio:
Name:Jelao
Gender:male
Species:Matoran
Race:?
Element:multiple elements from the Periodic Table,excluding gold,iron,Titanium,and others
Powers:Control over various metals(though it sounds neat being able to control multiple metals,most of his elements are pretty much the same,so it isn't that special).His primary element is Nickel;ninja abilities
Weapons:Sword,shruken,hands,feet
Occupation:Ninja for the Toa Order





























Comments

 I like it 
  August 15, 2013
Nice man, the arm design looks cool, nice work ;D
 I like it 
  July 3, 2013
I'm pretty much with the other judges here. Like you said, it was wushed, and it shows. And yeah, you should take more care with the proportions. 4 points.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2013
Got to agree with the other judges! Your entry definitely has potential, but it needs a better structure! Your score: 5
 I like it 
  July 3, 2013
A bit roughly armored entry and it does have some problems in proportions, so try to work on those. 5 points.
 I like it 
  July 1, 2013
Have to concur w/Yuri, here: add a few greebling accents that really make the Figure your own, and that added creativity will really pay off. 4 points, and good luck in the Cup!~
 I like it 
  June 30, 2013
A nice entry, very playable. Not terribly original though, and still a bit rough. 5 points. Try work on proportions some more, you'll see definite improvements in all your MOCs.
 
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