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To Save a Galaxy - S1 - Episode 1 - Part 1
This is the first episode of a series I am starting. It it set in the TOR ( The Old Republic ), words under pictures.
About this creation


On the plant Dantooine, a young boy, about the age of 14, was working in his garden. His name, William. He had lost his parents many years ago in a land-speeder accident, and now tends the fields that his family has owned for decades. It was getting on towards evening, and he was about to stop for the day when all of a sudden...



A hooded man appeared on the path. Striding slowly but purposefully over to William's fence gate.



"Good evening, sir!" said William. He didn't receive a response until the man was standing in the gate.



"Good evening, William. My name is Danus." said the hooded man. ( pronounced Day-noos )



William, intrigued by the stranger, started to walk over to him. "If you don't mind me asking, how do you know my name?" William said.



"Oh, I know many things about you, William." said Danus. "Thats not creepy at all." William muttered.



Danus smiled. "I asked your closest neighbor about you. But anyway to the point. I've been watching you for the past few weeks."



William bristled, and took a step back. "Why?"



"To see if you are ready to fulfill your destiny." Danus said, in a low voice.



"Me? You must be mistaken. My destiny is farming, here on the rock of a planet." William said discouragingly.



Danus put his hand on William's shoulder. "No. Your destiny is to become a Jedi."



William was took a step back. This was to much. "That can't be true! I've done nothing but farm my whole life!"



Danus disagreed. "That's where you're wrong. I've seen you, trying to pick things up with your mind. That power is called the Force. It is the mark of a Jedi. Or a Sith." He added darkly.



William was getting frustrated with the conversation. "Me, a Jedi. Impossible!" he said.



Danus took the hint and said, "Think about it. I'll come back tomorrow to hear your decision. These are dark times, William. We need all the Jedi we can get." And with that...



...he left. William watched him go.



As William turned back to finishing his work for the day, he thought about all that had just transpired. "Impossible." he muttered to himself again. But he thought, and he thought hard, all night.

Notes:
This series should keep going for at least 2 seasons. If you have a request to be in it, leave a comment saying so and I will see what I can do. You can be a Sith, Jedi, or a random guy who joins William's group. Please rate and comment, it will keep this series going! Also, the episodes will be getting longer, but this one is the first part of a two-parter, which is why this one is shorter. Expect the next episode soon!

Coming soon! The Jedi Enclave!

EDIT: SIGN-UPS ARE NOW CLOSED!



Comments

 I made it 
  May 6, 2014
Quoting Stephen Boe Here's to 25!
Hah! Thanks!
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  May 6, 2014
Here's to 25!
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  April 4, 2014
Nice story, I can't wait to see the rest of it.
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  September 10, 2013
I'll right up a bio. Expect it sometime this weekend.
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  August 27, 2013
Really nice creation!!
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  August 10, 2013
Looks good!
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  August 7, 2013
Coolness! Can't wait for the next episode! (The one after your most recent)
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  August 7, 2013
I already commented, but this was in promote your creations, so you know why I'm back! Great job anyways, and I'll take you up on that offer to be in the story! I'll be a random guy! ;)
 I like it 
  July 26, 2013
This has me interested! BTW, I'll be a Jedi, if you do those requests. :D
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  July 25, 2013
Pretty good so far, looking forward to more episodes. You can add me in as a sith, if you want!
 I made it 
  July 2, 2013
Quoting claw paradox this sounds like a parody of star wars episode IV! nicely done landscape.
Yea... that might've had something to do with it :P
 I like it 
  June 10, 2013
Great story!
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  May 28, 2013
this sounds like a parody of star wars episode IV! nicely done landscape.
 I made it 
  May 23, 2013
Quoting Rocky Rhodes can I be a person with a gun in williams group who later join the dark side? name- Kad
Sure, that fits right into my plans.
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  May 23, 2013
can I be a person with a gun in williams group who later join the dark side? name- Kad
 I made it 
  May 22, 2013
NOTICE: I currently cannot take any results for Jedi. However for more information please refer to the Official Fan Group/ Updates. Found here: http://mocpages.com/group.php/22588
 I made it 
  May 22, 2013
Quoting A Sargent Very nice! I like it! May I pleas be a Sith lord by the name of Lord Xrendx? My species is unknown, but definitely not human. :) Can't wait for the next episode!
Thanks! I'll work on your guy.! I have the perfect head :)
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  May 22, 2013
Very nice! I like it! May I pleas be a Sith lord by the name of Lord Xrendx? My species is unknown, but definitely not human. :) Can't wait for the next episode!
 I like it 
  May 22, 2013
Neat!
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  May 22, 2013
This looks great!!!!! Could I have a Jedi please? Name Ian Species: Human or Near Human. Thank you!
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  May 22, 2013
Sounds awesome. I'd like to be a man who joins Williams group. I'm know for my incredible strength and skill in fighting. I'm also a sniper. (I'm not a clone, I'm a human.) My name is Freeling.
  May 22, 2013
nice work man can I be a dark jedi please
 I made it 
  May 21, 2013
Quoting Lindel Baskin No problem, Dylan. This is a great start. The techniques used in this build are simple, yet very effective. I look forward to seeing your next To Save a Galaxy episode. =)
Thanks :) By the way, you can join my group "To Save a Galaxy Official Fan Group/ Updates" to stay posted on the series.
  May 21, 2013
No problem, Dylan. This is a great start. The techniques used in this build are simple, yet very effective. I look forward to seeing your next To Save a Galaxy episode. =)
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  May 21, 2013
A good start. I'm glad it was my series that inspired you to make this. Keep it up. --Blast--
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  May 21, 2013
I like this episode and look forward to seeing more!
Dylan Something
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Admiral Varkov
  May 19, 2013
Nice scenery and a good start to the series. Well done!
 I made it 
  May 18, 2013
Quoting C West Cool, could I be a guy who joins the group ? PLEASE?????
Sure, I'll see what I can do.
Quoting Lindel Baskin Nice little build. =) Your story seems pretty cool so far as well. One thing: In the days of the Old Republic, the Sith refereed to any members of the Sith Empire. Dark Side Force-wielders were called Dark Jedi, I believe. Anyway, great start for your story, and nice work on the MOC! =D
Ok, thanks for telling me. I've heard of Dark Jedi, but never new exactly what they were... Thanks again.
 I like it 
  May 18, 2013
Cool, could I be a guy who joins the group ? PLEASE?????
 I like it 
  May 18, 2013
Nice little build. =) Your story seems pretty cool so far as well. One thing: In the days of the Old Republic, the Sith refereed to any members of the Sith Empire. Dark Side Force-wielders were called Dark Jedi, I believe. Anyway, great start for your story, and nice work on the MOC! =D
 
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