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Onua
The way he SHOULD have been done.
About this creation
LAST MINUTE ENTRY OF FAILURENESS

*ehem*

Sorry about that. But yeah, this is my last minute entry for the BCBS challenge this month. I know I can't win this round, but DANG I love this guy =3

Link to the BCBS.

So, yeah, an explanation. Terilis, great choice for this month. LOVED it. But, I took this more as a, "Build the Toa how you think they should have been built." sort of thing, and this was the result. I always loved the Mata versions of the Toa above all the others, because they were just BA. The Nuva came in close second though, so I decided to mix the two for this one. Despite my sort of eliminating a color from the original color scheme, and not making it at all like the original sets, I think that it fits this category. Enough of my yapping though. Let's go look at some pictures :3





I just love this guy. I don't even know why, because it really isn't all that good XD Still though. I captured the basic look I wanted to. :)



'Nother epic standing picture.



Back. And yeah, Chro, you're right, those single pistons work WONDERS. =3 I will be using again, I assure you :P



Back close up.



Front close up.



Front of leg. Now, these are stupidly simple, but I really like them for some reason... Don't know why.



Back of leg. Now to some poses. :3


















Without the chainsaws.






Not sure what he's doing there... Jogging maybe?






Come at me bro.



One final shot.



Creator's Comments: ...... LOVE this guy. Don't even know why. He isn't very complex. Nor very good. I just love him. I really hate that I have to take him apart soon DX
But, anyway.
YES. I was lazy. I speed built this last night after taking apart Herus and while helping a friend write a research report. Only took like an hour to build him, him being so simple and the designs all having been used before, but still. I think it looks good. You don't; get over it :P XD
I don't think this'll get me the win this month, but I am happy to have built it nonetheless. I really don't have much to say this time around, so just tell me what y'all think.


Tchuess.



Comments

 I like it 
  January 23, 2014
those eyes... Is onua possessed?
 I like it 
  January 1, 2014
I really like this guy! Simple yet so complex. I love your use of Axons head to bulk up the shoulders. Well done!
 I like it 
  July 3, 2013
Dude... If only he had been sold that way. :D
 I like it 
  June 22, 2013
Fantastic revamp, I love the torso andupper arms! :D
 I like it 
  May 16, 2013
AWESOOOOOME! Onua is my favorite toa, and this MOC really does him justice.
 I like it 
  May 5, 2013
Epic!
 I like it 
  May 2, 2013
Onua all the way! Hands down my favorite Toa lol I have and like every version and I always imagined that as the Toa Mistika, his chainsaws would be able to flip out of his wrist a la Wolverine lol
 I made it 
  April 26, 2013
Quoting Petersheikah [ITA] I love it! Really cool the arms with chainsaws, and the shoulders too. :D
Thank you, glad you like it :)
 I like it 
  April 26, 2013
I love it! Really cool the arms with chainsaws, and the shoulders too. :D
 I made it 
  April 24, 2013
Quoting Coconut Fanatic *Drives a nail through my skull* Duuuuuhhhh... *Someone takes it out* I never commented!?!... I feel dumb. The Rodes on the shoulders are awesome, and the torso construction is beautiful. It flows very well. The lower legs look like they could worked on some, as you said, they are simple. On the back, those two Metru chest armor pieces seem out of place up there. Your forearms fit the moc really well, and the chainsaw attachments do as well. You should find some sort of claw attachments. He's a great Moc, and I would love to see him stay around a while.
Lol, thanks Terilis. I was hoping he could stick around for a little while, but alas, he has already been dismantled. I also thought about doing claw attachments, but just settle with the chainsaw ones instead.
 I made it 
  April 24, 2013
Quoting Kali Church This is a very nice revamp of an old character. Keep it up!
Thank ya much! :)
 I like it 
  April 24, 2013
This is a very nice revamp of an old character. Keep it up!
 I made it 
  April 23, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda He's still on the main page, even over one of Chro's creation on the ranking! Dear, I would be crying of happiness. I'm so proud of you! You have officially reached the pro level! *sob* *sob*
I wouldn't say pro level, but I can't tell you how happy I am that he was up there at all, let alone this long :'D
 I made it 
  April 23, 2013
Quoting joshua jacobson ok let me know if your ready to join i'll be waiting!
I will, thank you again. :) Oh, and for future reference, I would greatly appreciate it if you didn't hit the "like" thing more than once. I like to know exactly how many likes my work has earned :)
  April 23, 2013
He's still on the main page, even over one of Chro's creation on the ranking! Dear, I would be crying of happiness. I'm so proud of you! You have officially reached the pro level! *sob* *sob*
 I like it 
  April 23, 2013
ok let me know if your ready to join i'll be waiting!
 I made it 
  April 23, 2013
Quoting joshua jacobson ok i invited you to the unity infinity circle group!
Well, I took a look, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate the thought, but I think I will decline. I need to get a little organized yet as I am in several groups I don't participate in. I once again thank you for the thought though :)
 I like it 
  April 23, 2013
ok i invited you to the unity infinity circle group!
 I like it 
  April 22, 2013
*Drives a nail through my skull* Duuuuuhhhh... *Someone takes it out* I never commented!?!... I feel dumb. The Rodes on the shoulders are awesome, and the torso construction is beautiful. It flows very well. The lower legs look like they could worked on some, as you said, they are simple. On the back, those two Metru chest armor pieces seem out of place up there. Your forearms fit the moc really well, and the chainsaw attachments do as well. You should find some sort of claw attachments. He's a great Moc, and I would love to see him stay around a while.
 I made it 
  April 22, 2013
Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy I think he looks EPIC. Anything that I can't figure out by looking at is well made, in my opinion :D
Thanks Drax :D
 I like it 
  April 21, 2013
I think he looks EPIC. Anything that I can't figure out by looking at is well made, in my opinion :D
 I made it 
  April 21, 2013
Quoting Toa Nexal The best Onua revamp I´ve seen on the pages. And believe me, there are a lot.
Why thank you good sir :)
 I like it 
  April 21, 2013
The best Onua revamp I´ve seen on the pages. And believe me, there are a lot.
 I made it 
  April 20, 2013
Quoting Nathan Ingerson That's some sweet MOCage there my friend
Thanks Nate. :D Haven't seen you around in a while, where ya been?
 I like it 
  April 20, 2013
That's some sweet MOCage there my friend
 I made it 
  April 20, 2013
Quoting A Sargent Hey again, I'm back. Sorry to bother you, but the uploader's back up, if you want to try the poster again. Sorry again to bother you. Anyway, fantasti job again!
It's no bother at all. I was just going to try that actually XD thank you again. For future reference though, please only hit the like button once. I'd appreciate it :)
 I like it 
  April 20, 2013
Hey again, I'm back. Sorry to bother you, but the uploader's back up, if you want to try the poster again. Sorry again to bother you. Anyway, fantasti job again!
 I made it 
  April 19, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda Hey hey hey hey! 52 likes! Finally you get a well-deserved collection of smiles xD Congratulations, dear!
Yeah, kinda happy about that XD Though I'm sure it was just because of the time it spent on the front page. Oh well.
  April 19, 2013
Hey hey hey hey! 52 likes! Finally you get a well-deserved collection of smiles xD Congratulations, dear!
 I made it 
  April 18, 2013
Quoting legendary green fya Best revamp I've seen in a while.
Thanks Taylor :)
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  April 18, 2013
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Excellent moc, but it doesn't feel very much like Onua, especially with those lifeless eyes. A friend of mine said it looks more like an evil robot version of Onua, which is the vibe I'm getting myself.
Thanks Cal :) I can definitely see your point there, it does look a bit like an evil robotic version. Huh. Well, I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing in this case XD
 I made it 
  April 18, 2013
Quoting Sean the Kraken Epic. onua has always been my favorite, and this is exactly how he should have been done.
Thank ya much! :)
 I made it 
  April 18, 2013
Quoting A Sargent Hmm, don't know what's up... maybe the uploader is down, since I myself and somebody else couldn't work it...so, maybe if it's fixed soon you can check it out!
Yeah, probably. Oh well. When it's up and working I'll try again :)
 I made it 
  April 18, 2013
Quoting joshua jacobson very well done! can you join (the unity infinity circle group)please ?
Well, I can't guarantee Ill join it, but if you send me an invite I'll certainly take a look :) Thank you by the by.
 I like it 
  April 17, 2013
Best revamp I've seen in a while.
 I like it 
  April 17, 2013
Excellent moc, but it doesn't feel very much like Onua, especially with those lifeless eyes. A friend of mine said it looks more like an evil robot version of Onua, which is the vibe I'm getting myself.
 I like it 
  April 16, 2013
Epic. onua has always been my favorite, and this is exactly how he should have been done.
 I like it 
  April 16, 2013
Quoting Gale Winthrope
Hmm, don't know what's up... maybe the uploader is down, since I myself and somebody else couldn't work it...so, maybe if it's fixed soon you can check it out!
 I like it 
  April 16, 2013
very well done! can you join (the unity infinity circle group)please ?
 I made it 
  April 16, 2013
Quoting Open Flame It turned out really well-a greeblyish black body and legs covered by reflective silver armor.
Thank you, that's exactly the look I was going for :D
 I like it 
  April 16, 2013
It turned out really well-a greeblyish black body and legs covered by reflective silver armor.
 I made it 
  April 16, 2013
Quoting Yuri Fassio Masterful revamp! I love the body frame, and the shoulder area. Cool weapons too. Best bionicle MOC I saw in weeks!
Thank you! Means a lot Yuri :)
 I made it 
  April 16, 2013
Quoting Jacob Ultzhoffer 5/5 ... That's all.
Thank you :)
 I like it 
  April 16, 2013
Masterful revamp! I love the body frame, and the shoulder area. Cool weapons too. Best bionicle MOC I saw in weeks!
Gale Winthrope
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Thomas Floyd
  April 15, 2013
I think he's great sort of like some real quite dude who might seem wimpy but can beat all of us up XD
 I made it 
  April 15, 2013
Quoting A Sargent <a href="/image_zoom.php?id=/user_images/98774/1366060491m"><img src="http://images.mocpages.com/user_images/98774/1366060491m_SPLASH.jpg"; border="0" width="" height="" alt=""></a> That isn't the link to the creation, but the link to the image...you can post it on your homepage if you want to see it.
Hmmm, I tried posting it on my homepage and in a MOCpage by itself, but still couldn't see it...
 I made it 
  April 15, 2013
Quoting carrubba antonio amazing .. very nice mechanical design ,, very cool pose---bravo
Thank you :D
  April 15, 2013
<a href="/image_zoom.php?id=/user_images/98774/1366060491m"><img src="http://images.mocpages.com/user_images/98774/1366060491m_SPLASH.jpg"; border="0" width="" height="" alt=""></a> That isn't the link to the creation, but the link to the image...you can post it on your homepage if you want to see it.
 I like it 
  April 15, 2013
amazing .. very nice mechanical design ,, very cool pose---bravo
 I made it 
  April 15, 2013
Quoting Zove The Mercenary Wow. Little bit more of an OWNua if you ask me. Frankly, if lego wanted to save itself and bring back bionicle, the could just go on mocpages and steal some ideas. I'm sure we would all like it if lego started using our creations, even if they dont give us credit.
Agreed! Thanks man :)
 I like it 
  April 15, 2013
Wow. Little bit more of an OWNua if you ask me. Frankly, if lego wanted to save itself and bring back bionicle, the could just go on mocpages and steal some ideas. I'm sure we would all like it if lego started using our creations, even if they dont give us credit.
 I made it 
  April 15, 2013
Quoting Thomas Floyd I think he's great sort of like some real quite dude who might seem wimpy but can beat all of us up XD
*cough* Doesn't describe me at all *cough* >.> Thanks :)
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  April 15, 2013
Quoting Darren .Y Wow simply blown away by this (as with all your mocs). The design is simply terrific regardless of complexity. I don't really think it looks all that simple but has a complex sleek aesthetic. The top heavy bulk and silver pieces work so well here and the legs look fabulous. I always love your mocs and this is no exception. Fantastic entry and keep up the great work.
Wow. Thank you :D
 I like it 
  April 15, 2013
Wow simply blown away by this (as with all your mocs). The design is simply terrific regardless of complexity. I don't really think it looks all that simple but has a complex sleek aesthetic. The top heavy bulk and silver pieces work so well here and the legs look fabulous. I always love your mocs and this is no exception. Fantastic entry and keep up the great work.
 I made it 
  April 14, 2013
Quoting Ian Spacek Haha, I have the Unua bionacle this is based on. Very well done, he's looking pretty epic!
Wow, thanks Ian. Appreciate it :)
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  April 14, 2013
Quoting Starscream Soundwave Very cool, I like it very much.
Thank you :)
 I like it 
  April 14, 2013
Haha, I have the Unua bionacle this is based on. Very well done, he's looking pretty epic!
 I like it 
  April 14, 2013
Very cool, I like it very much.
 I made it 
  April 14, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda I didn't entry because I haven't time. It's a shame, I had a beautiful idea for a Tarix's entry... *sigh* Well, where was I? Oh yeah, this entry. If Herus had the 'Chro style', now I can see on this Onua revamp the 'Fluffy style'. The lower legs have a very good appearence, the only thing that it's a shame it's that you don't have those blue connectors in black, but that's a matter of available pieces, not your fault. I really like his design, bulky and without holes or tons of parts. The torso is greatly developed, I specially love the way you used all those Metru chests...And the piston. I think I'll try to give it a chance... However, the part that inmediatelly call my eyes were the upper arms. The use of that Metru chest with a Rode is awesome! You shouldn't have so low confidence, dear. This would have got my 5-pt. vote. Amazing job, dear Gale, and good luck!
I can definitely agree that this looks like Fluffy's work; something I didn't really intend for, but am not arguing with XD And ummm.... I do actually, have those in black. Quite a few of them. I was just too lazy to use find and use them *insert slapstick skit of banging head against desk multiple times* Thank you for the kind words. Appreciate it :)
 I like it 
  April 14, 2013
I didn't entry because I haven't time. It's a shame, I had a beautiful idea for a Tarix's entry... *sigh* Well, where was I? Oh yeah, this entry. If Herus had the 'Chro style', now I can see on this Onua revamp the 'Fluffy style'. The lower legs have a very good appearence, the only thing that it's a shame it's that you don't have those blue connectors in black, but that's a matter of available pieces, not your fault. I really like his design, bulky and without holes or tons of parts. The torso is greatly developed, I specially love the way you used all those Metru chests...And the piston. I think I'll try to give it a chance... However, the part that inmediatelly call my eyes were the upper arms. The use of that Metru chest with a Rode is awesome! You shouldn't have so low confidence, dear. This would have got my 5-pt. vote. Amazing job, dear Gale, and good luck!
Gale Winthrope
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Takanuva 77
  April 13, 2013
This is the best onua I've ever seen. The torso is perfect, so are the arms, and legs, it is just awesome:) instructions?
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  April 13, 2013
5/5 ... That's all.
 I made it 
  April 13, 2013
Quoting Chronos Omega Excellent work, Gale. You've got a good shot at the win this month.
Thanks Chro. :) I doubt that though, with how few people have entered and your entry especially.
 I like it 
  April 13, 2013
Excellent work, Gale. You've got a good shot at the win this month.
 I made it 
  April 13, 2013
Quoting The Fezziman 0_o this is.... EPIC 8D! Onua was my first Bionicle, and this is, in my opinion, an excellent way of portraying him.
Thank you! :)
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  April 13, 2013
0_o this is.... EPIC 8D! Onua was my first Bionicle, and this is, in my opinion, an excellent way of portraying him.
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting A Sargent Awesome job, much better than the real LEGO version. I made a poster for him, so if you want one, I'll post it...
You did? Really? Wow, thank you. Sure, I'd love to see it. Give me a link if you post it :)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Ventum The Half Demon AWESOME MOC!!!!!
Thank you. :)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Topsy Creatori (StoveTopCreator!) With a physique like that he could be some actress' bodyguard! :)
Haha, you're so right Topsy. Thanks :)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting A. Jones Cool
Thanks Jonesy :)
 I like it 
  April 13, 2013
Awesome job, much better than the real LEGO version. I made a poster for him, so if you want one, I'll post it...
  April 13, 2013
AWESOME MOC!!!!!
 I like it 
  April 13, 2013
With a physique like that he could be some actress' bodyguard! :)
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  April 13, 2013
Cool
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Isaac O LUV. IT.
Thank ya much :)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting FatBear ... Reminds me a lot of Gavram, I dont know why lol. Great build still! ( I just gotta use that back piston someday!)
Understandable considering the twin chainsaws lol. Thanks though, greatly appreciate it :)
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  April 13, 2013
LUV. IT.
 I like it 
  April 13, 2013
Reminds me a lot of Gavram, I dont know why lol. Great build still! ( I just gotta use that back piston someday!)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Fenrek (Fluffy) Brilliant :D I love this version of Onua. He has a slight hunch and overal upper body sructure that's expected and the armouring is wonderful. Nice to see you still included his chainsaws too. Great work ;)
Wow, thanks Fluffy :) really appreciate it :)
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  April 13, 2013
Brilliant :D I love this version of Onua. He has a slight hunch and overal upper body sructure that's expected and the armouring is wonderful. Nice to see you still included his chainsaws too. Great work ;)
 I made it 
  April 13, 2013
Quoting Kraata Face Very well done my good man!
Thanks Straak :)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Snaggletooth B. Motörhead BLOODY...! I built Onua too... (will post him in a few hours)
Lol! Oops XD sorry, I didn't think anyone else would do him. Thanks though :)
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  April 13, 2013
Very well done my good man!
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  April 13, 2013
BLOODY...! I built Onua too... (will post him in a few hours)
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Acid Chameleon DWN670-474 i think you should have made him have the original function but otherwise a good moc/revamp
Lol, no idea how the heck I'd do that. But thank you.
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting David Alexander Smith Piercing eyes, hunched back and boxer stance. Cool.
Thanks David :)
  April 13, 2013
i think you should have made him have the original function but otherwise a good moc/revamp
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  April 13, 2013
Piercing eyes, hunched back and boxer stance. Cool.
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Leximatic LJ2 Q4R Complexity isn't everything, nor all new connections or techniques in every MOC is. There are very complex MOCs here, that just hurt your eyes. The thing is: This IS Onua like he should have been, no doubt. And that's why he is so loveable. Using approved techniques for the best result, there's nothing wrong about that. Onua, Gale-Style: it works.
Lol, I have a style? Huh. Ok then. Thank ya much :)
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  April 13, 2013
Complexity isn't everything, nor all new connections or techniques in every MOC is. There are very complex MOCs here, that just hurt your eyes. The thing is: This IS Onua like he should have been, no doubt. And that's why he is so loveable. Using approved techniques for the best result, there's nothing wrong about that. Onua, Gale-Style: it works.
 I made it 
  April 13, 2013
Quoting Potu, the half Toa Great one! Chainsaw weapon is becoming popular! :D I used too that piston technique on the back of my two Fe-mocs "a long time ago".
Thank you :) I remember you did, but I mainly stole it from Chro XD
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Takanuva 77 This is the best onua I've ever seen. The torso is perfect, so are the arms, and legs, it is just awesome:) instructions?
Thank you! Appreciate that :) I doubt I'll do instructions considering that he'll be taken apart by the Wednesday and I'll have no time until then, but besides the torso it shouldn't be too hard to figure out. :)
 I like it 
  April 13, 2013
Great one! Chainsaw weapon is becoming popular! :D I used too that piston technique on the back of my two Fe-mocs "a long time ago".
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  April 13, 2013
Quoting Des Demon I love it! :D I always hated the Nuva Masks, so i?m happy to see the original Pakari here. ^^
Thanks Des :) Yeah, I never really liked the Nuva masks either, though I could never deny the epicness of the weapons and armor.
  April 13, 2013
I love it! :D I always hated the Nuva Masks, so i?m happy to see the original Pakari here. ^^
 
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