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Meet The Soarer.
About this creation


Hi hi! I don't have a break, really, this page was started almost a week ago... Well, here you have my very last creation, 'The Soarer'!!



Obviously inspired by the famous Japanese mechas. I was listening to the song 'HEATS' when I get this idea.



I personally love the look it has, don't you?



But hey, I have to stop here. There more special things on this guy than the ones you think, and before knowing them, I'm afraid you'll have to...










...READ!! (Seriously, please read it before keep watching, it only will take a moment)




ĒIn the great palace of the Lord, the tension could be even touched. The Green Ruler was walking around his desk, nervous, waiting about the news. Not even an hour ago, one of his fellows informed him about a strange message from the other pole of the planet, a mysterious message damaged due to interferences. He knew that something was going wrong, and sent some of his fastest soldiers. Until their return, he couldn't do much than wait.

However he didn't have to do it for a long time.

- My Lord!

One of his soldiers entered the room. It wasn't one of the group it sent, but it seemed to be very nervous.

- What happens? - Asked the Lord. - Answer me!

- We... We have received a message from the soldiers.

- Have they arrived the place already? - The Lord was surprised. They were fast, yes, but that much?

- No, they were half the way. - The soldier informed. - They met the problem like 5 minutes ago.

- Explain yourself, soldier.

- My Lord... - The soldier needed time to say this. - ... It has awakened, my Lord. The Soarer is coming here.

The Green Lord stood, shocked. It was impossible... The Soarer... So, it wasn't a legend from the Ancient Wars? That legendary weapon, known for turning the sky to ashes... But it wasn't the time to doubt the truth.

- Quick! Prepare the Army around the castle! - The Lord shouted. - We must protect our people!

- Yes Sir!

...

The soldiers stood in line. Not even a single breath could be detected, they were standing without a move. Some of them were in the upper part of high towers, using telescopic devices to search in the sky. Although fiercely disciplined, the fear on their eyes couldnít be hidden. Something logic, since they were waiting for a legend to come true.

- ITíS HERE!!! - The scream of one of the lookout soldiers. - ITíS COMING FROM THE SOUTH!!

Every warrior looked to the point on the sky that the lookout soldier was pointing. Still far, a small dot was increasing its size a great speed. The Soarer was arriving.

- EVERYONE LOCK YOUR WEAPONS!! - Shouted the Generals. - FIRE!!!

The soldiers didnít wait even for the order. A massive amount of missiles, lasers and bullets flew to the sky like an inverted rain. No matter how, no being couldnít escape that storm. But The Soarer, obviously, wasnít a regular being. It dodged every single of the bullet and lasers with amazing backflips and spins, without decreasing its speed.

In one of those incredible moves, it did a backflip and, with a perfect precision, it pushed a missile from the front, making it to turn towards the castle. The Soarer, with great speed, mounted on the missile and take the wings from its back, wielding them like swords. He sliced every single obstacle in its way: bullets, towers, other missiles, even aerial-designed soldiers.

So no one could stop The Soarer to impact on the castle. The soldiers started to scream and shout after the explosion of the missile on the walls of the Lordís home. High-ranked warriors tried to impose the order again, and then ordered to enter immediately the castle, searching for all the people in it and putting them save.

Meanwhile, from the a enormous amount of smoke, the figure of The Soarer came into the castle. Two frightened maids were curled against the wall, trying to be safe from that mysterious being. The Soarer saw them, and slowly, walked towards both women. However, it couldnít reach them.

A massive, giant fist came from nowhere, breaking the wall and impacting on The Soarerís face, sending it to the inside gardens piercing the walls on its way and then crashing into the central statue of the Lord.

The Soarer raised again, and looked to the being who attacked it, who had arrived the gardens with a massive axe.

- I donít care if the legends about your powers are true. - Said the Green Lord. - But I wonít let you to destroy my home!

The Soarer stood, looking to its rival without a move. Then, it nooded, and took its swords preparing itself for fight. The next hour would be remembered for all the people who passed by, being rescued by soldiers or being the soldiers themselves. One of the most epic battles on all the history, with two of the most incredible warriors known on their world. Even after such an intense fight, no winner was decided by that time. Maybe that was the reason that the Soarer decided to speak.

- Why are you fighting? - Said, with no hesitation or curiosity on its voice. It seems he was asking for a specific answer.

- Iím fighting - Started the Green Lord to answer. - Because itís my duty, and decision. As the Lord of this planet, Iíll protect my people, no matter how.

The Soarer stood again without a move. And then, for the Lordís surprise, it opened its hands and dropped its swords. Paralyzed by the surprise, the Lord didnít react when the Soarer walked towards him. He only reacted when the Soarer opened its heart, revealing its true nature.

- YouÖ Donít tell me you actually areÖ!

- From this very moment - Said the Soarer, kneeling to the Green Lord -, Iím your very loyal servantÖ Lord Gathundrel.Ē








If you read it, and are one of my dear fans, you'll probably be a fan of Terilis too, so you'll be able to understand what means that Gathundrel is in the story!



Push the blades at the back down to discover...



... one of the Sidron's legends! =D




ID: Teareil Magnus
Color Print: Silver/Yellow
Model and Make: MG-001
Year: 645
Allignment: Neutral Good






Armor levels at 576.5 Biolts, designed for absorbing every kind of impact on it. Personality Assessment: Brave, determinated, born to fight.



Aerodynamic bladed feet, with rockets for aerial stability.



Strong, armored legs for perfect movility.



Torso with poseable beaver. Optic-sensor adapted for quick movements.



False head, with great poseability. It has sensors that send data to Teareil when the beaver is down.



Powerful arms developed for impact combat. Shoulders equipped with missile launchers.



Armored back with jetpack equiped. The wings can be detached for sword use.



Regular Mode: Sidron.



1st Alternate Mode: Mech Warrior.



2nd Alternate Mode: Inverted Sidron (Standard Alternate Mode)



3rd Alternate Mode: Aeroship.



A side view of the Aeroship Mode.



Well, what do you think? =3



Let's have a bit of action for a better opinion!



Oh, very well, I said 'action' and he sits. You're so kind Teareil ¨¨



With his swords!



Love this pic so much <3



Ninja Carrot: STOP RIGHT THERE, MECHANIC EVIL-DOER!
Teareil Magnus: ???
L.A: There we go...



Teareil Magnus: Little plant warrior, I'm afraid you're mistaking me with other p...
Ninja Carrot: URUSAI!!! I finally found you, evil machine vehicle demon! Now I'll take revenge for the death of my master!



Teareil Magnus: Master...?
Ninja Carrot: Did you heard that, master!? I'll be finally able to bring peace to your tortured soul!! Your eternal rest is safe in my hands!! MASTEEEEEEEEEEERRRR!!



???: I heard it, I heard it! Stop screaming, I'm right here!
Ninja Carrot: Are?



Ninja Carrot: MASTER!?
Teareil Magnus: He's your master? Well, you can actually say that is a great one...
Ninja Carrot: I thought you were dead, great Broccoli Sage!
Broccoli Sage: Dead? Of course not! Why did you think that?



Ninja Carrot: Citiziens said that you were kidnapped by an evil machine!
Broccoli Sage: It was a bus you idiot! I took the wrong one to come here, that's why I'm so late.
Ninja Carrot: Ohm.



Broccoli Sage: For the sake of... C'mon, we have things to do on Fridgeland... Let's go...



Ninja Carrot: Well, it seems it was all a misunderstanding, hehe! Sorry for interrumpt your photo session! See ya!



Teareil Magnus: ...



Teareil Magnus: Can I ask what has just happened?
L.A: You better not. Let's keep with the review!



Mecha mode again!



Teareil's greatest weapons are his speed and agility in air, but swords work well too.



Like the giant blasters. Those can be pretty useful too.



Those yellow cones are supposed to be missiles, by the way.



You can connect the blasters in this way too, keeping the shoulders'side armor and quitting the missiles.



A last action picture.



A comparative with an Inika build.

Toa Lianyu: I miss the simpler MOCs from your past, L.A....
Teareil Magnus: What.



With Oreum, because they share similar head design (in fact, I was trying to build an overpowered version of Oreum when I designed Teareil's head).



Oh, by the way, Oreum got some upgrades too!



You can see all the updates on this image: changed those horrible blue pins on the legs for black ones (hooray for excess parts on the sets!) and the elbows for ones with better movility; added a chain on the chest and some more gold in the wrists and the upper arms.



Faquarl Noudes: Here again... *sigh* H-Hi...
Teareil Magnus: Oh, a Sidron compatriot! Hello boy!



Another update are these black parts on Faquarl. They give him a better stability to the arms and shoulders, but they complicate the transformation, too...



Sidron brofist!!



Oh, and here you have a picture with my last BIONICLE purchases. Aren't they beautiful? <3



And that's all, folks! Say goodbye!








New MOC from me! If you let me say it, itís also one of my best: anodda Sidron for my pal! I built the first version of this guy two weeks ago and it was very different from this one, though he used a lot of the designs you can see here, like the arms or the torso (although the Nynrah worked as a helmet). However, after seen Terilis' Gathundrel's revamp, I though: "Man, my new Sidron sucks". So, I revamped it, and turned it into this marvelous mecha thing! However I'm afraid that I don't take a picture of his older version, sorry =/

Well, hope you like it! Specially you, Coconut Fanatic! Happy ďTerilis' birthdayĒ thingy, and sorry for the failed Sidron round! )=

With love, L.A.






P.S: Terilis, if you want to change something of the story, please tell me!



Comments

 I made it 
  May 25, 2013
Quoting Potu, the half Toa I'd like to ask, how did you reduce the height of the video that you added to this page? If I want, It writes alawys that the size of the video is too little.
I only change the heigth of the code. It's usually at 315, I change the number to 65, but depends on the video.
  May 25, 2013
I'd like to ask, how did you reduce the height of the video that you added to this page? If I want, It writes alawys that the size of the video is too little.
 I like it 
  April 5, 2013
Holy... Just wow. This is definitely one of your better MOCs, ever. I love, love, love that torso and the false head. The greebling on this almost hurts and those legs look really good. Really nice work here L.A. :)
 I like it 
  March 14, 2013
One of your best MOCs yet. No doubt about it. I especially like the way the eye appears, with a little effort, you could make a mecha a Minifig could pilot XD. Btw, would you be so kind as to give me some C&C on my self-MOC? It's my first time doing an all-custom job, and he has an upgrade coming soon, so I need as many ideas as I can get.
 I made it 
  March 13, 2013
Quoting Renegade The Severe By the way, Miranda, I`m going to build a female MOC. Do you mind my borrowing some ideas from your gallery? It will be dedicated to you :)
Anyone of my designs and ideas can be used without permission, but please, be a good guy and give credits! =3 So, not need a dedication, but a recognision! xD
  March 13, 2013
By the way, Miranda, I`m going to build a female MOC. Do you mind my borrowing some ideas from your gallery? It will be dedicated to you :)
 I made it 
  March 12, 2013
Quoting Coconut Fanatic You should add this guy to more groups, so more people can bask in his glory! :D
You want a Sidron as one of my most rated creations, right? xD Well, since it's already one, I think I'll do it. =P
Quoting Renegade The Severe I`m shocked, honey. This model is fascinating! I know that it`s really hard to create awesome transforming MOC and i see your exhausting work`s result. Thumbs up, my friend.
Honey? Is that sarcasm for 'my dear'? >=( Haha, now seriously, thanks a lot! I love this MOC a lot and now it seems he has reached the 3rd position on my most voted ones! However, Renegade, I don't want to be vain, but Teareil wasn't exhausting... It was harder to find the right parts than design him! xD
  March 10, 2013
You should add this guy to more groups, so more people can bask in his glory! :D
 I like it 
  March 3, 2013
I`m shocked, honey. This model is fascinating! I know that it`s really hard to create awesome transforming MOC and i see your exhausting work`s result. Thumbs up, my friend.
 I made it 
  March 3, 2013
Wow wow! 24 likes, and 16 in less than three hours! I knew you would like it, but this much? I'm surprised! The best thing is that I improvised a lot since I didn't have enough parts for nothing, that's why he's mainly System. Thanks a lot everyone, seriously!! ^^
Quoting RICtendo (Hungry# :0 Amazing. Reminds me of the gundam Arios/Kyrios. I believe you know what I mean, no? Anyway, good job on incorporating the dynamic posability and the transformation capability.
I have never seen anything of the Gundam series #actually, I only have watched 2 mecha series, Dennou Boukenki Webdiver and Overman King Gainer; and I never finished them! xD#, but I know that model. In fact I wanted something in that way, but I must admit I didn't get inspiration from the Arios. Anyways, thanks a lot!! ^^
Quoting Coconut Fanatic And it's nice to see Faquarl is still around.
Faquarl is awesome and it uses a lot of HF parts, which I'm starting to hate with all my soul because I have too much of them. So he'll be around for a looooong time #probably like most of my MOCs, forever#. But I might change the leg design, is starting to be a bit floppy and the body is too heavy.
Quoting Coconut Fanatic OoO... L.A.... you keep blowing My mind... daaannng this is epic. Four different modes#three alt. and one normal#, a cool fake head, a seamless blend of system and BIONICLE/HF/Technic, and he's a Sidron. You, have sincerely made my day. As for that story, loved it, don't change a thing #unless you want to go over grammar or something). I think it may be time to make a Sidron group...
Glad you like it! I was worried because you may be a bit disturbed about that story and I wanted to surprise you... =/ I'm still wondering why you didn't make the page yet. C'MON DEAR!! FOR CORIUS!!
 I made it 
  March 3, 2013
Quoting Chronos Omega Love it. (By the way, your link to the Gathundrel revamp actually just links to this page.)
Broken link repared! Thanks for telling me! =)
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire DAAAAANG! Looking at these mocs makes me wonder: HOW THE HECK DID I BEAT YOU IN THE BIO CUP?! :O
Buying the judges, you know it e__e Haha, you know it was because your entry has a cleaner design and fit the theme better than mine! But next time... be afraid! =P
Quoting Ignika and Leewan from Bionifigs Awesome ! It seems different from your other creations, though, it's not the same style... I especially like the Midak Feetblasters, the head, and the hands (very clever idea). The color scheme is very good, and the combination of HF-Bionicle-System (and, of course, Technic) is very nice. ° Bravo !
Thanks a lot, my dear! It may look different because it doesn't have any special part usage, or because is based on a mecha and it's not original from me. However, I'm glad you like it anyways ^^ Oh, and a small detail... Nynrah Feetblasters! NYNRAAAAAH!! “o”
Quoting Topsy Creatori (StoveTopCreator!) I can certainly see that your inspiration came from the famous Japanese mechas, and I can appreciate that and hence the building that went into this design! But I do so love your Etherians the best, and Oreum too! :)
Thanks a lot, my sweet Topsy! Did you know that the last Etherian I built was more than half a month ago!? I NEED TO BUILD MORE, BUT I DON'T HAVE EYES FOR THEM!! ToT
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
:0 Amazing. Reminds me of the gundam Arios/Kyrios. I believe you know what I mean, no? Anyway, good job on incorporating the dynamic posability and the transformation capability.
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Awesome!
  March 2, 2013
And it's nice to see Faquarl is still around.
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
OoO... L.A.... you keep blowing My mind... daaannng this is epic. Four different modes(three alt. and one normal), a cool fake head, a seamless blend of system and BIONICLE/HF/Technic, and he's a Sidron. You, have sincerely made my day. As for that story, loved it, don't change a thing (unless you want to go over grammar or something). I think it may be time to make a Sidron group...
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Love it. (By the way, your link to the Gathundrel revamp actually just links to this page.)
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
This is awesome!
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
I agree, your best yet! :). Cool story too.
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Wow... wow... just... wow...
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Your best yet. No doubt about it. d-(^-^)-b
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
DAAAAANG! Looking at these mocs makes me wonder: HOW THE HECK DID I BEAT YOU IN THE BIO CUP?! :O
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Awesome ! It seems different from your other creations, though, it's not the same style... I especially like the Midak Feetblasters, the head, and the hands (very clever idea). The color scheme is very good, and the combination of HF-Bionicle-System (and, of course, Technic) is very nice. ° Bravo !
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
I can certainly see that your inspiration came from the famous Japanese mechas, and I can appreciate that and hence the building that went into this design! But I do so love your Etherians the best, and Oreum too! :)
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
=O
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
It's... Beautiful... I'm awed by everything, absolutely everything about this moc. Definitely my favourite mocs from you!
 I like it 
  March 2, 2013
Awesome creation! Great design and nice build. I specially like the head and the feet.
 
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