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Forgotten (Part 5 of 5)
Trokan finishes his five part epic!
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29th of February:

Today, I had to call off a strike by workers in a factory because they were not happy with their salaries. I spent the afternoon adjusting prophecies. A particularly dark prophecy had appeared out of nowhere, but I shall not mention that just yet. Let me finish my story:

Benu had been restored to his original Toa from. He looked over to Dorru, who was also different. He had also been transformed into a Toa. Benu later told me that it was quite a magnificent sight. They looked around. The Mata Droid Commander had been reduced to dust.
“Where’s Raznor?” Dorru asked. As if in answer, they heard a rusty cough. They looked down. At their feet, Raznor was crawling on his belly. He was also different; he was shrivelled up and shrunken. He looked weak and pathetic, according to Benu.
“The explosion must have aged us all,” Dorru explained, “Turning us two Matoran into Toa, turning Toa Raznor into a Turaga, and turning the Mata Droid to dust!” At that moment, Raznor interrupted.
“Well done, you have humiliated me, and foiled my plans to rule,” he began, fury twinkling in his now ancient eyes, “But you have not saved your pitiful lives! The portal is still open!” At that moment, Benu and Dorru heard footsteps. They turned to see a red and black figure standing next to the portal. Benu knew exactly who it was; Edoth, of the Destroyer’s Three!



“Instead of releasing all four of us, only I was released,” Edoth stated coldly, “You two must have sabotaged the plan! You must now pay for that!”
Edoth pointed his sword, and fire shot out from the end.
I saw Benu and Dorru fly out from the command room, and Edoth follow them. I did not know what happened in the command room, so I was very confused. However, after watching Edoth engage battle with Benu and Dorru, I formulated a plan. If the Spear was a black hole, then in theory it was possible for Edoth, the Drones and the Vahki to be sucked back into the Black Hole. So I went back into the Command room to grab the spear. I did not notice Raznor, as a Turaga, sneaking around behind me.



Raznor let out a cry, and charged at me. I turned to see Raznor leaping at me, and jumped out of the way a spit second before collision. I watched Raznor land, I watched skid across the floor and I watched his hand land in the blue light of the Black Hole. He screamed as the rest of his body was sucked into the black hole. His death did not sadden me, but the sound of his scream was embedded into my mind even to this day.
I grabbed the Black Hole Staff, and returned to the battle at the Mining site. I ran up to Edoth, and as he turned, I pressed the staff to his chest. In an instant, Edoth disappeared inside the Black Hole staff. I proceeded to do the same to the Mata Drones and the Vahki, until there was not a foe left on the battle field. It was not until then that we realised that we had won.



After the battle, I noticed a device in the Command room that had wiped the memory of the Matoran. I altered the machine to restore there memory, but wiping the memory of Raznor’s take over in the process. This is why Jatil did not believe this story when I told it to him.
We also made sure that the staff would not be used for evil again. We buried it underneath the mining sight and took away all the equipment. Out of sight, out of mind, if you’ll pardon the reference.
We knocked down the barricades sealing in the square, and opened the gate, letting the rest of the Toa Racta into the city. Dorru went with Benu to the Toa Racta. I hoped that Dorru would gain proper training and become a powerful Toa, like I once was.

This concludes my story. I may not have as much time to write in this journal as I have had. A prophecy has just been revealed saying that in the near future, Aroxion and the Makuta Sombrak will attack Racta Major, resulting in a final battle between the Toa and the Sombrak. The prophecy says that it will change life on Racta Magna forever. I have also discovered that I may not live to see that battle. My body is breaking down, and I fear that my life is reaching its end. I do not fear death. But I worry about this prophecy. However, that is for another day. For now, I must leave. I bid you a good night.



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  April 2, 2013
wertman 8 do you want to join the contest i started on the unity inffinity circle group?
Wertman 8
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  March 27, 2013
This is my moc, hope you enjoy! Please go look at it! Im Back! http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/357
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  March 14, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. Hello? Wertz? Anyone here?
sorry, been busy lately, no time to respond to comments.
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  March 14, 2013
Quoting Garrett A. Nice mini-story Wert! Turaga Trokan seems like a good guy to be around. Also, about Raxonax's place in my story... What I was thinking was that he accidentally teleported himself to Mata-Robota (the place where my series takes place) in an event known as the Great Relocation, and after a while of wandering aimlessly, he was found by a troop of Goldfrost's men. He was taken in, and due to Goldfrost not wanting a guy like him as an adversary, he gives him a place in his special operations teams, which work of their own free will to help keep the kingdom running efficiently. (Like say, if there is a crook on the lose and he's in the area in which the crook is in, he might try to catch him) He got assigned to the F-squad: the only other member of which was Ciaros. Also, as for his personality, it is pretty much the same as before, except being around Ciaros gradually mellows him out just a teeny bit. Also, the name F-squad came from the fact that Ciaros'and Raxonax's "friendly bickering" is going to be my main source of humor. (F for funny) Well, if you read all that, here's hoping your brain didn't have a circutry overload or something so you can respond XD.
Sounds like a good idea ;)
  March 13, 2013
Hello? Wertz? Anyone here?
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  March 10, 2013
Nice mini-story Wert! Turaga Trokan seems like a good guy to be around. Also, about Raxonax's place in my story... What I was thinking was that he accidentally teleported himself to Mata-Robota (the place where my series takes place) in an event known as the Great Relocation, and after a while of wandering aimlessly, he was found by a troop of Goldfrost's men. He was taken in, and due to Goldfrost not wanting a guy like him as an adversary, he gives him a place in his special operations teams, which work of their own free will to help keep the kingdom running efficiently. (Like say, if there is a crook on the lose and he's in the area in which the crook is in, he might try to catch him) He got assigned to the F-squad: the only other member of which was Ciaros. Also, as for his personality, it is pretty much the same as before, except being around Ciaros gradually mellows him out just a teeny bit. Also, the name F-squad came from the fact that Ciaros'and Raxonax's "friendly bickering" is going to be my main source of humor. (F for funny) Well, if you read all that, here's hoping your brain didn't have a circutry overload or something so you can respond XD.
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  March 3, 2013
Great story .The final battle sounds epic.
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  March 2, 2013
Sweet episode dude i cant wait untill the final battle.
  March 1, 2013
Radical!
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  March 1, 2013
well this is odd but this is cool!
 
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