THIS IS A CREATION BASED ON A LICENSED THEME (WHICH IS THE HOBBIT) AND THIS CREATION IS ONLY SOMEWHAT RELATED TO THE STORYLINE OF THE HOBBIT.
Bilbo: 3 dwarves down, 10 to go. We are missing Balin, Fili, Kili, Dori, Bifur, Ori, Nori, Oin, Gloin, and Thorin.
Balin: I'm here! I was just doing lookout. Bilbo: This is what we have. 4 raw turkey legs and an apple.
Bofur: You know that Fili would eat anything in the world but apples! Same for me.
Bilbo: Let's get cooking! I will eat that apple.
Bombur: This stove is nice and hot!
Balin: How 'bout I relax and quit lookout for awhile?
What's going on?, Bilbo thought. He was not happy at all when the Warg came and stole their appetite. What is this day, out of the frying pan into the fire.
Dwalin: Thank you very much Mr. Warg! Because of you, we have died of starvation. And because of my crazy brother, we have sensed the Warg. He could've looked out and warned Bilbo since he has good sword skill.
That's a wrap for this angry hobbit! What happens next you ask? My next LotR-themed MOC shall tell!
Your Upset that you didn't do well?
Well some c and c then.
Your Idead is ok but your execution of it is not that good. There is little to no detail it is basically just minifigs on a plate. In the Mocathalon you would have scored a 0 or 1 out of five. (Bigges contest on Mocpages) First your water is higher than you grass. You never do that. Try using other green, brown and dark tan plates to make the land look better. Vary the elavtations. Use lots of plants and also vary their heigh stack three grass pieces. then two then one the two etc. The stone path is ok. Hope this helps and is not ment as a rude comment just trying to give you some pointers. You seem to have the mind lets see you put it in action.
it needs work I me but you put effort forth and thats what counts I could say a lot to you right now trying to help you but in the end it will come with time you will just have to work over the years and gain the xp you need to be able to build extraordinaire creations so just keep at it and you'll keep getting better