Second episode, here we go. It might be of interest that I am using a new camera for this. Tell me what you think.
About this creation
Narrator: Wolfen sighed. He had wandered for three days, hoping to reach a safe establishement, where he could get directions to Golfrost`s palace. Right now though, all he wanted was a place to camp.
Narrator: He spotted a nice rocky area. It seemed safe enough, so he ventured in.
Narrator: He decided to camp there. Eventually he dozed off.
Narrator: When he woke up, there was a blade to his neck. He figured this was the end.
Narrator: He wouldn't go down easily, though.
Narrator: Before long they had hold of him. He could not break free, and he had almost given up hope. Then, it happened.
Narrator: Just then, a being jumped into the fray. Within an instant, he had a sword on the green warrior`s neck.
???: Ha-HA! Sneak attacks for the win!
Narrator: Another figure appeared then. It lifted up a hand and sent the opposing whirling into a rock formation.
???: Indeed.
Narrator: The battle raged on, neither side relenting. Then, a deep voice barked a command.
???: RETREAT!!
Narrator: Instantly they obeyed the command. They moved as though they were afraid of whatever gave the order.
Narrator: It was then they saw the giver of the order: a tall, powerful entity. A feeling of malice emnated from it, and the very ground trembled beneath him.
??? silver/maroon guy: Step away from the wolfhead, big and ugly.
??? evil guy: Ha! You dare insult me? I could have your head for that, you pesky gnat. And I will, too. Your punishment has only been delayed. By the sword I hold in my hand, you WILL perish.
Narrator: Without another word, the looming figure vanished. The air gradually lightened.
Raxonax: Boy, that guy sure is a sore loser. Anyway, first off, I am Raxonax the AWESOME, and this is Ciaros the tag-along.
Ciaros: Yeah, yeah, you`re welcome for saving your metallic hide.
Raxonax: I can do without the sour remarks, thank you. Anyways, back to the dimunitve bloodhound. Who are you, and why were those guys trying to capture you?
Wolfen: Firstly, name`s Wolfen, secondly, I don`t know, and I don`t wanna find out.
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March 23, 2013 |
Woooh! Awesome story! |
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It didn't do away with them at all. If anything, it made Lego be more creative with their normal scifi sets, since they can't copy anything from Star Wars. |
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March 12, 2013 |
Thanks guys!
Quoting Daniel Floyd
Nice story,but why don't you like Star Wars?
Well, I don't nessicarily dislike SW itself (even though I don't watch it or anything, you mightt say I'm neutral towards it), I don't really like the theme because it pretty much did away with typical sci-fi sets. |
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March 11, 2013 |
Interesting.. Not sure about using your house for the background though. :P |
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February 20, 2013 |
Nice story,but why don't you like Star Wars? |
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February 15, 2013 |
Sorry about this Garret, but you'll notice my comment is now above your reply. I had to edit my comment (I had misspelled written). |
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This is good, very well written and well photographed. |
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February 15, 2013 |
Quoting Reaper the Ultimate .
This is good, very well writtne and well photographed.
Thanks Reaper! Episode three is coming tomorrow :D |
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February 10, 2013 |
Quoting Wertman 8
Great ep! It was nice to see Raxonax the AWESOME kick some butt! The new villain looks interesting (the one with the Skrall head) I can't wait to see him. Some of the minion characters looked pretty cool aswell. You should post them, if you ever get the time! I can't wait for the next episode!
Thanks Wert! That villain is actually a friend of mine in real's character, I wanted to put him in my story, so I made my own version. |
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February 10, 2013 |
Great ep! It was nice to see Raxonax the AWESOME kick some butt! The new villain looks interesting (the one with the Skrall head) I can't wait to see him. Some of the minion characters looked pretty cool aswell. You should post them, if you ever get the time! I can't wait for the next episode! |
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February 9, 2013 |
Quoting Timothy Wallace
Awesome story Garrett!
Thanks Tim! |
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I like it |
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February 9, 2013 |
Awesome story Garrett! |
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