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my 3rd log entry
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LOG ENTRY 3 : COMMANDER SMITH LEADER OF THE ELUSIAN FORCES: this is it we are in an alliance with the U.R.S i sent two of my men to kamino to help with the battle there so im here at the safe house....... [static] -feed drop out> unexpeted stop> posible KIA .......




















-feed reboot> log continue
[static] this is smith we are under attack by some unknown person he weilds a light saber and has the ablity to us the force most my men are dead and dont have much time a crate is being sent towrds me and so is the com system i have to make a choice destroy the crate and die or dodge the comsystem but be knocked out by the explosion of it and be captured ....... LOG END


so this is it guys log entry number 3 so you guys make the choice let him die and vote for a new leader or let him live and allow smith to be captured its up to you guys ;)



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kaeleb appleyard
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John Smith
  January 21, 2013
Cool, I'll follow Timmy boy, and capture Smithy
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  January 21, 2013
Quoting David the Fire Ninja Jedi Ok, as you requested, here are my ideas for making your MOCs better. I'll start with what I like. like the size of this build. It allows for a lot to happen. Things I'd change or add and questions: 1. What type of camera do you use? 2. More importantly, it would be nice to have a solid background color like white or black. This can be done with poster-board or just a bunch of pieces of paper next to each other. 3. Cropping photos can help with unnecessary items in the picture(s). 4. Also, getting good lighting is important. 5. With bigger MOCs, more items/details need to be added so it's not so empty. If you don't have enough, go for smaller, more detailed MOCs. I think the main thing for your MOCs now are these things: Clearer photos, better lighting, nicer background, more details if it's a big MOC. I hope this will help you! :D
ok i use my phone as i dont have my own camera yet but im saving up for one and thanks for the tips
 I like it 
  January 21, 2013
Ok, as you requested, here are my ideas for making your MOCs better. I'll start with what I like. like the size of this build. It allows for a lot to happen. Things I'd change or add and questions: 1. What type of camera do you use? 2. More importantly, it would be nice to have a solid background color like white or black. This can be done with poster-board or just a bunch of pieces of paper next to each other. 3. Cropping photos can help with unnecessary items in the picture(s). 4. Also, getting good lighting is important. 5. With bigger MOCs, more items/details need to be added so it's not so empty. If you don't have enough, go for smaller, more detailed MOCs. I think the main thing for your MOCs now are these things: Clearer photos, better lighting, nicer background, more details if it's a big MOC. I hope this will help you! :D
 I made it 
  January 21, 2013
Quoting John Smith Cool, I'll follow Timmy boy, and capture Smithy
ok thats two oh and remeber from here on end waht you guys decide will dictate the whole series
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  January 20, 2013
Quoting Timothy Wallace(B-Day Today) Hmm capture and interrogate him.
ok thats one vote for capture
  January 20, 2013
Hmm capture and interrogate him.
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  January 20, 2013
Quoting Timothy Wallace(B-Day Today) Great MOC Kaeleb!
so whats your vote does he die or live and be captured
 I like it 
  January 20, 2013
Great MOC Kaeleb!
 
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