I like the characters, the woody horse is really funny, the pics are sublime, but, the characters are very talkative, I think that s why I lost interest, it brings the story down to a slow rythm, it does nt seem to move, perhaps if the characters still moved while they talk would be better, more scenery, still, a good comedy, well done!
What could be waiting on the other side? What dangers await our heroes in the coming panels? Why do I keep asking questions like a 1960s Batman TV show announcer? Find out next episode! ~ Chris.
I'm expecting a "hanging" in the intro to the next episode... Unless you mean that you do like simply leaving your readers. Awesome work on this, "vigorous debating in the background" is the best line I've seen this year.