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A Day in the Life of David, an eXtreme TFOL!
This is a story with four characters. David (me, first picture), John (second picture), William (third picture), and Scott (fourth picture). I hope you like it! God Bless!
About this creation
This is my contest entry for the eXtreme Contest!

Just a side note: The black lines on the green element are sharpie. I did not draw them. We got a whole bunch of bricks from a garage sale, and this happened to be one of the bricks in that lot. I wish it didn't have the black lines. I just thought I should clarify that. I would NEVER do such a thing to Legos. :D


David: I wonder when Scott will get here.



John: I don't know. *munches on apple*



William: Here he comes!



Scott: *hums to himself* Do de do dop



Scott: Sorry I'm late guys.
John: *lets down the ladder*



John: *hooks the ladder back up*



William: I'm glad you made it! Here, have an apple!
Scott: Thanks!



--They all sit down and start thinking--
Scott: So... did you think of anything to do yet?
--The others reply-- Nope.



William: I've got an idea! How about we....

They all imagine while the idea unfolds. (so this part doesn't actually happen, it's just their imagination)

William: One...two...three...four...five...

They all hide! Can you spot them? The next three pictures following this one show you where they are hiding.



John: Hello!



Scott: Hehe!



David: What up?

The imagination has ended.

David: Cool idea! I have one as well! How about....

The scene changes to another imagination story.

--There is music--
David: *singing* When you feel down, when you feel up! *singing*



William: *plays the petalboard* (keyboard)



John: *plays the boxdrums* (drums)



Scott: *plays the electric oar* (electric guitar)

The imagination scene has ended.

John: That would work...except...we don't have any instruments. How about....

The scene changes to yet another imagination story.

John: *yelling* Oh YEAH!



William: WOW!

--There was a splash, and then a groan--



John: *groaning* That hurt...



Scott: Yeah, we all know how that's going to work. I have an idea. Let's just chill.



--They all laugh--
--After they finished laughing, they all thought of the same thing--


The scene changes because they actually perform this one. Sword battle!

Here's how the game works. With plastic/foam swords, two teams verse each other.
If you get hit with a sword or an apple grenade, you must stay in the spot you were hit for two minutes. If both team members get hit within the two minutes that one is out, the other team wins.
There are three challenges.
1. Boat battle, whoever starts to lose must jump off their ship onto the land.
2. Land battle, whoever starts to lose lets the other team head for the tree fort for 3 seconds.
3. Land/fort battle, this is where the game ends, if one person gets hit and his partner gets hit within two minutes after the first person, the other team wins.

--John and Scott are one team, David and William are the other team--
*Swords swinging*



--David and William start to lose the boat battle, so David jumps off the boat--
David: Woah!
William: Get back John, I'm quick with the sword!
John: Not as fast as I am! HIEEA!



--Land Battle--
David: Now that I can swing, prepare to meet your match!
Scott: Uh Oh!
--Scott and John start losing the Land battle, so they let the other team run for the tree fort for 3 seconds.--



David: Go go go!
William: I got it!



Scott: Oh no you don't!
David: I can't make it up the fort!
John: That's right!
Scott: *throws knife at the rope that supports the ladder*



*Swords clashing*



-*- A nice shot of Scott and his knife-throwing skills -*-



-- The two sides continue to battle. William makes it up the tree fort where there are the grenade apples. --



William: *gets ready to throw apple grenade at William*



-- William missed because Scott quickly runs toward David --
David: Oh no! Help!
John: we have you!
Scott: *performs an evil laugh* Muah ha ha ha!

--William gets ready to throw an apple grenade--



--ZONK!--

--William hits John with an apple grenade!--
John: Whoops!
David: Haha! *He quickly jumps back into action and starts to chase Scott*




Scott: Try to catch me!
David: That I will!

--Scott runs toward the tree fort, hopping onto the ladder, dodging apple grenades at the same time--
William: Hold still!



Scott: *Climbs ladder, swishing his sword to deflect the incoming apples*
David: Get him!
William: I'm trying!



Scott: *reaches the top, still wildly flashing his sword* Ha ha!
William: *backs up* Now you're doomed! *gets the last apple grenade ready*


--William throws the apple, but Scott ducked out of the way and charges William, taking William out of the game for the time being--

William: Oh no!
David: I'll get him!
Scott: Ha ha ha! *he swings down the rope to the ground*


--David follows close behind--



--By this time, two minutes were up, so John started to run towards David--

Scott: *stops running away from David, instead, he turns and faces him*
David: Uh Oh! AHHH!


--David tries to run away, but his bush-jumping skills weren't as good as he had hoped--

John: We have you now!


Scott: *jumps through the bushes*

--Apparently, Scott has more jumping skills. John and Scott overpowered David, leaving them the victors.--


The scene changes. Two minutes later...

John: That was a great game!
Scott: It sure was!
--David and William laugh--
David: Yes, it was fun! You know what I want to do now?



--They all start singing-- If you're down, or your up, if you win or lose!

THE END

Thanks for looking! Please rate and then comment! God Bless!



Comments

 I made it 
  January 26, 2013
Quoting sinan bitižik Nice design..
Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 26, 2013
Nice design..
 I like it 
  January 26, 2013
Nice design..
 I made it 
  January 23, 2013
Thanks! Yeah, I might try to wash it again, but Sharpie isn't friendly for washing O_o
 I like it 
  January 23, 2013
it s too bad for your damaged plates as they distract a little from the story, it keeps drawing attention to the lines there, can t you wash it with soap or something? on a brighter note, you re really born for stories you know that?, wow, imagination at work here, all the things you ve done on that scene, all these pics and text, not much people do that much, except maybe me, lol, I can t wait until you hatch another, make sure to let me know!
 I made it 
  January 17, 2013
Quoting Michael Kringe Haha, funny story-MOC! Good idea to use a blue paper for the lake!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 17, 2013
Haha, funny story-MOC! Good idea to use a blue paper for the lake!
 I made it 
  January 16, 2013
Quoting Builder Allan Very nice story! I like that platform up in the tree and the crytals for water too :-)
Thanks! Yeah, I like that part too!
 I like it 
  January 16, 2013
Very nice story! I like that platform up in the tree and the crytals for water too :-)
 I made it 
  January 14, 2013
Quoting M2com McKinney This is a great build! Love the use of the crystals for the water. The tree looks pretty nice as well. The next thing I would say would be to add more terrain details, make it all little more interesting in that department because you basically got everything else nailed down! Cool build!
More terrain details, got it! Unfortunately I don't have a lot of foliage, but I totally agree with you! Maybe I could have added some rocks and such. Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2013
This is a great build! Love the use of the crystals for the water. The tree looks pretty nice as well. The next thing I would say would be to add more terrain details, make it all little more interesting in that department because you basically got everything else nailed down! Cool build!
 I made it 
  January 12, 2013
Thanks everyone!
 I like it 
  January 12, 2013
Cool David!!! I like the sword fight game.
 I like it 
  January 12, 2013
That's a nice story! You've already got many of those Chima Crystals! I like it 5/5 :)
 I like it 
  January 11, 2013
Awesome!
 I like it 
  January 11, 2013
Great entry!I like the part when they're thinking of things to do :)
 
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